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R. Eric, this was a great chapter in a really good series. I can imagine you chuckling (and possibly some tears in your eyes, too) as you wrote this chapter. Now, we need for Seth and Eric and their two boys from the cruise ship (in North Meets South: Worlds Collide) to show up, and for Rain Stevens and Eric Mitchell show up from Luckiest Man in the World. I have enjoyed reading all of your stories, and hope you finish Luckiest Man in the World, eventually. Thank you for discovering your gift of writing. I'm eagerly looking forward to a lot more of Bluebloods 3 and Cinderfella 3, when you start that one.

I look forward to the nest 20 to forty chapters of this story, or more.

I hope there is security for Betty and Gabriella, as well. And how long will Devon have to take his serum?

Yes, they are classics. Fortunately, when my third college roommate told me to read the books, he also warned me that, "It will take 50-100 pages for you to get fully into it because there is so much descriptive details which has to be set up for best understanding." He had never steered me wrong on reading before, so I took the books on vacation with me and while the adults were visiting on things which did not interest me, I read. I loved them! I have to agree with Arpeggio, also, about the Anne McCaffrey books as well, especially the Dragonriders of Pern series, and the Talents/Tower and Hive series, as well as singletons such as "No One Noticed the Cat." Alan E. Nourse, Andrew Norton, and Robert Heinlein also influenced me a lot.

Another great chapter! Thanks, R. Eric.

R. Eric, another good chapter. Please continue this story for another 25 to 100 chapters (or more). I am enjoying how Yannick, Ryan, Zek and Gabe, and Garth and Bent are fitting into the story, too. I haven't noticed Hannah or Maria in the story lately. Are they still employed at the manor? I especially miss seeing Hannah. I'm a fan of Doris and Hannah! But if there's a reason Hannah and Maria aren't in the story, so be it. You know what your plans are, and I don't.

R. Eric, once again a fine story. I hope you are going to switch back and forth between this story and your others-- Cinderfella 2, North Meets South, Blueblood, and Superpowerball that are still in progress. I enjoy all of your writing so far, and hope every night for a new chapter of a story you're writing. I notice that Polymorphic Light Eruption is a real condition, manifesting itself in multiple ways. I do not recall hearing about PLME before. And reading a New Zealand website about it, I notice that someone with the condition is advised to wear SPF 40+ under their clothes, and at least SPF 50+ on exposed areas! Further, UVA rays most often set it off, but in some people it can be set of by UVB or even visible light! Makes for a very convenient explanation for the purposes of your story and I understand it so far. I look forward to seeing much additional development for this story. Thanks for writing it!

R. Eric, this is a good story that I really enjoy reading. I hope it continues on for a very long time.

R. Eric, I am greatly enjoying all of your stories on GA, especially that two you are now concentrating on. I can easily see Cinderfella 2 going to 60 or more chapters (and I hope it is more). I don't know if it is intentionally written that way or not, but I loved the double meaning possibilities of the following statement in Chapter 41: “If Erik had not told him not to come while we were intimate, he probably would have.” Cinderfella 2 is a worthy expansion of the first story. I hope you are writing on GA for a long time. Paul

Great story, R. Eric. I look forward to seeing what else is on the road ahead-- not just in this story, but the others also which are still listed as "In Process." David and Sasha on a date-- I was surprised at that, However, I am sure it will be interesting, whatever happens. Will David date Tasha, when she arrives in the US?

I saw this almost immediately after it was posted. I look forward to seeing it it really IS Deena, or a red herring influenced by Deena. I like your stories, and looking forward to seeing all not yet complete to be completed. I hope you have lots more stories percolating toward completion in your mind. Should you ever do a science fiction/alternate worlds story, I would like to see a crossover of the Cinderfella universe and the Suerpowerball universe. Thanks for you writing!

I have enjoyed this story and all of your stories. I hope you soon finish the two stories still listed as "In Process" AND do a Cinderfella honeymoon sequel! Have a great month! From Paul

I have been reading this story with interest when new postings appear. I'm glad to see Kye is finally realizing how loved he is, by Tareth, Ash, Liam, Roland, and others. He has earned that love and respect. Sometimes the mental chains that bind are worse than physical chains. Thank you for writing and posting this story.

Well done, Cynus. I love this story.

Thank you for posting this. I give you a heartfelt "I agree."

Ah, what humor and passion, care and unwitting love. Good going, Tim. Will there be any other A/I stories, with these two or some other A/I characters?

Good going, Cynus! I enjoy word play such as this. I hope you continue to have a sense of humor show up in many of your stories.

Liked Solitary Cat, loved Balance. Both caused me to ponder from more than one angle. I rarely do chapter reviews, but had to do so this time.

Good work, Parker, on both poems.

Cynus, I liked this when you posted it in the Navigator related Forum and I like it now. But I do have a question─Why did it only show up on my left side panel of GA, instead of also showing up on the front page newest stories listing? I, too would like to hear this one sung, and also the song from the first chapter of this series. Hopefully, you will soon find someone interested in writing the music for these, and able to sing the songs as well.

Great chapter! I predict Deogee might show up again, or at least be discussed. ​Considering the events of Chapter 21, I might be wrong on my theories of why Ryle would have to go into the hospital. I will compose my thoughts and try to message you in a day or two. How many masters has Ryle had?

Well Done, Cynus. Is it within the rules for one story to spark a related flash story?

I have also missed the chapters of this story. I think I know why Ryle must go in the hospital, but I don't like it-- IF it is what I think. What about the wedding of Ryle's sister? Did we miss that in the aftermath of Gabe being attacked? I hope to see more chapters soon. Good job, even though some of the chapters are tough reads. But hey, sometimes life is tough....

Wow, Cynus-- I look forward to seeing what happens next. I don't know if you decided to stage this before Halloween or now, but the timing is good, as Parker Owens suggested an another review of this chapter. While I can guess what might happen next, I will refrain at this time, because I am sure you will keep surprising us. Sometimes I wish you had twelve hours a day to write. Do you ever look back at older stories on GA to see if more reviews are written, or do the authors get a notice from GA every time a review of a chapter is added?

Cynus, I'm glad to see you doing historical fiction. While I tend to (personally) prefer contemporary or futurist fiction, I like well written historical fiction, and this certainly fills that bill. Thank you for writing this and the other stories you post on Gay Authors. I don't always comment, but I am enjoying each and every one.