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Excellent chapter! This was another difficult chapter to read. The evil Cromwell and his government backed researchers committed crimes against humanity with the torture of Ken. The team accomplished rescuing Ken, but did not kill anyone nor does it seem question Cromwell at Doc’s orders. I would have killed Cromwell and his entire research team and destroyed the laboratory they were using to send a clear message that they are vulnerable and should stop their plans. Brad’s issues with fear of losing Ken and the extreme peril he put himself into to enable the rescue operations. Ken needs to tell the Doc what’s going on before something tragic occurs. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃😢

Outstanding chapter! This was very hard to read since I have become attached to the characters. The links and closeness between the couples is extraordinary, and the Doc is a genius in the field of DNA manipulation and chemistry to achieve the strength, endurance and enhancements in the team. The General behind the abduction is clearly wanting to recreate the successes of the previous enhanced Seal Team and may have the backing of the D.O.D.. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️

Excellent chapter! The story is very interesting and appears to be going to be filled with action, drama and many twists and turns along the way! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! The conversation with Ian and Elliot about Ian starting earlier than Elliot after Ian finished later seemed to help relieve some of the tensions and gave them a chance to be happier until Ian leaves for school. The training of the puppies appears to be going well. The competition between Noah and Ryan continues to simmer just under the surface. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The development of the characters is moving forward and there’s plenty of suggestions for what they will face and where the story will go, but not enough details yet. Loved the security guard, Monsieur Lambert, and of course the Chief Rabbi. They’ve all got wisdom to share and a strong feel for what the boys can do and be. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The family outing to the Go-Carts and ATV’s was exciting for everyone. The younger boys will always remember how much fun they had and their older siblings will also remember these outings fondly. In a family the size of this one destination vacations would be costly and problematic since the boys would come to expect these types of vacations regularly. The smaller less elaborate trips allow bonds to be strengthened and teach the boys how much fun they can have while enjoying their family members. The tensions between Ryan and Noah are simmering just below the surface, but Owen’s visit and Holly’s apparent lack of definite sexual interest in either of them allows them to keep their frustrations minimized currently. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! I loved the interaction between Nate and Eddie, the former twerp was heartbroken over the possible death of his older brother. Nate is much more aware of what is going on around him and is much more knowledgeable about life’s realities than anyone suspected. His reactions to Matty and Eddie kissing, his treatment of his best friends feelings for him and his ability to be supportive and caring will allow him to become a truly remarkable young man. The vigil was inspiring, and the support from his friends family, church and school required a lot of tissues. I’m certain that the relationship between Nate and Eddie was strengthened by this brush with death. The spring break trip to the cabin should be interesting. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

An exceptional ending to an amazing story! The characters developed slowly and the story line had numerous twists, turns and surprises which kept all of us guessing where this story was headed. You also included a fair amount of pain, angst, family drama, murder and emotional turmoil. Thank you for another truly enjoyable reading experience. I will really miss this group of amazing people. I’m definitely looking forward to the next story you will tell us. Thank you Sui!

Wonderful chapter! Xander’s time on board the Aquaria has come to an end, I suspect that he will appear again in the future. Trenton and Travis still haven’t spoken about what transpired Xander and his business card. Trenton seems to think that Travis has committed a grievous error in how he handled the young man. The boy may be rich and well connected, but treating your new husband this shabbily may create problems that can cause frustration, anger and bitterness. I sincerely hope that Trenton will take the opportunity to spend some quality time with his new husband to let him know how important he is and how much he loves him. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! Amazing story! You have taken all of us on a twisting and turning story with truly amazing characters! You’ve left many ways to continue this story and I will wait patiently for the next book. I absolutely enjoyed every moment of this book and will miss these characters, whom I love, until the next book is ready! Thank you for this amazing story! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! The Sermon was simply amazing! If every church could give that sermon our world would be a much better place. The team probably saved Eddie from being more severely injured during the unprovoked attack. The conversation between Eddie, Matty and Nathan was planned to happen the weekend after the attack, which will take place once Eddie has recovered. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! ❤️

Excellent chapter! Love the Coach and Principal and the suspension of Donald Harper for violating the anti bullying policy and threatening to kill Eddie in front of them. Love the reactions of Dad about being gay. The explorations and experiences between Matty and Eddie in the bedroom are touching. What’s the story with Nathan? He’s been left out of the discussions about Eddie and Matty’s relationship. Are the parents shielding him because he’s too young? Now that Eddie’s been attacked at the away game, how will they explain it to him? I really hope that Eddie will make a full recovery. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 🙁🤬

Outstanding chapter! The onset of illnesses inside the secure complex after the rescue is suspect and casts those who were rescued under suspicion. The arrival of the next group of refugees and the General demanding that they relinquish their weapons is also dangerous. The conversation between Fort Walker and General Forsythe leads us to believe that the leadership group is losing control and could be overrun at any time. Alex should re-evaluate giving away their weaponry and be suspicious of the leadership’s motivations. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️

