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  1. drpaladin

    El Ferrol

    LOL
  2. drpaladin

    Chapter 14

    Ain's reaction and actions were predictable and Varilik had to know. Now I not only question Varilik's motives, but his loyalty to the country. Fenn is powerful, but he can't protect the entire army alone. Ain leaving and being demoted will only lower morale more. This war will fail and Varilik will pin the blame on Ain.
  3. drpaladin

    Chapter 41

    As you know, I call 'em as I see 'em. I say BS.
  4. drpaladin

    El Ferrol

    Perhaps, like the baths, these coaches will inspire him to make upgrades.
  5. drpaladin

    Chapter 41

    Honestly, I would rather see Jesse pull Shaun out of this habit than indulge it. It's a symptom he's still broken when he's made so much progress.
  6. drpaladin

    El Ferrol

    It's often overlooked how much wood was needed to build warships. The HMS Victory took 100 acres of trees, around 6,800 trees.
  7. drpaladin

    Chapter 1

    Axl revealed. Not just naked, but that too. Axl is a caregiver. Orel, in his seemingly distracted way, sees everything. Sausage Delivery Protocol II in progress.
  8. drpaladin

    Prologue

    What a delightfully quirky pair.
  9. drpaladin

    Prologue

    Axl, the most consciencious Domino's guy ever. I mean, going in so early in the morning.
  10. Fractures of any kind aren't fun.
  11. drpaladin

    Chapter 6

    Happy Birthday!!
  12. drpaladin

    Chapter 6

    Where's Jules when he's needed?
  13. drpaladin

    Chapter 6

    Poor Timmy. His love for Bobby overcame his fear. Bobby is a better shot than he showed here. Why not shoot the means of escape? Obviously, they won't simply give up. Who at the bank gave them the list?
  14. drpaladin

    Chapter 17

    Will can be delightfully oblivious at times.
  15. drpaladin

    El Ferrol

    There is another factor in play. For once in his life, he's not in the middle of a war. He can reasonably expect there will be a tomorrow, a next week, a next month, or even a next year.
  16. drpaladin

    El Ferrol

    Ah, but the important thing here is he could have had a quick tryst but chose not to. George has matured.
  17. drpaladin

    Chapter 5

    When Topher slips in a sweet chapter, I get nervous. You know something bad is coming.
  18. drpaladin

    El Ferrol

    Can we call a delay due to circumstances a fail?
  19. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    Anyone else feeling like a voyeur waiting on the trainwreck we know is coming?
  20. drpaladin

    El Ferrol

    Speaking of waiting, George has something to look forward to in Cartagena.
  21. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    It is now very clear Varilik is the manipulator Ain has warned about. He's massaging all of Fenn's feel good buttons, getting him drunk, and offering his bed. The wedge is getting bigger in real time.
  22. drpaladin

    Chapter 17

  23. drpaladin

    Chapter 17

    The immediate threat has been removed and the boys are safe. Andrew begins learning his new role, one which will involve deception and more danger.
  24. Life is resistance against the outside world.
  25. drpaladin

    Chapter 5

    A dual romance interlude. Very nice! I had wondered what happened to our brave, young Cam. His Henry is a ball of enthusiastic energy.
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