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Wow, Gary! I liked it a lot. You managed to make me feel Kellar's confusion, awe, fear, all these mixed emotions, as he was shifting or preparing to shift. That was done really well. I also liked that he put the fear into his foster brother who deserved it. Now we are left with questions about what will happen from here.. It already promises to be an exciting and intriguing story. I can't wait to see where you take us. Very good start... I'm in!

I thought about this almost all day, and still I got nothing. You shut me up. I have no idea what to say about this.. I will just piggy back on everyone's comments, because they actually can say what I can't seem to find the words for. If frikkin Jose does not come through for CJ though, I know there will be no place he and his low life cousin could hide. And I'm pissed again.. It was a perfectly lovely chapter until then... See you Friday..

This whole chapter was like a cute kitten.. Love how protective Carlos is.. The effect the boys are having on their Doms is great to see play out.. Can't wait to see how it develops further..

Loneliness does suck, but I would say ditch him for the wedding at least. Corey deserves better than Zach on his arm as his plus one.. Whatever happens, the wedding already looks like it's going to be fun. The friends together again... And Jason.. The title now leads me to wonder if the Unforgivable will now include Corey... That is, if where my thoughts are headed proves true.. Nice job Lit.. Looking forward to the next..

Really good beginning.. I'm looking forward to the rest of this story.. Very well done!

A belated happy birthday Glittery! Hope you had a fantastic day!

@Tim: Thank you. You're way to kind. @glittery: Please keep reading! @Puppi: Thank you, and you know it's impossible to not become obsessed with Meta. In a word, Owlfluence or Fate.. Lol. @Val: It is a great series, you're right... I hope you do go back!

That was a really nice surprise from Peter and an even better welcome home from Patrick. I'm glad that Fiona never lost interest in getting to know Patrick. I hope him reaching out to her is a very good thing for both of them. And there's always that one irritating neighbor, just waiting to cause problems.. Ugh! Star Wars Lego.. That's some good fun right there. My nephews won't let me near theirs because I sort of don't play well with others when it comes to Lego. I never outgrew my love for them. Richard Scarry was another staple growing up. I remember them so very well. It's nice to have these memories connect to the story. Great chapter Tim... I look forward to the next.

Judge mom...brilliant! Love that relationship. I hope Chase lets Eli be a friend to him. Although I think Joey may have a problem if Eli gets to close. But Joey sounds like a problem, whether of his own making or there's something else's going on, doesn't make it right to tear Chase down. It might do Chase good to have an ally. Bobberson strikes again... That spells trouble..

I love that Tara makes the Dom's cower. Hehe. This chapter answers my question from before. They were indeed looking for Silas. While I'm not happy that Daniel paid for that mistake, at least now there's a chance to get this SOB.. Oliver and Carlos are on the warpath now too.. It's going to get heated! Well done Caz!

So Thomas is not as harmless as he's thought to be. Shane isn't even going to know its coming.. This is going to be messy.. I enjoyed the flashbacks, and now that I'm all caught up, I'm ready for more.. Great chapter!

Truth! All of it.. It's not a bad thing to acknowledge our bad feelings and feel sorry for ourselves from time to time. But sometimes we all need that little pep talk, like a dose of cold water. Snap us right back into taking action. Nicely done Gary..

This was an amazing chapter.. I was so mad at Rayn for being silly enough to open the door Andy after promising Sara he'd keep Daniel safe. But Daniel showed us up. He proved that he could take care of himself if he had to, and he made Andy run. Maybe seeing how much worse it could have been will finally convince Rayn to call the cops and get rid of this guy for good..

That was a really good Thanksgiving. Tommy taking care of his brother was priceless.. I'm glad that David and Gary could connect again.. Twoey and David making eyes at each other.. Matty gave sort of a hint about Erik.. Twoey subservient? I'm guessing this will play a part in the problems ahead.. Nice chapter SkinnyD...

I can't wait to find out what Grampa and his cohort are really up to.. You mentioned before that Alex will be a help to David, so I'll reserve judgement on her. She irks me though, all up in the family already.. David on the other hand, is being typical David. He's thinking, but I don't know that it's always a good thing fo him. He tends to think himself into a corner. Alex is a distraction for now I think while he gets his shit together. I'll give him a while cause he's been through a lot. I hope Alex figures it out before he digs himself any deeper. I keep falling behind but I'm about to be all caught up...

There's so much to get to in this chapter. Harley gets a job with Danno I think that's brilliant. It seems unfair to punish Tom by not sending Patrick down from Boston. I guess it's good that she asked him to come up but it Irked me that she used that as punishment. Patrick's defending his father smarter to spend time with him and they talk about it no? If she wanted to be harsh missing a game or two, taking his privileges away works. Maybe Paddy would be better off in DC. He'd have CJ to help him deal. But that would mean he left Bradley. Wishful thinking on my part I guess. Can you tell this bothered me? I think I like little Paddy.. I get the reasoning but I find it interesting that Brett asked for Thiago and Chipper be considered as part of the advisory board. There's so much time yet and I guess this means the posse is solid and not going anywhere. You know that means You will be writing CJs story for a hell of a long time. Hehe. Always, when there's tons of money involved people will remember that they are family. Didn't do a damn thing to help but when they feel like they're going to miss out on a cut they show up with all sorts demands and expectations. I see problems coming. So, remember when I said Owen and CJ will drive off into the sunset in Defiant? Now I'll deal with what comes in between and just wait..... Thanks Chipper. By the way. I'm missing the dad's bedtime recap routine. I got worked up way to early in the day but it was a great chapter. Thanks Carlos...

This may be one of my favorite chapters.. I might have said that before too.. The scenes played out right before me.. From the opening snowball fight I was grinning. Then Nate's gift to Brodie was perfect. Then throw in the fur balls, it was just magic. Can't imagine what it'll be like once the baby comes home.. Emotionally, there was so much joy and love and lightheartedness I was absolutely wrapped up in it. I loved it Gary..

Oh, you know I'm in.. Awesome start Lit.. Straight to the one, two punch. I can't wait to see where this leads..

Thank you so much Dugh.. You know your support means a lot. If by others you mean you too, I would especially love for that to happen. Thanks again for the encouragement and the review. Def...

Aw shucks Adi.. Thank you so kindly. I appreciate this lovely review and your support.. Def...

Thank you for this wonderful review. I hope it's not wrong to feel pleased that it moved you the way it did. That makes me feel like I got something right. You provide great prompts that I connect to so thanks for that too.. I appreciate all your help AC, and your support and encouragement. Thank you for taking me on. Def...

It's so amazing to see Patrick slowly come alive. Even more fun to see him flustered. He has his hands full with Peter's teasing, but it's bringing out a side to him that I think even he didn't realise was there. Even going to dinner with Anthony and John is something Patrick might have not considered before. I'm liking this friendship quartet.. The short time away will be sad, but I can only imagine what the reunion will be like. Hopefully Michael's room will be done then? Another lovely chapter Tim... Thank you!

Thank you Lit, for a lovely review. I'm glad that it struck that tone with you.. I appreciate you reading this, and for your support and encouragement, thank you so much! Def....

You know just what to say to this girl... I may never quite be a poet but I hope to never become noxious. Lol. I'm so happy you actually like it.. I appreciate the review and all of your support.. Thank you Carlos! Def...

Aw tim, thank you. I'm glad you like it.. I can't believe I'm here. Thank you for always cheering me on and supporting me. It means so much to me that you're in my corner.. Def....