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    Chapter 3

    drpaladin commented on Libby Drew's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Whether guilty or not, it's seldom a good idea to submit to an interview by federal agents without counsel present. It's due to the process crime of lying to a federal agent. Even if the lie is unwitting, it's still a crime. As shown, FBI agents don't tape interviews in the field, but take contemporaneous notes which are seen as iron clad evidence in court.
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    Ilya couldn't have possibly foreseen what would happen with Unadi. She's being foolish and causing her friends needless pain.
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    Chapter 2

    drpaladin commented on Libby Drew's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Perhaps, but even tame he was still a wolf with a wolf's instincts. Even domesticated dogs can and do eat their dead owners if they are hungry. For now it's still a mystery.
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    Chapter 3

    drpaladin commented on Libby Drew's story chapter in Chapter 3

    From the hints, it was from a fire which killed the rest of his family.
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    Chapter 3

    drpaladin commented on Libby Drew's story chapter in Chapter 3

    "I am a suspect in a murder case." Oh, I so saw this one coming. If we are meant to know the truth, it will find us. Whether we want it to or not.” Fatalistic, but often true. *** There is an odd dynamic still at work between Michael and Chase. I get the idea Michael's feelings for Chase run stronger than friendship but weren't mirrored.
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    Fennah and black. It isn't what you'd associate with such a bubbly personality.
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    Chapter 2

    drpaladin commented on Roland's story chapter in Chapter 2

    How was the Green able to shift? Did he learn it on his own or was he taught?
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    If you don't serve it with coffee, should you still call it coffeecake?
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    There is an underlying narrative here. Regardless of their current appearance or abilities, all the Bio Shifts we've seen are still who they were before.
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    If you go to the imagination place but don't remember anything, how do you know you imagined anything at all?
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    You need a mind to go there. I like Sumi's concrete solution better.
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    Too bad eating a mantis gland doesn't hit everyone like it did Unadi. Problem solved.
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    For those who don't remember, the cute redheaded girl is Lahari before she was changed. Lahari is being led home.
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    Chapter 2

    drpaladin commented on Roland's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Xavier and his band function like a well oiled machine. Even to untrained eyes, it's clear they have fought many battles together. We know why fighting dragons is nothing to then, but these caravaneers are still in the dark. They have no idea they are in the presence of a king, but also a great dragon in disguise. I can't wait until more is revealed.
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    Where Jzuna and Thech go is more astral than the one Sumi manipulates. They will lead Lahari back to her physical form.
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    Middleschooler ? Rotund ones, I presume.
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    My mother simply described herself as a big person. It was ambiguous, and in her case could be interpreted in different ways.
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    She.
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    So you would prefer...
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    Rotund is a very polite way of saying someone is fat.
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    One now and one for the road. Going to Xin is smart, perhaps by accident. Their predators are all in Teshon City.
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    Standby for next time when she teaches him about franastans.
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    The Cornishman

    drpaladin commented on Stephen Wormwood's story chapter in The Cornishman

    What we see here is someone who has been taught to hate himself and his desires, seeing them as amorphous sins. It's sad to see such self-loathing. Well crafted.
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    Olona built up Kosephaji's confidence, something he needed badly. Who knew dizinilers were so important?
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    Since it caused the reaction, I'd think it dissolved as well.
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