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Oh thank goodness. I thought Kraig's dad was going to be a problem. I like how protective Deke is, but realise too that he can't mess with mom, Alpha or not.. I'm fascinated by Kraig's markings, trying to picture him in my mind's eye as I read. And now with the mention of two souls, I'm more curious as to what went down in that lab. Obviously it went horribly wrong..

Oh, I so want to focus on the unspoken feelings between Kellar and Tobyn. Instead I find my self drawn to all the other details that make this story. It just draws me further into the story. We learn more of how Kellar uses his gift and I feel sad, but admire him for figuring it out on his own. The fact that Tobyn and his wolf are feeling better after Kellar treated them is good, yet I'm worried by Adelin's symptoms. Is she too far gone? I mean translucent? Are there more like her? No pressure Kellar. Fendral knows things I'm betting, but how to convince him to return to his human form, and why hasn't he passed yet, if he's only supposed to last a year or so. Is he waiting for Kellar? Does he even know who Kellar is? I am ever more curious as to how the malaise started and is spread. Why did Tobyn look at Kellar funny when he mentioned Tilly being Tobyn's gf.. There's more to the story? We know that Tobyn won't act on his feelings because he's dedicated to the pack and he's still trying to work out why he's feeling that way toward Kellar. Kellar definitely won't want to lose this new found friendship, possible inclusion in a pack of his kind by crashing their relationship. So we're left with watching them keep those feelings at bay while they build a friendship and get to know each other. And we get to know their world too.. So amazingly well done my friend.. I enjoy every chapter..

Loved these Parker. So visually perfect, my heart sighed in content.

Very nice Cynus. A fitting end and I think you went out on a great note. The ritual to include Vladi as a brother was touching, though more of a formality at this point. I don't think that they would have let each other down in any way after what they'd been through. The idea that they're bearing their souls to each other, naked in the bathhouse, is just poetic. It really implies that there's nothing left to hide between them. Will Dante really take Nobu up on that offer to watch? I didn't think that Viktor was such a show off. I really enjoyed this series Cynus. You did great! I look forward to what's next from you.

That was a great chapter. I remember when I wanted to hurt Indiana. Now, not so much. Seeing how he lost himself and how Preston is bringing him back was just so.... Yeah, Indiana definitely grew on me while I wasn't paying attention. Love how they are all side stepping the 'love' feels. Oblivious to themselves and apparent to each other. That whole exchange in the mall was absolutely delightful. I had to keep checking my grinning. So real the personalities and interaction. But that's always. Btw, I think Cory has such a good read on Indie. He notices things. Maybe they could end up being real friends if they let themselves. Great chapter Dayne... Thank you!

Geez Denise... Jason is still reeling from that emotional conversation.. How is this one going to go. I wonder if he'd be so brave and listen to Paul. End it now, or let Denise dictate his life further. If he wants anything with Shane at all, he has to to be free of Denise and be honest about who he is. I imagine that his father, would be less proud of the fact that he strung the girl along pretending to be what he's not.. If Shane is that important you take the risk, even not knowing how Shane really feels.. There's so much other baggage with other people too though...

We should all have that friend who listens and can talk us back from the ledge. Things left as they were could have possibly been blown out of proportion, but Bubba to the rescue. That was a great talk, giving him perspective without making Ryan feel pressured one way or the other, and allowing him to hear the questions he already knew the answers to. So happy the guys are back on track.. If that was the biggest hurdle, they got it from here. Love the connectedness and support with all those men.. It's not something I often see..

OMG Alex's mom is a bit much.. I like Randy.. Great talk.. I love that he and I seem to be on the same page about Twoey. Answers from Syracruse seems so far still.. I love that David opened up to him. It was far more than I was expecting.. I was not thinking that David would be so forthcoming. We all know that subconsciously David knew he wasn't quite straight. I am supposing that with the dreams, he's breaking mentally and it's manifesting as his headpains. While saying he can't be gay, some part of him knows that he is hence the kiss, and the emotional break of knowing for sure, brings the tremors. This boy is going to explode. But we still see him trying to order everything. Twoey, Alex, Doc.. Trying to make it neat according to his plans. It may not work out that way and then what? Is this what Danny warned him about? His world imploding? Impatiently waiting for what's next. Great chapter SkinnyD...

