Defiance19

One line - and it delivered. Nice job Emi..

The world you describe was vivid, but there was an anguish? Melancholia? That hovered as I read. I find myself hopeful for Zaidu and his ongoing journey for atonement. I'm also curious as to what will become of Adam. I really loved this Adi, I can't wait to see what is to follow.

I'm always so caught up in the worlds you've created. This was no different and fantastic. Great detail, interesting characters. Hopefully this isn't the end for Sudal? So many possibilities and questions. So, please can we have more?

I'm so happy it ended the way it did. It was a wonderful story. I get the appeal of wanting community when you're a stranger in a foreign land, but for some of these groups their beliefs and customs are held so rigid it makes things a lot worse. I'm glad Daniel and Abi get to live their love.. Good job Parker..

This was so good. The tension was tempered with good humor, all of which combined with the action made the story come alive. Well written, good job..

I really liked this, it's a great story. I imagine a battle of wills between the elders, council, Alpha and Landon, before all is said and done.. Landon did not seem like he was going to back down at all.. All good stuff. The sharing of power could have its advantages for Landon and Dom.

I hated having to read the epilogue, but it was absolutely brilliant. Perfect, and I loved it. Reed was a surprising but lovely addition. There are indeed possibilities to fill in the 'ever' part of their HEA and that leaves me hopeful that we run into Andy and Zander again.. I'm grateful to have been a part of Andy and Zander's journey. I was both moved and inspired by their tale. Thank you for this incredible story Parker.

Oh, this chapter was even more beautiful than the last. I'm so happy for them both. For the parts of them that got healed by their love and will continue to grow. The future is promising. I might be more than a little sad to read the next chapter....

Wonderful chapter Parker.. Being secluded, rugged as it was, suited the purpose I think. The guys got to focus on just them, nerves and all. In the end their lovemaking was sweet, intimate and positively beautiful. Loved the way Roger stumbled into the background. Another demon slayed.

I think I've digested this.. Much like the winter we've had, it was too good not to have a blizzard come from nowhere. In hindsight, this chapter was full of Brett... Good thing is Spring is coming, and luckily I have faith in you. Do not abuse my faith Carlos.. K? Pit was a great chapter. Growing up is a pain in the ass, but you had CJ handle it ups downs and in betweens, remarkably well. He's put what he's learnt to good practice and also learnt from his own shortcomings. Dealt with himself, his relationships, his friendships, and is a really respectable, stand up kid. It's like Cesar said, 'We show him the way, but we let him make the decisions on his own.' It's been a great recipe so far. Growin' in' up is a great chapter title for everyone though, even our secondary players. Brett and Cesar, especially Brett, have had to 'grow up' their thinking and strategy as parents. So have Tom and JP. It looks like Patrick is having to grow up quicker in ways he shouldn't have to, because of shitheads at school. Chipper and his sister making grown up decisions about their lives. Ritchie too, not having his brother as a constant presence to lean on. Speaking of Ritchie. I really loved the two boys spending time together. It's clear they miss each other and definitely they need each other too. You did great Carlos. Winter packed a punch, gave us more to love and a wicked ending. Looking forward to Spring.

That attitude was building since his college days.. There was so much potential...Alas!

Thank you authors and everyone involved!! You guys rock! Weekend plans: coffee, binge read, wine.. Maybe in that exact order!

Stop it! just stop! OMG Cynus.. Intense chapter. Daisuke is way worse than I thought. He has Alexi and Ouch, btw. Alexi acted too fast, not knowing where loyalties were and it cost him a finger. I hope he makes it out if there alive. Viktor running off to make sure Nobu is okay is sweet, but now he knows much more than he probably wanted to. I have to believe that the knife to his throat is for show. Right? He has to make this believable right Cynus? Looking back at Mikhail's conversation with Vladi, and then this current conversation with Viko, unless I read it wrong, I believe their dad has no idea Vladi is gay. He was worried about him being in with the Russians. So much confusion and misunderstanding. And now there's a war. Makes me wonder now, one son captured another with the Russians. Does he make an enemy of Sato to get Viko, or does he go up against the mafia for the same thing, risking Vladi in the process. My mind goes places when you leave us with cliffies. I'm not responsible for my conjecture...

