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Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter!!
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Motion passed...I third the motion!!! Very nice story...thank you for posting and sharing the talent!
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Please feel better!! Hugs!
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Niceeeeee...bring on the party!!
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Okkkkkkk...so this was an excellent chapter...now that we acknowledge that fact...let's get to putting things in order...1st, Topher should have been a dubious suspect when he gave Kyle the cold shoulder at his doorstep, so as soon as he showed up in Boston with the same 'snitty' attitude, Blu should have drop-kicked his butt...2nd, Chapstick should have been left with one broken arm and a missing hand...3rd Rudy and Penny, the familial dotards, should be locked away with the dotard in the White house and his cronies..NO one would miss that group!! But..I like the "leave 'em to Nan" plan much better...
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Oh noooooooooooo...ok...so I'm just going to sit right here until the next chapter!!!!This was the absolute best!!! Poor confused Adam, poor heartbroken Ian, poor unsure Paddy...what are we going to do!!!?? They need to step back and put all the pieces together and stop with all the ASS-U-ME-ing, right NOW!!! Some unity please! Fantastic chapter...
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Gotta love Sam's dad...he's hilarious and to the point!! Very nice chapter...can't wait to see how the "move in with me" convo is going to go and who's going to get up the nerve to ask!
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Very nice informative chapter...we got a glimpse into Jake's past, K's insecurities, Josh's wicked sense of humor, K's insecurities, Jake's talents, K's ahmm..insecurities... I think that K will definitely come out of his shell and when he does, Jake will be there waiting to reap the full benefits !!!...No rush, of course...but...MORE, MORE, MORE....oops...pleaseeeee!!
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Home for the Holiday's or Not!
Onim commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Home for the Holiday's or Not!
Awwwwwwww...yes, the guys have moved into "love you" status!!! Now I worry that Blu...might have to catch a charge for burying Chapstick in concrete in the basement, because I sense that he's going to be the cause of major hemorrhoids!! Kyle just needs to heed Blu's warnings and avoid him at all costs...or maybe dispose of him..hehehe...just saying..... Anywayyyyyyy...absolutely LOVE the chapter!! -
Wonderful!!! Worth the wait, definitely! Hmmm...Koji-Andre???? Maybe.. Thank you for the update...very nice chapter!!
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I just began reading this, and it's a keeper...without a doubt!!! Very nice first chapter!
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Beautiful...love the way Sam HANDLED Richard, who thought he was in charge of something...HA! Veryyyyyy nice!!
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Excellent chapter....just walk softly around the little brother with the big brother attitude, and Brad's dates will be safe...maybe.. You gotta love a brother that means what he says...and backs it up!!!
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OMG!!! What can I say....simply FAB-U-LOUSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!! This was so touching, sexy, sensual, and hilarious all wrapped into one little chapter...WOW!!! Oh my...that crowd on your lawn, is us just waiting for the next chapter Ian and Adam, another stunning couple, starring Paddy, as the resident adult...
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Sam, Sam, Sam....bad decisions lead to bad situations...leading to awfully bad endings!!! Get a grip, give Brian his due and trust him!! Nice chapter Obi...but please don't tempt me into having to "Common Sense" slap poor Sam!!! Anywayyyyyy...this just keeps getting better and better!
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Very nice, grab the heart kind of story...Thank you for sharing!!!
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Sam's right...this is too cute...but if they keep dancing around each other and not WITH each other...they're going to allow someone to cut in on the dance!!Comon guys get it together before Chipmunk starts chipping away or Davis falls in lust.....Nice, hilarious chapter!!
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Awwww...Nan and Kaleb are keeping me in LOL mode!!!! Ab-so-frikin-lutely ADORABLE!! Now, I see the guys are kinda looking at each other as.. PO-tentials! Hopefully, Kaleb will understand that he has a refuge now, in case he has to escape the "parent trap"!!! Very good, guys...fantastic chapter...
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Well, I guess I can unclench my fists and stop trying to get through this screen after good ole dad!! I'd have to agree with everyone else, "INTENSE"...satisfyingly intense!!
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There are those dreaded 'rules', but remember the "dread" in Jake's stomach concerning Peyton...hmmm...could get very interesting, for o sure!! Another good one...tbc!!
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This will be good...once we prosecute and jail the father, in a cell with Big Bubba, to have 'wonderful' (no gel) nocturnal visits from the various haters of child abuse..should be 'lots of fun' for him!! Vengeful much?? Now Luke can take Daniel home....Very nice start!
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Oh geezz...hope Brian puts his f-ex in his place, before Sam has to go into "protect and serve" mode...protecting his relationship by serving up a butt kicking to Richard!!
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Sweeeeeeeeet chapter!!! What's 6 chapters of drought, when you bring on the tsunami in this chapter...!! Clara gets the job done and deserves a thank you dinner.. Very nice story...a banging chapter!
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Awesommmmmmeee!! Now we just have to figure out how to have Aaron and Max quit that police force and join the Sands Foundation!! What a great addition to the family...huh??? Well...just thinking out loud..just a 'slight' suggestion..just a 'tiny little' wish... ok...I'm in the corner again...
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Awww...all caught up...veryyyy nice chapter...have a feeling that Kaleb is going to need their newly acquired, adoptive family very soon..., but then again, at least James won't let him be hurt..or, we could just unleash "The Cracken"(Nan) on those imitation of parents...just a thought okkkkkkk then...this good guys..really good!!
