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Excellent chapter! Were learning a bit more about Eddie and Matty with each chapter. Matty taking the leap of coming out to his best friend and telling him he’s in Love with him is beyond courageous. The new relationship between them could prove difficult for many reasons. Matty needs to explain to Eddie the reason his father started hitting him just so he’s aware of what could be brought up by his father. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! This is a great start to a new story with new and developing characters. The premise of the story can lead to a great many twists and turns. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️

Excellent chapter! Brandon and Danny’s birthday trip is giving them some time alone as a couple and to recharge and reconnect. All of the other adults stepping up to complete the renovations for Holly’s room, while they attend Elliot’s commencement ceremony and graduation. This family is the ideal so many of those children living in less than favorable conditions dream of finding themselves being taken in by. It’s ashamed that there’s not a network of hotels that can house and give hope to teens who are abused, tossed out for being who their meant to be, runaways and any others who need help and guidance. They would be expensive to run and the religious right would be totally against them. Finding qualified house parents and counselors would be problematic also. Reality sucks and I wish we all could live inside your universe. Thank you for another great chapter and an uplifting story for us all. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! Everyone seems to be looking forward to moving into the hotel and are actually looking forward to living there. The family is now prepared for whatever changes need to be made to accommodate the transition for the new kids. I believe that the new additions to the Currie family will add a whole new dynamic where the all male family will become more aware of what is necessary for young ladies and girls to feel comfortable. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! I’m so sad that the bitch will survive. I’m happy that Aria and Jay are well. Amara being shot by his mother is sickening. Aria slapping, punching and scratching her face had to have felt good for him. Lady Jane, Robert and the Police SWAT officer arrived after the main drama was resolved, and she started giving commands, she was arguing about what hospital to take Amara to. I’m not going to try to figure out where this story is going from here, but I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😡❤️

Outstanding chapter! Maman as the evil mastermind isn’t too big a stretch based on the story so far. The torture and sexual abuse of her twins is too sickening to imagine. She deserves to be killed by one or more of her twins, that would be truly poetic justice. My guess is that Aria is the shooter, he made her believe that he’s week and helpless, and she dropped her guard and he grabbed the gun to protect Amara and Jay from what she had planned. Everyone will be surprised that he could do it, but after all the verbal and physical abuse at her hands, he decided enough was enough. If I’m correct, then I will be very proud of Aria, even though I already am. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😡❤️

Outstanding chapter! The first day at school went reasonably well for Jimbo, the first day for Mason wasn’t as nice, since he’s being bullied. Gino the professor is a very nice addition. I think that black is going to alleviate the bullying that Mason is suffering through. I won’t even try to predict where this story is going next. I am enjoying the twists and turns and the gradual character development. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The trauma associated with his fathers reactions and pointing a shotgun at him, in addition to the stresses placed on him by the representatives of Masons family caused a mental meltdown. Who could blame him? They’ve given him no options to adjust to his new found responsibilities. Mason stayed by his side which shows that their relationship is strong and based on love and devotion. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😳❤️

Excellent chapter! Artie and Adam’s rather heated discussion about Ezra coming to visit was headed into dangerous territory, thankfully they decided to think about their positions and sleep, which enabled both of them to realize that they both have valid points and that they would move forward slowly and with caution. Adam agreeing to let Artie lead is a terrific idea, he’ll remain in the background to provide support and safety. Dizzy’s always a mess but is fiercely protective over Artie. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The conversations with Ezra are a bit trying for Artie, however he’s going to proceed with getting to know the man who is his father. Adam and Dizzy are supportive while being cautious. Artie’s distractions and inability to focus are stressing Dizzy’s normally distractive behaviors, he knows that he needs to get Artie out of his head without causing more harm. Adam is certain that Ezra is up to something, but isn’t sure about what. His answers about coming to San Francisco show his distrust and concerns. The breathing exercises should help Artie to better focus his mind and body. The suggestion by Jose was wonderfully timed. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Amazing chapter! The transformation of David Chase and Charlie Danner is nearly complete! They’ve survived their breakup, separation, failed relationships, fame and fortune and finding one another once again. I’m really happy that their happily ever after appears to be within reach. The relationship between David and Noah could prove to a stumbling block, but am hoping you won’t use that against them succeeding. I’m heartbroken about the Barnstable Chronicles coming to an end. You’ve created a very special world with unique and very diverse characters. I’ve fallen in love with all of them and will miss them terribly. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😅❤️

Excellent chapter! The elephant in the hut has been finally revealed in a not so controlled manner in front of the entire group. Ryan feels betrayed by Milan stepping away and later after Ryan admits that he’s gay, running away, Ryan becomes devastated. He’s feeling completely disconnected from the rest of the group, especially when Ryan’s mother doesn’t defend him against Milan’s family. I feel badly for Ryan and his hopes for a relationship with the handsome boy as it appears to be impossible. I’m wondering what reactions Milan will have after the revelation. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️