Oh noes... That was terrible, but I think it was an unfortunate, knee jerk, horrible reaction. Combined with what he knew or thought about Thomas, his jealousy, there was just no way that was going to go well. And now the consequences.

Gary this was just so beautiful. I can't even explain how moved I am by this so I won't try.. I loved it. Great job..

A really beautiful opening Skinny D. You paint a very seductive view of their vacation. I hope that Toph isn't himself getting seduced by the beauty of the sunsets and colors and by the attentive and charming Gary. I want to think that Gary is straight up and that Toph made a good choice. Toph made all these strides, came to a much better understanding and acceptance of himself and he grew up and is managing his life on his terms. If it falls down around him I hope it won't take him down. I really hope it's not all for nothing. Gary is being the perfect boyfriend. Says the right things, and puts everything into perfect perspective for Toph. All of this isn't bad, it just is unsettling. I suppose Toph's family could be making the same changes Toph is. It's harder to believe it because we don't see it. It is possible. Maybe I'm too cynical.

So in the news last week, this teenaged boy killed his 15yr old gf because she didn't want to skip class with him. Let's hope we won't be reading about anything like that where Twoey is concerned. Or David. Cause he's right in the middle of that. Erik is hurting Twoey and Twoey is none the wiser. He's aware that Erik was rough but that translates into Erik wanting him so badly. Everything else is protectiveness and attention... I really want to know Erik's story though. Is he simply like this? Is this what he's seen? Is this what's been done to him? As for David and Gary, that's some serious stuff so yeah, No. More. Questions. Even though there are so many that need answering. Finally David is heading back to the couch. He'd better not try to dodge that. It always amazes me that David doesn't just notice a guy. His view is always so detailed. Silly boy. We are getting closer to things breaking down and getting loose. I want to get there but yet...

I really hope the story will take off. Actually I think you must tell it now. The four poems individually wrap you with emotion and are very clear but together they speak volumes. Really great tim.

Parker this was so good.. These guys are very endearing. I loved how Tomas had to explicitly deconstruct what made a date, only for him to conclude that he was indeed on a date. He did make me laugh. It was a wonderful continuation. Very well done...

Russ is so sweet, and in touch with how his sister may be feeling. A valid concern too. I'm glad that he spoke up and stayed his mischievous brother for now. It may at least give Tor a fighting chance for lightening to strike... In the best way of course.. Hopefully we will get to see him at Christmas. They do have such a short time, and Tor seems like a really nice guy. It was enjoyable having all of the siblings and their others hanging out, having fun and interacting with each other. A great observation from Russ about Chris. I wonder if Chris is aware of how the rest of the group values him. Evan and Russ 'discussing' dancing was priceless. Russ and Jacob are just.... Well, awesome.. Nice chapter Tim..

Now see, at the point he finds out Mike went home is when he should have followed suit. Or even after the balcony scene when things got even more intense. Definitely no more drinks and no twister... Even if David thought that Mike was previously being neglectful, that proved to be skewed at the very least. Mike seemed like he was trying, so this one is on David.. I'm anxious for them... I have yet to make up my mind as to whether Vicky is a good friend or not.. So yes, I've caught up and I'm looking forward to more..

