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    Onward

    Excellent chapter! Mr. Vicente has begun working with the family, Noah came home from school and tried Gelato for the first time after spending an incredible day with the boy with sparkling green eyes. The relationship between Noah and Sky is developing at a frenetic pace. The sexting FaceTime call between them had Noah admitting to having a boyfriend named Timmy in Barnstable. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter and the intern job at the aquarium! 😃❤️
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    Meeting Sky

    Outstanding chapter! Noah’s moved to NYC and visited his new school, he finds a really pretty boy named Sky and will be an intern at the aquarium he loves. He’s missing Timmy but is very attracted to Sky. There will eventually be drama between Noah and Timmy over Sky the pretty boy with sparkling green eyes. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  3. Excellent chapter! You continue to amaze me with the incredible way you can let all of us feel the emotions and understand the feelings of each character. The telling of this story from Noah’s perspective is absolutely brilliant. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  4. Outstanding chapter! You have captured Noah’s personality perfectly, his manner of speech and the frustration that all atypical’s feel over their inability to communicate what they want to say. I know many people on the Autism scale, and they have difficulty in saying what is on their mind successfully. I love these characters and I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    M

    Outstanding chapter! I’m sorry that you are having issues related to blindness, the technological advances have made it slightly easier to read, write and correspond, however they are limited in scope and subject to technical and software issues frequently. I sincerely hope that you are able to continue. I just love your stories! I’m missing the rabbits and bunnies! Thanks for putting in a little bit of their trails. Eric backed down the director of secret intelligence after being told it was a Makarovian matter, by threatening British access to the Uranium. He told Prince Eric that his agency would make getting the Consortium a priority. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    A New Skoal?

    Excellent chapter! Love the general’s, Ed and David are two amazing men who have earned the respect and admiration of the Makarovian Royal Family. Eric casually asking General Hammond about compelling the prisoners to talk and give up their leaders, was answered with a smirk. I believe that the prisoners have no rights within the borders of Makarovia and could face execution for their attack. I’m pretty sure that they will talk when facing execution without appeals. They seriously angered the King who has the last word on their fate. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    The Press

    Outstanding chapter! I’m very happy that Mikell and Cosmo are being brought back to Makarovia. They’ll be picked up with the new plane by Yuri and brought to the Palace where Cosmo will be undergoing rehabilitation therapy. The introduction of Olek at the press conference was both very formal and humorous. The press was rather uninterested in the speech until Olek introduced Helga as his wife, then the press were very interested. Love the rabbit! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  8. Excellent chapter! I don’t have a creative personality, I’m an organizational person. I never criticize because I cannot create what those of you can. I love and learn from everything I’ve ever read. I sincerely enjoy the rabbit and the many trails he leads us down. Religion and morality were created to control people and make money. Lot’s and lot’s of of money. Thank you for pointing out what most people are unable or unwilling to see. Most people these days get all of their information from one or two online formats. Control of The populace is insidious. Keep creating these magnificent stories and characters and I will gladly follow your rabbit wherever he leads. Independent thought is still important when mass media leads the conversation. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Tangerana

    Outstanding chapter! The network broadcast is coming together nicely with the initial broadcast teaser completed. The idea of heartier plants for survival in colder climates by genetic manipulation creating a hybrid would certainly make them more independent and food production would be more plentiful. Makarovia is becoming an independent and strong nation. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  10. Excellent chapter! Jake and Preston made a decision and will have to live with the consequences if any. The meeting of the soldiers has made it clear to Jake and Preston that the situation Is deteriorating and the security personnel are deeply concerned about their survival. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😳❤️
  11. Outstanding chapter! Caught in the act by Preston then discovering Spencer in the refrigerator eating raw meat saying that he’s so hungry and can’t get enough. Now Alex, Jake and Preston need to decide what to do next. Should they tell someone or wait and see what happens next? Spencer’s life could hang in the balance, as well as everyone else. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😳❤️
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    Chapter 23

