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    Chapter 2

    drpaladin commented on Roland's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Xavier and his band function like a well oiled machine. Even to untrained eyes, it's clear they have fought many battles together. We know why fighting dragons is nothing to then, but these caravaneers are still in the dark. They have no idea they are in the presence of a king, but also a great dragon in disguise. I can't wait until more is revealed.
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    Where Jzuna and Thech go is more astral than the one Sumi manipulates. They will lead Lahari back to her physical form.
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    Middleschooler ? Rotund ones, I presume.
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    My mother simply described herself as a big person. It was ambiguous, and in her case could be interpreted in different ways.
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    She.
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    So you would prefer...
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    Rotund is a very polite way of saying someone is fat.
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    One now and one for the road. Going to Xin is smart, perhaps by accident. Their predators are all in Teshon City.
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    Standby for next time when she teaches him about franastans.
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    The Cornishman

    drpaladin commented on Stephen Wormwood's story chapter in The Cornishman

    What we see here is someone who has been taught to hate himself and his desires, seeing them as amorphous sins. It's sad to see such self-loathing. Well crafted.
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    Olona built up Kosephaji's confidence, something he needed badly. Who knew dizinilers were so important?
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    Since it caused the reaction, I'd think it dissolved as well.
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    Since Junza demonstrated the ability to also pick up small loose dirt, why sweep at all?
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    In sports, it's a period the game is divided into.
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    Unadi solved his own problem by rotting from inside out.
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    "Maybe he did something wrong." Now that's a hoot. His power killed anyone who stayed anywhere near him. It wasn't his conscious action, but all those deaths and his isolation were bound to leave some trauma.
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    This is an interesting read about one man's effort to save bushmasters, which are an endangered species. https://time.com/longform/snake-venom-cancer-research/
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    We are getting to the culmination of this 'not a good idea' arc. When Olona read about the negatives of removing Mantis glands, she should have had some second thoughts.
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    The first gun they made was the Bushmaster Arm Pistol, which was initially designed as a survival arm for the USAF but never adopted.
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    I'd say stating Unadi's treatment had some consequences is an understatement. He's gone drop dead crazy. I knew the boys had to connect up with Olona sooner or later.
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    Chapter 28 S1

    drpaladin commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 28 S1

    Well, that was weird. First time I had a quote I made on another story follow me to another.
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    Chapter 28 S1

    drpaladin commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 28 S1

    I don't believe 'I swear it looked like a bear' would go very far.
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    I'd have a better chance of waking up on another planet.
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    It looks like the side effects of Unadi losing his mantis gland are beginning to show. Tchama has become secure in who and what she is and good for her. Not long ago this would have left her in tears.
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    I had to lookup what the heck a Kiki is.
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