Aw, Jackson...he let himself be persuaded into going. I agree with Graeme, that this was subconsciously more about Luke. He also doesn't have to explain to his friends why he'd rather be at the park. Imagine their reactions. Notice the first thing they said was when did our friend become a loser. Yea, he's not ready for that either so the river was the easiest choice. Reading the scenes felt like he wasn't even really present with his friends.. I liked that he didn't reject what he was feeling about Luke and he held Luke's hand too in the car. I think you showed his struggling thoughts and feelings well. Now he has time to think or call Luke.. Luke didn't seem mad at him in the end, so that's encouraging.. Poor Luke's probably freaking out too.. Now I can't wait for what's next.. Also, his friends came out of the closet... Lol To answer your question from the last review response: I think Cindy might have a suspicion as to what might be going on with Luke... She's like a hawk that one...

Two very evocative poems.. I will tell you, the first thing that came to mind was watching my 11 year old nephew and his dog play.. It is just as you described, even down to the way they collapse at the end.. Beautiful job Dugh...

Go Sam! That's called being a friend.. Go Alex! Pushy is good sometimes. She forced David's dad into action. He should by all means been paying more attention to David and his family given all what happened and what he knows. All of this coming on the heels of Danny's death, he should have had the foresight to have David continue therapy.. But if we ignore it, it goes away seems to be his way.. At least now, thankfully the Dr is in play.. I guess with nothing to compare it to, Erik's actions look like love to Twoey. I'm disappointed that he won't defy Erik, yet saddened by how trapped he is within that relationship. It's hard to be mad at him, even though one would think he knew better.. I can't wait for him to realise how far he's let himself slip because of Erik.. The Syracruse gang might help, hopefully... At least he told Ginny about David.. Ok, David.... Shooting head pains, mental breakdowns, Danny's death warnings.. Not sitting well with me.. Theres a whole lot of talking going down at Kory's, so maybe that will be a starting point in the right direction. David doesn't need to join Danny... Soooo, 100 chapters SkinnyD! 100!! .. And a great chapter it was.. Thanks so much for telling this story!

Corey is...maturing. I like that these revelations about Jason, Zach and himself are coming to him slowly. He is able to process and come to conclusions not out of a place of anger but honest introspection and what he sees happening in the present. I also can appreciate him seeing the marked difference with Zach. If anything it shows him how wrong Zach was for him, and he's well to be rid of him.. The one thing that might hinder his 'Thaw' lol, might be his feelings toward his father. Will he be able to see that Jason is not his father.. Jason, will have a time building up that trust. Oh, and I had no more likes so I'll be back with that too.. DrP worked magic so you can't tell my faux pas:p

How was that not your favorite chapter. Seriously though Cynus this was so, so good. I would never have thought from the way it started, that it would just come full circle like this. They are all connected. Mikhail's affair with Dante's dad? What?!! Brilliant twist.. Im glad that Viko and Vladi had that moment with their dad. Truth and forgiveness. The family will probably be stronger for it.. Daisuke died with honor. For those affected I'm glad. Masahiro especially felt that loss and on top of Katsumi's betrayal, I felt for him. I look forward ward to the epilogue, even as I'm sad to see this end for now. You did great Cynus...

Park can't smell the bond..hmm.. But Kraig and Deke aren't being too subtle, I mean he was naked in the Alpha's bed. So I wonder if the tension is about the relationship Park fears is brewing. Now Kraig has to deal with his parents.. The ending had me like Yikes!! Short chapters have me so needy... Can't wait for next week..

Good for Daniel maintaining some control of the situation. He's proving not to be as frail as the two who obviously care about him seem to think. Poor Carlos' feelings are all but spilling over, but I think it's comforting for Daniel. Why is Carlos in therapy? Another nice chapter Caz..

Gah! I deserve that.. Ugh! I would correct to hunch, but.... And no no need to laugh so hard, I'm rather fond of the haunch I have..

Sometimes parents can be so obtuse. That Peter still wants her around for the wedding is admirable, but I guess if she's coming alone... I wonder how worth it she feels it is to be estranged from her son and grandson. At least Moster is serving that maternal role for both guys.. Peter and Patrick have a much better grasp on the meaning of family, and it's lovely to see that each revelation of their past only brings them closer together... And, they certainly were close this chapter lol..