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Thank you Oxala. The love between the couple definitely struck a chord with Behrman. I don't think he would have acted otherwise. And it was wonderful it inspired his masterpiece yeah... I'm glad that it stood out for you too. I really appreciate you reading this story and leaving a review.. Thanks again..

What an abrubt end to a beautiful morning. The teasing parents and so in love boys. That was a funny and well done scene. I can't even imagine the turmoil this will bring Casey. No matter how rotten he was it will be hard to not feel anything about his death. Poor Casey. At least he has loving people surrounding him, and James.. Hope we don't wait too long for the next chapter... Thanks Rusty..

Gary, I really appreciate you showing us that Kellar is facing his newly found wolfy side without falling into a panic. That is admirable. He has a clear head and he is processing this all logically and making decisions rationally. This tells me a lot of the boy before his shift. He had to rely on himself most likely, judging solely by the foster brother. That kind of independence and sure thinking will do him well. BUT.... Its also kind of a tease. There are so many questions and so much I want to know that it's impossible to wait for the next chapter.. You're setting this up so very well....

I love this. It is good at times to be reminded that there is a lighter, brighter side. That people could be moved to be selfless inspite of their circumstances. I'm moved that you saw it this way. I appreciate your thoughtful review Dugh. Thank you for reading this and for your support.

It's funny how quickly Dante picked up on Viktor and Nobu, and how Viko tried unsuccessfully to downplay it. Makes me agree with Dante's uncle that he has a natural knack for this business. It seems our Dante is more mature than we think, and he doesn't seem to be held down by the obligation of carrying on as successor as his counterparts are held to. To be able to think that clearly about his future, knowing that he doesn't want the life and having his uncle agree, is amazing. Nice growth and development.. Ironically it's his association with the same criminals accepting him into a brotherhood which gave him the most perspective. Proud of him. And now we know he will do anything for his friends, including giving them that much needed hour.. Nobu and Viktor Made good use of their time. I loved how equally patient and tender and curious they were with each other. The image of the serpent/dragon, as Viktor described was...well... Yeah! Great chapter Cynus..

David really needs to meditate again.. He needs clarity and Alex is kinda sucking the energy out of him...literally. He said it too, himself.. I'm wondering how far Alex will go before getting a hint of what's really up. Uncle John!!!! David knows Twoey, so of course he knows something is off. Twoey doesn't think there's a chance with 'straight' David, so he's throwing in with the boy who does seem to want him. It's self preservation. The alternative is pining away for David or settling for those awesome kisses. Not good for Twoey. Meanwhile, Erik is being so manipulative. Not stopping to say hi to David? Please that's just the start of keeping him away from his friends. He's making statements that could be just this side of threatening, being a little physical. Then he's following it with 'oh Twoey never change, I love you so much, I just want to be the best boyfriend ever'. Classic abuser behavior. Good for Twoey calling him on the babe thing, which imo is just another way of Erik keeping him in check. I could be wrong, but this is Erik, and he's not right for Twoey...

Baker made that whole scene. I really hope they show that boy some love. That was most enjoyable and laugh out loud funny and realistic too. Finally the guys are out to their friends. Maybe not how they planned but no harm no foul and it was kinda time.. Cory admits to being in love with Rain. Sweet. It was interesting to know what he was thinking in the middle of Baker's meltdown. And even if their friends did butt in, imo, they would still end up here. Cory needs to stop second guessing himself. I think though, Teague should dial it back a bit. Even though Efrain is totally in love with Cory, some part of him has not caught up yet and he needs to come into admitting to it on his own. The first person he might want to tell is Cory so hey, waiting is cool. Loved this.. Thanks Dayne!

Does Indie even realise the effect Preston is having on him? Does Preston even? Totally chill for the presentation, without even really trying... I like.. Also like that he's wearing the gag bracelet still... Also love the brain stroke as a turn on.. Some people totally overlook that.. Very nicely done..

Dammit Josh! I can't shake him hard enough. But we see what he chooses not to. So frustrating. Sooo, who took Galen? Why? You bring us this wonderful long awaited chapter only to leave us with a cliffie.... Hurry please? It was a great chapter Val.. Btw, Alannah and Liam..finally!

Ah yes, karma! But Jason has been beating himself up enough, so I don't need to. Thing is he seemed to have learnt his lesson long before Luc reciprocated in kind, and hasn't cheated since Pierre. No matter what though no one deserves to find out they're not the only quite that way. I actually still felt badly for him. Now comes the time when he has to redeem himself and earn the trust of his friends if they're accepting. Pierre especially. Interesting that he's missing Corey still... Hmm Lit? There was nice character development too. I'm am looking forward to the next!