I'm glad Owen was vindicated, but that was funny as heck.. Probably because I would attack 1 bee as if there were a hive, so I relate.. Well done Val.

Oh, Toby has no idea what he's in for. The full experience? I can't wait.. Lol.. Nice Caz...

Well, alright then! That was smokin'. I like how Clayton took care of Ryan. He just knew something was up. I think they both have that connection and are so tuned in to each other, Clay knew Ryan needed that intimacy. Maybe it was just a matter of him putting Ryan first and making him the focus, why he didn't or couldn't rise to the occaision. I just felt bad for Ryan's last thoughts though. I'm sure that will work itself out.. Your descriptions are amazing. I feel like I know the house well now. Also, I might need the name of that tile. That's pretty cool. Good chapter Rex..

I'm a sap.. I can't stop the tears. This was just so beautiful. Married! Zander's reading I loved. Grandma clearing up so much and ridding Andy of the fear he'll ever turn into Gunnar was a gift. Although, he won't outlive the memories, and there are so many what ifs, but this would be a different story. I wouldn't remember every detail either, but there is so much, so much love.. Everything was perfect Parker, even Toby came.. Loved the chapter..

Happy Birthday To You! Hope your day is absolutely amazing!

So Delicious! An umbrella on a bicycle, yea what could possibly go wrong. I can't believe Faris risked losing James. Good thing he came to his senses. The guys in the beginning were the lite version of themselves that we've come to love. That was absolutely enjoyable. Big Nick did good... Thanks for writing it tim...

Ugh... I was happily enjoying Craig and Jared until Carly. Hopefully she listened and heard her brother. Pissed as she is, she should be smart enough to realise he was dead serious, and she'll keep her trap shut or be civil. It was a lovely and heartwarming chapter. The diner, the house remodel, looking to the future..I especially loved the allowances being planned for Bailey. They don't hold back, because they've had to for so long, yet it doesn't feel rushed or desperate. It felt like they'd been together forever, and together they could do and face anything. Just wonderful Gary..

Aww hell.. Premonitions are not a good thing.. D2 is on a collision course. On the surface the plan of attack looks good, but... I almost need something to happen already. D2 was thinking that he liked the smart girls in the class. I would like to think that it was David who threw the block causing D2 to respond "Oh, I just got laid." Or at least some subconscious of David.. We we did see D2 drop his guard a bit to talk to Chuck and Twoey if only for a short time. Twoey is so torn up. I don't know what he can do to help. I was going to ask about David's father, but Lisa got it done. I'm just struck by the fact that he hasn't been affected by the change in David to ask him anything at all. Meanwhile, there's Ginny who decided Twoey had enough space.. I loved her talk with Twoey.. Always a great chapter SkinnyD...

Another wonderful and sweet chapter Tim.. Peter is considerate and respectful and I loved that he was thoughtful about speaking English to include Patrick. It's the little things that tell. But there is so much already between them and knowing they're committed to each other allows me to enjoy them getting to know each other. The little devil may try to rattle Patrick but he's doing a good job not letting it get to him too much.. Experienced or not, that talk is an uncomfortable but necessary evil.. I also like how Peter's interaction with his family, is making Patrick think more clearly about his. Hopefully, now that he has a family of his own he will be more open to explore a relationship with his relatives too.. Thank you Tim...

Yes! The Leopards are back.. It was like putting on a favorite sweater. Immediately comfy, and brought out all the good feels.. It was a nice and seamless catch up from where we left off, and a great introduction to new characters. Right off the bat we have Ty's dad.. But his tactics seem to be for naught. Ha! Looking forward to seeing how the new and continuing stories unfold. Fantastic start Graeme..

This was a very good chapter. My heart is happy for Rayn and Daniel. What the heck did that self serving Doctor know. Sarah to the rescue again.. Rayn was just what the doctor should have ordered.. Now, to set everything to it's correct order.

Lovely tim, and a fun read. I'm going to have to orchestrate a way to use 'soft knees, quiet top, busy hips'. I'm thinking my niece's dance class.. That Daniel was doing the opposite of that was so clear in my mind, I'm still cracking up. No sympathy for instructor stuff shirt. But then - Joe. Amazing how everything fell into place with the right partner. Cool story..