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  1. drpaladin

    El Ferrol

    Can we call a delay due to circumstances a fail?
  2. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    Anyone else feeling like a voyeur waiting on the trainwreck we know is coming?
  3. drpaladin

    El Ferrol

    Speaking of waiting, George has something to look forward to in Cartagena.
  4. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    It is now very clear Varilik is the manipulator Ain has warned about. He's massaging all of Fenn's feel good buttons, getting him drunk, and offering his bed. The wedge is getting bigger in real time.
  5. drpaladin

    Chapter 17

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    Chapter 17

    The immediate threat has been removed and the boys are safe. Andrew begins learning his new role, one which will involve deception and more danger.
  7. Life is resistance against the outside world.
  8. drpaladin

    Chapter 5

    A dual romance interlude. Very nice! I had wondered what happened to our brave, young Cam. His Henry is a ball of enthusiastic energy.
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    Chapter 16

    Andrew is now...
  10. drpaladin

    Chapter 41

    You ARE sarcasm? How interesting.
  11. drpaladin

    Chapter 12

    I am beginning to believe this unnatural detachment Fenn has with causing death is directly linked to his shadowforger powers. This lack of empathy is the true crux of shadowforger horror stories.
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    Chapter 41

    Naming the cat Boo made me think of this song.
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    Chapter 41

    I'd be lying if I didn't say I hate Shaun cutting Jesse.
  14. drpaladin

    Chapter 41

    For once everything is going their way. Now if only this cretin Bobby business could get sorted, things would be nearly perfect.
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    Chapter 16

    The Dark Sovereign is annointed. The next phase, Castle Fall, can begin.
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    Chapter 16

    "Looks like he fell." A brick seems solid, immutable, and impenetrable. But bricks can shatter and turn to dust. Clovis shattered Brick merely by responding to his violence. Brick is both history and erased.
  17. Without some struggle there can be no pride of accomplishment.
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    Chapter 4

    They should have added the zero. They already know Elias and Theo are their biggest threat, but they don't know KNOW.
  19. drpaladin

    Chapter 15

    You can get prions from vegetables too.
  20. drpaladin

    Chapter 15

    At any given time, around 90,000 people are missing in the US. Of those, roughly 7% are not found either timely or ever. It's a huge number.
  21. drpaladin

    Chapter 11

    Varilik's plan is becoming clear. He's slowly driving a wedge between Ain and Fenn. Ain has waited too late to reasonably inform Fenn of how manipulative and dishonest he can be.
  22. drpaladin

    Chapter 15

    As we've seen, to the powers that be Denton and the Cross are nothing more than replaceable tools. There may be some concern, but it won't bring down the whole house. The Cross is done. Without the mortar of Dent, Brick is a brick.
  23. drpaladin

    Chapter 15

    Whenever a mobster gets old, bored, and wants to feel relevant, a new what happened to Jimmy Hoffa story pops up. So far he's somewhere between Michigan and the East Coast. As one missing persons expert said, he's a liquid. You can't find a liquid.
  24. drpaladin

    Chapter 15

    He was hurt. Denton told him he was useless. Fitzy didn't see his truck. He had to have left.
  25. drpaladin

    Chapter 15

    You have given an accurate and visceral description of shock from Andrew's perspective.
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