    Outstanding chapter! Alex’s meet with the traitorous principal and the aliens created a significant number of casualties amongst the recon teams when the aliens destroyed the LATV. All of the aliens and the traitors were killed. Moving forward to Ravenscroft where a small force of humans were holding hostages, led to the execution of the self proclaimed king of the area by the sharpshooter Arty, when Alex determined that negotiations were futile. Alex then took over Davistown by overthrowing the guards and Leadership. Alex is now feeling the after effects of his decisions and their costs in lives. He has the leadership skills to be in command and is now discovering that every decision could lead to losses of life and worse. This is a very heavy weight to be placed on a teenager, when trained soldiers have problems. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter 🤬❤️
  13. Thank you for another wonderful story! The final chapter was amazing and tied up the loose ends nicely. The wedding was exactly what this crazy pandemic has couples doing every day. Donald and Conner breaking up is sad and hopefully Donald will meet the right guy to keep him happy in Utah. You are a masterful author, your characters have personalities and depth to them that is beyond other writers. You’ve allowed us to walk in their shoes and to experience their lives as they develop. I’m definitely looking forward to the next book in the pk saga. 😃❤️
  14. Outstanding chapter! Alex (AKA the skank) was being obnoxious on the zoom call with the boys and Matty lowered the boom quickly giving her no choices. I’m concerned that she’s so used to being a bitch that she’s going to be a very difficult person during the pregnancy. Maggie’s patience may be sorely tested in this. The sonogram showing twins will make everything more difficult. I’m definitely hoping for a third book in this series, as well as, the next books in the Barnstable series. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 12

    Excellent chapter! Lady Baiza’s jealousy will certainly be taken advantage of by the Empress. Together they will start plenty of trouble for the Duke, his consort and heir. Jihan’s first morning meeting with the household staff and Rashan went very well. Rashan has accepted the marriage and relationship between his father and Uncle Jihan. Silver Shore Valley and the Sun-Filled Manor seems to need a care taker to restore the Manor back to its former glory, as well as a bit of modernization. The new family is full of hope, love and happiness. The intruder is a little bit concerning. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  16. Excellent chapter! Eric got to take his Mustang for a drive while breathing in the new security personnel. I just love all the rabbit trails in your stories. Thanks! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 3

    Excellent chapter! Cam has been staying with Finn and Rory and observing how they work with the horses to train them to be calm, able to be ridden and responsive to their riders. He’s taking thousands of photos and is very happy living this lifestyle with both while trying to keep from overstepping the friendship, Rory’s suffering through the same emotional turmoil, hopefully Finn will knock some sense into the both of them. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 2

    Outstanding chapter! Cam has gotten to know a little bit about Finn and Rory And their family horse farm. An invitation to stay has been offered and accepted by Cam. Rory and Cam are both trying to keep their attraction to each other under control. How long does anybody think that will last? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 1

    Excellent chapter! Ireland, horses and a slice of rural life as it used to be. What a great premise. Welcome back to presenting your well thought out and very well researched stories with outstanding characters who have depth and personalities which endear themselves to the readers. Thank you for all of the amazing stories you’ve told and for all of the stories yet to come. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  20. Excellent chapter! Eddie’s acceptance and supportive attitude made Matty’s concerns about the skank raping him less traumatic. The call two months later from the skank letting Matty know that she’s pregnant and can’t get an abortion due to it not being essential during the virus and stay at home orders. Eddie and Matty moving the wedding up and being responsible for raising the future child has the entire family excited. Mom wants Matty and Eddie to invite the skank into the family home to alleviate stresses from her family. Life is going to be interesting for everyone going forward. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  21. Outstanding chapter! Despite the circumstances Matty’s got to tell Eddie every detail about what’s happened with Alex. Matty was raped and Eddie will be understanding and supportive. Eddie will be very understandably upset with the skank and will make sure that they all will ignore her going forward. Matty’s definitely not responsible for the rape, the skank is, she took advantage while he was asleep. Matty made mistakes in drinking too much and smoking pot leaving him to intoxicated to get back to the dorm. There aren't any excuses that the skank can make that will alleviate the fact that she committed rape. I'm definately looking forward to the next chapter! 🤬❤️
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    Chapter 3

    Outstanding chapter! A cliffhanger on top of a cliffhanger? You are well on your way to making us feel the emotional roller coaster. Jesse needs to contact the police and have his “sister” taken into custody, this is all about Trevor’s assets. By taking Mason she’s trying to setup a precedent for custody and trustee for the assets. Nasty game she’s playing. Glad that Danny’s there to guide Jesse and to utilize his network to protect his family’s wellbeing. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 🤬❤️
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    Chapter 2

    Excellent chapter! A trip to England for Jesse, Dylan and Ace is a great opportunity for learning their trade and making lasting friendships across the pond as they would say. I’m used to your cliffhangers and the stall about the resolution. You are aware that it’s frustrating for your readers, but I know you enjoy toying with us. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  24. Outstanding chapter! The broadcast is about to begin, the idea of translating books, movies, plays and radio / television programming into Makarovian is a massive undertaking, but very worthwhile. When you are able to read, listen to and enjoy these stories, characters and experiences in your native language, the people will begin to have an even deeper sense of pride in their country. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    WMNN

    P.s. : I am so sorry that you were unable to resurrect your laptop computer. May he Rest In Peace!
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