MrM

Perhaps it is an implied measure of trust on Brian's part. I don't know, I'll have to ask him

The soundtrack I posted can help.

Chapter 17: San Francisco: Fever https://www.gayauthors.org/story/mrm/snowflakealovestory/17

Snowflake Sometimes it is the eyes that get you. They lock on and you cannot look away whatever you do. They hold you faster than even the warm smooth hands around your naked waist and buttocks. They come closer and closer until two eyes almost become one eye. Then those eyes are only there because they have burned themselves into your mind behind your now closed eyes. They continue to stare at you hard with a hunger soon to be vanquished as the moistness of his plush lips p

I think Snowflake had ulterior motives . . . read on.

I matched a song to this scene in Snowflake's eventual sequel. 'Sweet Harmony' by The Beloved. I can't listen to that song now without getting a little aroused.

Snowflake just had to feel dat butt! Hehehehe!

Mental fencing is fun!

Yay! Yes, this is a character driven story.

I'll watch it on demand tomorrow night. I am excited!

Every time I listen to this song by Keane it reminds me so much of Justin and Taryn (references to girls aside ) . Silenced By The Night

This has been getting a lot of airplay here in SoCal too! Cool band! Ominous rumbling down there though! For all its 80s cheeziness, this song represents the exact moment of my Gay sexual awakening. I just fell in complete love with Christopher Atkins. I still have a thing for him.

Happy Birthday, Mr. Fashionista. I hope you embrace the fact that you are alive for another day with another opportunity to find something to make you happy. Each new day brings a new chance to find something or someone that can make you smile. Even if it is a silly picture of a cute guy (possibly named 'Jimmy') winking at you from somewhere in Hawaii.

"He done drugged it out acrosst the flo', I reckon." < My Awntiee who done lived in Mississippi for a time or t'other,.

I'm surrounded by vampires! I am working my way through GFD while at the same time finishing Tale of the Body Thief by Anne Rice while at the same time cogitating my own vamipre novel The Seducer! I feel aroused!

I agree with Lisa, completely. When I had my editor they were a godsend to me, but unfortunately I lost them because of the workload. I have since had trouble getting another one. Again, I blame myself. I fear editors even though I know I shouldn't. I have to be careful to balance my need for excellence with my confidence to go on. I think many new writers find the tension between these two things difficult to manage. I suppose that is what separates a successful author from everybody else. But fear of failing is the author's bane and the editor holds the power to help an author through this or kill them creatively, hence the fear. So, I suppose a suggestion for a next segment of this invaluable series would be 'How to attract and keep an editor'.

Yes. But it is my latest one and I'm also writing the next chapter of Snowflake so it sort of all fit together. Thank you for commenting!

I know that comments are more precious than gold to me. I try to comment where I read. Unfortunately my time is so limited that I often have to make a choice to write or read, but not always both. I've already fallen into the trap of posting chapters before finishing a story, mostly because I didn't know any better when I started here. So, for all the new prospective authors out there I'd seriously consider finishing your stories before posting them here. I am now stuck releasing things when I can which is not always weekly. It's usually monthly and it depends on my schedule and where the story needs to go. As such, I've lost a lot of readership which hurts. To those who have stuck with me, be assured I will finish all of my works. Let me be an object lesson in what not to do if I can't offer any other advice. Persevere regardless.

You too, Ashikins. I miss chatting with you! I incorporated 'Did You See Me Coming' to one of my soundtrack outlines for another story. You inspired me!

Awwww . . . that's so sweet!!

A Love Poem: https://www.gayauthors.org/story/mrm/MPoetry/12

Emporio, Santorini (Atlantis), GR

Happy Birthday, Huntiekins! I miss chatting with you.

Nagasaki, JP