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    Oce Chapter 6

    Outstanding chapter! Congratulations to Trenton and Travis on their wedding! The expansion of the fleet of submarines is commendable and Trenton being promoted to Director and transferred back to Aquaria where he’s in charge of the new fleet and the new division of Ocean Guardian Enterprises. The new division and fleet will be keeping Trenton busy, now that they are operating under the U.N. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 47

    Excellent chapter! They’ve landed in Greece after causing Amara a great deal of pain with the traveling and seat belt. Aria of course was keenly aware of his twins pain and was determined to get help from the flight attendant during takeoff no less. I surely hope that they will find peace and comfort while recuperating from their trauma and torture at the hands of their mother the evil bitch. Drew really needs to step up and resolve the many issues that have been pushed aside as a result of the ongoing drama and pain. He’s still not realizing just how complicated his new life will be with the twins and the fact that as a family member now he’s not capable of being their bodyguard any longer. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️
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    A Very Busy Weekend

    Outstanding chapter! Noah’s High School Graduation, my how time flies. You always manage to make everyday family life seem so special and your abilities at having us feel every emotion is amazing. I’ve loved this family and story since the beginning and can’t wait for each installment. I truly appreciate the fact that you’ve allowed us to live vicariously through this family for those who weren’t able to experience this type of family life. Thanks, Bill! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Oce Chapter 5

    Outstanding chapter! The new assignment to Meredith Atoll with responsibilities for patrolling the oceans east of the International Date Line, will keep Trenton very busy for the forceable future. The new relationship with Travis Peterson will hopefully bring love and joy to them both. I really hope that they will live together in happiness. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  5. Excellent chapter! The Doctors truly put Jimbo through the ringer at the medical center and the clinical psychologist also overwhelmed the poor man further, but then had him bring Mason back in with him after a very short break. She then stressed him even more. Are they trying to break his spirit similar to drill instructors with the military, or are they trying to assess how far he can be pushed before he collapses once again? Mason is turning out to have more inner strengths since he’s lived inside this situation since birth. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Dropping Bombs

    Outstanding chapter! Matty coming out after watching “Boy Erased” with Eddie and his parents. Both parents pledged their unconditional support and love for him. Mr. H hugged him, held him while he cried and reassured him that he’s loved by the entire family without question. This led to Mrs. H visiting the boy’s in their room and getting Eddie to come out to her. This is still the most frightening, painful and emotionally devastating experience any LGBTQ+ person has to face. Today most families are shocked but supportive, however there’s just too many who react horribly with violence and intolerance. Most who react badly are preaching the nonsense planted in their brains by the ultra-conservative religious right. Religions that teach and preach intolerance and hatred should lose their tax exempt status and be forced to pay all past taxes due immediately. I really appreciate how you are telling this story and I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Getting Acquainted

    You’re welcome Bill!
  8. Excellent chapter! The Memorial Day gathering went extraordinarily well with Julie and Holly getting to meet many of the local family members as well as getting to tour the Castaway Hotel where her children will be living. She was very happy seeing the depths that the Currie family will go to in caring for and providing a loving family life for them. She’s relieved that the twins are so happy. The graduation celebrations are nexr and the moving day for Holly and the twins. Thanks Bill for another great chapter and for always revealing another nuance of these constantly evolving characters. You’re an expert at making your readers feel and understand what each character is going through and the emotional impact is always felt by each and every one of us. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Getting Acquainted

    Outstanding chapter! Elliot has become more mature as a college graduate, and has stepped up to make the twins feel welcome and younger boys are getting more attention. The rookie comment by his fathers planted the seeds of carrying on the tradition of the family. Elliot and Ian would be wonderful parents. I’m really happy that you’re resurrecting the tree house since the now older generation had so much fun with it. The inclusion of Julie, Holly and Mrs. Rivera into the Memorial Day Barbecue and festivities will allow them to meet the other members of the family and to see how well the twins are fitting into the family. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! Thank you Bill! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 46

    Outstanding chapter! Drew is still very reluctant to become fully engaged with his twins, which could be dangerous for them all. This mysterious trip to a remote airfield is interesting and I hope that Lady Jane is taking them somewhere remote where they can rest, relax and recover from their individual horrors. I’m not going to try to guess since there’s so many possibilities. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  11. Excellent chapter! Matty and Eddie having their first kiss was amazing. They’ve taken the first steps toward a future with love, hope and promise. Mom’s perspective is spot on as always, Mom’s always know who their children really are. I’m certain that Dad is aware also and will be protective and completely supportive of them both. I’m impressed that a Baptist Preacher would walk away from his church due to the hatred and intolerance that they’ve always spoken from the pulpit. I’m thrilled that his break away church which is based on the teachings of love, tolerance and compassion is doing well. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Oce Chapter 4

    Excellent chapter! The corporate entity has been quite busy during the 12 months on Pitcairn Island. Dad seems to be very busy and will have some new projects for Trenton upon his return to home base on Wake Island. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Oce Chapter 3

    Outstanding chapter! The development and upgrades are well underway and the local residents are pretty happy with their new homes and communities. The technology and science required are certainly advanced, and the costs being funded by a single corporate entity is pretty amazing. I’m still looking for a new relationship for Trenton, he deserves it. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Oce Chapter 2

    Outstanding chapter! The upgrades to the community on Pitcairn Island are extensive and extremely complex. The planning for all of this was ongoing for an extremely long period of time. Trenton has undertaken a huge project which when completed will definitely enhance the local lives living on the island. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Oce Chapter 1