I'm happy I was able to convey the love this couple had for each other. Behrman allowed himself to be moved by that, so Gertie waiting with open arms would be perfect.. Thanks for reading Lit, and for leaving such a nice review..

I hope she is too, and that she's proud. Maybe it made up for whatever it is he felt he failed at. I know Johnsy and Sue won't likely forget him either.. Thank you so much for reading my little story Tim, and for leaving a review.

Delicious..lol. That's awesome. Thank you SkinnyD. I actually love your take on what Behrman's true masterpiece is. I so appreciate you taking the time to read this..

Aw, Gary. Thank you for this review. To think I wasn't going to post it because I wrote a messy twist at first. I'm so happy that this little story worked for you the way it did. Thanks again for reading and for your support.

I'm glad that Johnsy and Sue were so clear. I think that it was that devotion which made Behrman determined to help.. Thanks so much tim, for reading this and for your support.. xo

I'm happy you like it and that the couple's love stood out for you. I wanted to try making Behrman human so I'm glad I may have succeeded. Even happier I came up with a slightly better ending. Thank you AC for your help and encouraging support..

I think maybe he didn't even know he had it in him. I'd like to believe their love won him over too... Thank you for reading this and leaving a review Puppi!

Oh my god! She ironed the bedsheets.. I was fixated on that because I hate ironing and my mind went off on a tangent about how crazy that was.. I mean they're only going to get rumpled again.... Anyway focus.... That was lovely and sweet and oh, so wonderful. Their lovemaking could not be anything but, and you portrayed that so beautifully. These two clearly belong together. I loved that Peter has no qualms about Patrick's ESP. He shouldn't though, cause look where they are now. I like two thoughts one soul. That's so much better to describe Peter and Patrick. Loved it Tim.. Thanks much..

So maybe I looked up the meaning of underwater dreams because I was a lot less calm than David. Normal right? I know there's more to the story. I'm guessing or hoping rather, that the awesome-twosome in NY handled Burch! But what a dilemma for David. I can't imagine being in his shoes right now even as an adult.. It will be interesting to see how he comes to a decision. It's good thing that there's no practical, because I think Matty would be an excellent SexEd teacher. He was so sweet with Chuck, I'm kinda hoping he'll keep him now. Whatever happens Chuck is going to be well prepared when his world opens up.. Poor Twoey... Loved the chapter SkinnyD...

Not condoning violence, but I think the brothers needed that fight. I loved that they cleared the air. Now it's all in the open, including Dimitry. Its so clear that Vladi was still trying to please his father by making sure Viktor was the opposite of him. Sad, he had to but right there is proof that he really is a good son. Inspite of what he says, his love for his father is alive and well. I still think his father's disappointment stems from the Russian alliance, but I could be wrong. At least now there seems to be a way where they could all work together productively and bring down Daisuke. It helps that Masahiro has his doubts now and will be keeping closer watch. I would not want to be on the wrong end of that guy. I just hope it won't be too late for Alexi. Great chapter Cynus and I'm all caught up now.. Hopefully I never fall so far behind again..

“You've got to see a doctor about that cough Johnsy, it's getting worse.” “You worry too much. It's the change in weather.” Johnsy looked at her lover, pausing for a minute from packing up their work. She knew it was more than the change in weather, but it was pointless to argue right now. She turned back to wrapping the paints on the table. “Sue, love, I'll call the doctor if there's a need. Right now there's no need.” The two silently finished up and rolled their cart three blocks t

Just my attempts at the prompts that grab my attention.

Nobu letting himself be vulnerable by admitting how scared he is and then Viktor doing the same, Finally! Been waiting for this. But Vladi is on his way over to the house! How will he react to these new developments? Oh, wait.. I'm about to find out..

A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU CARLOS!! :wizard: May your every wish come true, and I Hope this is the best one yet.

I can't imagine that there are only 5 weeks to go. It feels like so much needs to happen that it will take longer to sort it out. I guess once that glass shatters, or in this case the wallpaper is pulled free things will go at a pace.. David's parents utterly failed him. He never had a mother and his father is still with his head up his a$$.. Now that David's dreams are starting to tell him the story of his missing memories, he's going to need someone. I really don't think Dad is capable of being that person. True, we don't know what he's up to in the background, but I doubt it's much. Wallowing in regrets doesn't held David. I hope David seeks the Doc or Ginny out in an effort to maybe make sense of some of the things going on. At least Aunt Sarah is there.. And Twoey is headed for his own awakening. I wonder if he will stand up to Erik, and whether he will do it now before it becomes more than a shove. I'm surprised Ginny didn't get a read on Erik like she did on David right from the start.. Randy is a great observer. He needs to be a good friend. I get he won't tell the others since he's fairly new in the group, but I'm hoping he will confide or talk to Alex. What ever happens, he's right. None of this is going to be pretty..