Excellent chapter! The levels of security surrounding Matan and Yonatan are what you would expect for celebrities or the super rich. The unexpected meeting with Yonatan’s parents added another piece to the puzzle that is their lives. The anger of Herbert over not being informed about the meeting with the Chief Rabbi. The extensive meeting and his request for a second meeting and three pieces of Matan’s birthday cake just added even more intrigue and will most likely lead to the trip to Vienna that Yonatan’s mother was warning them about. I really have absolutely no idea where this story is going, however, I am enjoying the mysterious journey you’ve sent us on. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! The new country house with an amazing garden for them all together for peace,safety and security to allow them all to process their issues and hopefully be able to let the past drift safely to where it belongs with the help of their therapists. Aria cooking, Amara creating a new album, Paris fashion week, and new talks of future children bode well for them in their future. Rhidian looks like a good match for Jay. Drew will definitely read Juliana’s letter to best decide whether the twins should read it’s contents or burn it. Hopefully this will allow the boys to place their insane childhood behind them, secure in the knowledge that she can’t bother them again. , I really sad,that this story is coming to an end, you’ve created wonderful characters and an inspiring story with twists and turns and drama. I’m hoping that you’ll continue their saga into a second book. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The closeness between Amara and Drew is beneficial to them both since they each suffer from PTSD. I’m sure that Aria is also suffering from the same. Their Doctor’s will hopefully be able to treat them separately and together since the new triple relationship will add additional stresses and difficulties. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️

Excellent chapter! Jimbo is starting to become the negotiator that he is expected to become, the trouble with Toby was unexpected and was quickly stopped. Black may not have been able to stop Toby even when slightly distracted by Tim. The Paris trip will certainly add more stress, but may prove to be an inspiration to Yonatan on how the future could unfold and give hints into their shared destiny. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! Holly’s birthday celebration was amazing, she was so very happy and grateful for all of the gifts that she received. The competition between Ryan and Noah for Holly’s attention is very obvious and could turn really ugly. The adults are going to have to be ready to intercede at any moment to prevent a serious fight between brothers. Unfortunately reason and rational behavior are lacking when testosterone and competition for romance is involved. The stories that they’re reading to the younger boys is a terrific way to encourage reading for the rest of their lives. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The newest members of the extended family all enjoyed the over the top family celebration of Independence Day. I fondly remember family gatherings around holidays with good food and comfortable surroundings. Thank you for reminding me of a simpler and more profoundly caring period in my life. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Welcome back! I’ve missed these characters! I sincerely hope that you’re feeling better! This was a great chapter and I love that the children have given George a nickname of Red. Lucian is going to have to prove that he’s serious about helping find George. The rescue team will need to watch him closely. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Amazing chapter! The discussion between Leon and his closest friends was tense, angry, hurt and sadness all rolled into one overwhelming emotional outburst which placed all of the blame onto Logan’s shoulders. Leon went to great lengths to protect his future husband from more difficult reactions especially from Petr. Riku got right up into Petr’s face in defense of the decisions made by Logan to protect Leon from the assassination attempts. Logan and Dax hovering outside the door eavesdropping was quite funny and Logan realized how protective Leon was being to take most of the blame for those decisions. He finally became aware of how deeply Leon’s love for him went. Petr settled for Logan’s word that he’d never keep them out of the loop again. It’ll take some time but he will definitely forgive the deception Logan played on him. Anselm said the most amazing statement “That’s really cool, i did it to protect Leon, and I’d do it again. You’re making me want one.” I’m sad that this amazing journey is coming to an end, however, I will hold onto hope that you will revisit these simply amazing characters again. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Awesome chapter! Logan declared that he’s in love with Leon. We discovered a secret passageway between Castle Arguro and the Royal Palace with a pair of red rail-carts. I think that would be really cool to have, so you can move secretly between both locations securely. Leon is becoming Crown Prince, and there’s a Royal Wedding in the near future. Constantin and Isaak are arrested for their crimes. Gia and hopefully Grace are recovering from being shot. The conversations between Leon and his closest friends will be difficult, but after the initial shock of being lied to wears off, I believe that they will be understanding and forgiving. Petr will likely hold this over poor Logan’s head until the wedding. Queen Amathea’s decision to tell Isaak that Kleopas would be Crown Prince was a mistake that she will live with forever. Leon took her confession with grace. You’ve wrapped up most of the intrigue and I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The drama has begun a little later than normal, I really don’t like the Asshat! I’m fairly certain that Dad will be unhappy that Eddie didn’t feel comfortable telling him about being Boyfriends with Matty. However, I know that Dad will be supportive and let both boys know that they are loved. The girls and their other friends will circle the wagons, so to speak, and offer their support and backup against the bigots and homophobes. Mom will be ready to castrate the Asshat! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!

Excellent chapter! You never forget the first weekend together. The nervousness, the fumbling and most importantly the unbridled ecstasy of discovering love, sex and joy with your lover. Those experiences and discoveries are priceless. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! ❤️😃

Excellent chapter! The newest members of the family seem to be settling into their new lives with no difficulties. They are definitely completely integrated into this amazing family. The new puppies are a big hit with everyone. The younger boys are learning how to care for and train them as well as play with them. I am a little concerned about the relationship between Elliot and Ian. They’ve been apart for quite a while and there’s always temptation at any university. I really hope that I’m wrong since they are such a cute and caring couple. I’m definitely looking forward to their reunion in the next chapter! 😃❤️