    Excellent chapter! The new adventures of Trenton and the new Oceania looks to be getting off to a profound start. I really hope that Trenton finally finds a romantic relationship with someone who understands his life and can help fill the void that he’s been living with for an extended period. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Elliot’s Big Day

    You’ve always exceeded my expectations Bill, that’s what keeps me reading everything you have ever written! Thank you!
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    Communication

    Amazing chapter! The emotional roller coaster is running at full speed with huge ups and terrifying drops and lots of twists and turns and loops. Adam is fearful that he’ll lose Artie as well as afraid to commit to Mason who is completely in love with him. Dizzy’s upset because he’s afraid of losing Artie and Adam both due to Ezra. Artie is concerned about Ezra’s motives and not being taken in by his overwhelming desire for a real relationship with his father. When Adam agreed to the weekend meeting, he specifically put Artie in charge, Dizzy’s overreaction to the evening meeting caused a major disagreement between them because Dizzy was unwilling to support the meeting and was hostile and downright rude to Ezra. Ezra’s never going to win any parenting awards, but Adam and Dizzy should be supportive of Artie’s wishes until a reason to disrupt the meeting is seen. Their fears of losing Artie should not stop them from being supportive. I love Colleen’s advice and I certainly wish Adam could tell Mason how he feels. He could end up losing a terrific guy if he can’t commit. The rest of the impending weekend and meeting are sure to be filled with more emotions. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Elliot’s Big Day

    Outstanding chapter! Elliot has now graduated from Yale University, boy do I feel older now. I clearly remember when he first came into the family. The family is ever changing and continuously growing and you never run out of new things happening with and to them to keep us entertained and living vicariously through them. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  19. Excellent chapter! I’m very disappointed with Masons parents and their uncaring attitude towards their only son’s suffering abuse at school. Dumping the decision on Jimbo’s shoulders is unfair and cruel. Jimbo’s conversation and orders to accomplish the educational tasks by Sunday was perfect. Masons behaviors regarding his school suffering being directed at Jimbo and telling him he hated him was just the first of many teenage tantrums to come. He did apologize for his anger. Jimbo taking Mason to classes with him on Thursday proved that Mason can handle college level courses. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️
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    Chapter 45

    Disturbing chapter! Davin is the friend of Juliana and who she was going to place the twins in his dungeon where he practiced on others to perfect his plan for the twins. I can’t even understand how you prosecute people like this. They’ll plead insanity and get locked up in an asylum for the criminally insane, but with Juliana’s acting abilities, I’m certain that she can eventually convince the social workers that she’s cured and be released, hopefully to a prison cell, or better yet, just charge her with capital crimes and execute them both. The upcoming media storm will be brutal on the entire family. I sincerely hope that you’re done torturing them now and will help them to recover and live completely happy lives together.in relative peace. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter 😡❤️
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    Chapter 13

    Excellent chapter! Leon telling Logan that he’s in love with him, haltingly was just what Logan needed to hear, they’re relationship restored is so nice to see. The plans to ferret out the persons responsible for the assassination attempts by faking the death of Prince Leon are being accepted by Leon better than Logan believed possible. David, and Sadie Riku, Petr, Anselm and Paul not knowing that Leon’s alive is going to be hard on them all. Their grief and reactions are necessary for the plan to protect Leon’s life to succeed. Logan will be in deep trouble with all of them until he can explain after the ringleader and his co-conspirators are captured. Constantine was not who I thought was behind everything. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😳❤️
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    Chapter 12

    Outstanding chapter! Logan and Leon hugging each other on the beach for over an hour, YES! Unfortunately another assassination attempt very much a full frontal attack with guns and multiple shooters is about to make Prince Leon’s life infinitely more complicated with the impending announcement of his being the Crown Prince. He’s going to be forced into the Royal Palace and his security cordon will be extremely tightened. This will definitely make Logan uncomfortable, however I believe that the Queen has a plan to keep them both happy. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter 🤬❤️
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    Breathe

    Excellent chapter! Artie was having trouble focusing during the game until he started using the breathing technique that Jose gave him. He was more focused and confident and played better. The team didn’t have the focus that he and Jose did and they lost by one run. Jose pointed out that the fun had gone out of the game, so he tasked Artie with helping the team with their focus and Jose said he’d bring the fun back into their games. The call with Ezra was surprising in that he remembered what Artie had told him. Artie’s invitation to Ezra is making Adam uncomfortable, but he’s letting Artie make his own decisions. He’ll still support and comfort him if everything goes badly. He’ll help pick up the pieces if necessary. The final games will be more complicated with Ezra on the scene. It will be interesting what effect he’ll have on Artie’s ability to focus during the all important final two games. This visit could be a disaster of epic proportions. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    A Trial Weekend

    Excellent chapter! The relationship between the twins and the Currie family is growing very strong, the twins can’t help feeling safer and happier than when they are constantly reminded of their mother’s illness and death at home. How can they not be thrilled with hanging out with a group of boys similar in age and having fun. The combined family is in for a rough period when the mother dies. I know that Josh, Danny, Brandon and the rest of the family will be there to support and comfort them. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  25. Excellent chapter! Brandon outs Jeremy at the bakery in front of his mother, she’s unhappy packs up and walks out of his life, then Alex confronts Brandon and Brandon is unhappy that Alex doesn’t know him. Alex is finished with Brandon and won’t forget about his betrayal. Jeremy is very sad about his mother’s reaction to him being gay. Alex reassured him that he would support him no matter what happens. Alex has become more mature but still suffers from his addiction. I’m hoping he won’t let Jeremy down. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️
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