Amazing chapter! This story of a self absorbed teen stepping up to defend a smaller boy whose being bullied in the boys room, and getting suspended for a week for his troubles. The friendship that develops between Ren and Jake ignites a spark in their lives, Ren who has been bullied and tormented and Jake who was forced to move into a new town and school. They become best friends with a mutual love of painting and art they fall in love. Tragically Ren dies unexpectedly. Very well written story, the emotions and feelings come through perfectly! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! Artie seems to be in control of dealing with his father, I’m not sure everyone else around him believes that, but they are allowing him the space to handle Ezra in his own way. Adam and Dizzy are supportive and caring about his feelings. Adam has been morphing into a parent while maintaining the arms length Uncle role. He’s completely devoted to Artie and Dizzy’s well being and guiding them forward toward their future. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! Jeremy’s birthday went reasonably well, despite mom’s bringing out the photo albums and complaining about the break up of Jeremy and Natalie. Alex’s meeting with Brandon was a little disturbing with the inappropriate closeness and hand on Alex’s thigh. Now the phone call about Jeremy’s mom being aware of his sexuality. I wonder who spilled the beans? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️

Outstanding chapter! I’m glad that the meeting with the family went well and that the kids accepted their invitation to live with the Curries. Benny’s birthday celebration was a success and everyone had a great time. The new kids coming to the hotel the following Saturday should prove to be interesting. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! Here we grow again! I can’t imagine a reason that they would reject this desperate families request to care for their children. The gender should not be a defining factor. I don’t recall the family ever rejecting anyone in the past. I’m certain that they have the capacity to take in anyone who is in need, and they’ll adapt to the uniqueness of the situation pretty quickly. Thank you Bill for a new twist that will make the story take turns we can’t anticipate. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! Such a sweet and loving family celebration of Mother’s Day! The dynamic connection between Noah and David is truly inspiring. The two Mother’s re-establishing their friendship after such a long time and years of drama with their sons set the tone for the future relationship between both families becoming one. The twisted phone calls by the producers added unnecessary stress and anguish to Charlie. Charlie’s reactions to David inviting Beverly and Noah to Long Island were somewhat justified. His parental instincts for protecting Noah from any and all harm is overwhelming his personal feelings about David because he’s not familiar with this new David who is sweet and kind, loving and caring. This David is a complete mystery based up on the self serving, take no prisoners, I will succeed at all costs persona that Charlie knows. I’m uncertain if Charlie will complete the show in order to protect Noah. There’s still a chance that David can find a way to introduce his new and improved persona to Charlie and begin to build the relationship between them both back to what it once was. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! Ben coming into the suite with a gun, holding everyone hostage waiting for the mysterious mastermind of the entire sordid mess. Him striking Aria and Amara and threatening Jay is about to push Drew over the edge. Now that the leader is about to be revealed, how will this mess be resolved? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Amazing chapter! Aria stood up for his friend against his powerful, conservative and seriously behind the times Grandmother, while putting Robert, Drew and Jeff in their place. Lady Jane is formidable but was a bit taken aback by her weaker grandson. Aria put her in her place and left no room for her to defy him. He’s made it clear that they don’t need her or her money and will not see her again unless and until she apologizes to Jay and agrees to treat them with respect and courtesy. To say that Drew is shocked and overwhelmed by the many nuances to his two multifaceted boys is a distinct understatement. The gradual changes and nuances of each of these characters is simply amazing and I am totally impressed with the depth of story and characters. Thank you! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! Logan taking the initiative to tell Leon how he really feels was long overdue. Leon is suspicious of Logan’s motivations. The ultimatum by the Queen is adding additional pressure on Leon’s shoulders. The ultimatum will certainly make whoever is on the inside feel it necessary to speed up their plans to kill Leon before he can be named Crown Prince. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ I’m sorry that you’re feeling under the weather, hopefully your husband’s chicken soup will cure you.

Excellent chapter! Worthington was able to come up with a plan to rescue the boys. His reluctance to put the boys through the torture and sexual abuse necessary to create the controls needed to protect them from the Demons shows how far he’s come from who he was when he arrived in Arizona. He has matured into a better, wiser and more caring person. I’m very sad to see the comments about the story ending. There’s so much more that could be written about this group of characters and the war they’re fighting! 😢❤️

Outstanding chapter! The children turning on their rescuers was unexpected, and the few survivors begging to be killed is very sad and very emotional for Worthington. He’s got to make a decision on what to do with these hostages/prisoners, can he just kill them? Can he formulate a plan to save and cure them with no danger to anyone else? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️

Excellent chapter! Worthington is taking to his new job with a vengeance. He is building the new school, developing new programs to identify untrained mages in schools and creating new relationships with creatures who dislike the Demons nearly as much as the humans. He will become more powerful and will be able to negotiate with other adepts to hopefully create a better life for all magical beings and live successfully along side mundanes. The deal with the Ferdun could be quite helpful in the battles with the Demons. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! Promoted to DHS Acting Director at 17, giving the President a guided tour of the Disneyland crime scene. Worthington’s life has taken a direction he couldn’t even imagine. He’s now in it up to his eyeballs. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️