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I don't think Hank is cut out to have an equal relationship with the strong mature Chase but he might've been willing to try if another can of worms weren't squirming around in his life. Why did Hank abruptly dump the new squeeze? Is he bequeathing friends to Chase? If so, I don't think it's because of depression. Why is he making things right without restoring the relationship? And, why did he quit running?

Theo remains the elephant in the room (even next to the outsized Grampa,) and believe me I've been irritated with you for dragging that out. I've even let a few chapters accumulate hoping to see progress on that front. And now is no time to add that drama/trauma to Jett's life. So just imagine this stream of swearing. Thanks for a great story (though.) btw, Gramps has some love. The way he gives it is gonna hurt. Ain't it?

Ok, fanks I guess. But—fuck no to this ‘the end’ bollocks.

It's about time that I thank you for this intriguing story--so thank you so very much.

I just hit the 'Like' button when I really wanted to press 'Angry.' I self-censored because I thought that when I got down here to the comments I'd find a bunch of nicer-than-me folks being too damned understanding. But, of course, your story required, and exemplifies, a deeply empathetic understanding. At least I have the satisfaction of imagining a short life for Jim in prison. Most folks, including me, attribute Sarah's distance to her sick attachment to an abuser, but maybe it's shame and guilt? Naw--I scrolled back up and saw that her silence started after the guys pressed charges (which a prosecutor would have done anyway.) Finally, forgive me for being obtuse, but have the guys forgone sex for over a year? I could understand if rape were involved, but this indicates to me that they have some deep resentment to one another--or at least Elliot towards Grant. Great story--evokes strong emotions.

Reminds me of my religious days, and C.S. Lewis' 'Stabs of Joy.' We're weird creatures.

Your comment surprised me. I'm jealous that it hadn't occurred to me. Jay could end up well pissed, even feeling betrayed. On-the-other-hand, professional and impersonal people bound by attorney-client privilege and/or non-disclosure contracts seem to be invaluable resources. And to Nephylim, it's a dick move on my part to point out an error, but "over exaggeration" is a grating redundancy--especially since I haven't praised or thanked you for this beautiful story with it's awesome character development. I'm enthralled. Yes--I know that I've only spoken up so I could bitch. If only you could develop MY character.

I'm over David. What a nonce. Here's hoping that Charlie and Parker end up down the aisle. David just needs some mirrors, and a deteriorating dildo.

I love these four. For different reasons. Maybe I've wanted to murder people and get away with it, or bless those who had?! But not for mercenary reasons. Spector and Des will save one another, I think, as the men have done. That's another thing--I'm really unforgiving. How did I forgive Desmond's past. Have you put something into my drink?

If you remember, I'm not big on redemption and forgiveness. So here's hoping for bloody, remorseless, joyful revenge. (and waiting for the next chapter makes me even worse/better.)

I stole your line--"Forgive himself for a sin he never committed." Other than that, if I have any influence, I like to see villains suffer horrid, grisly deaths, or at least life-long misery.

I'm not at all into forgiveness. Noah should maintain a very distant 'handshake' relationship with his mother.

This is an exceptional story. Put it in the mystery/romance genre. The plotting kept me on edge waiting for the next chapter--and I hate reading serials. I usually search for 'complete.' The author had me identifying with the protagonist more emotionally than I thought possible. Not kidding. Sitting in my recliner cussing at the computer, and at the author when things weren't going my way. That is a rare event for me, and I'm curious to see further reviews. When I thought about writing my first review I figured the strong character identification would be my main point, but the insight that the author has into the human condition (that's what we called it in English Comp 101 in 1970) just worked me over; pulled my strings; pissed me off; and finally converted me. Don't read it too fast. You'll feel empty when you have to leave their world.

Thank you. As eagerly as I waited for this last chapter, I'm now feeling the loss that comes when I reach the end of any great film or novel. Your powers are great. No bull. These characters had me totally involved in their world.

Well I've done a complete 180 since I last commented. I've gone from mean, vindictive, resentful, self-righteous to sappy, grateful, love-filled heart. At least in terms of this great story. I'm glad I don't know you on a personal level. You could be a very bad influence.