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  1. Parker Owens

    Chapter 23

    This is a fantastic chapter. Then again, it's a fantastic story. Jackson's change into someone actually thoughtful and caring about another has been so artfully done that it becomes hard to recall what he was like before. The whole homecoming game and dance dilemma had me smirking, as did the interrupted make-out session. And poor Cindy. When is she going to realize that hovering is not going to change Luke into the porcelain figurine she seems to want for a son? As it is, Jackson's mom is far more perceptive, and kind. And maybe, just, maybe, the new Jackson will be worthy of that.
  2. This chapter speaks volumes about how some families and some siblings get nearly everything right. As Cesar and Brett muse, they aren't quite sure how it happens, but it does. CJ and Owen had me enjoying the party, and you floored me and Ethan with the whole green eyed jealousy thing. But the best part was the morning after with Ritchie standing up for his brothers. This is a standout chapter!
  3. Parker Owens

    Diversions

    Yeah, you can tell what might be happening. Their time just zipped past. Interesting, yes...thanks for reading and for your comments!
  4. Parker Owens

    Diversions

    I think Wally probably finds the Japanese text distracting. The general outline might be visible in the story, but the text might mean something important. He might find a translation on the internet, but that's not something he will find right at the moment. But you are right in that Graham and Wally have had a lovely, unconstrained conversation, and that's the best thing he's experienced in a while. Many thanks for your very perceptive thoughts and for reading the story!
  5. Parker Owens

    Chapter 6

    This chapter really shows Nathan in a very good light. He seems to be a wonderful man. As Corey said, he'll be even more wonderful if he's willing to wait for Liam. Which, knowing Liam, would be a very good choice for Nathan to make. It was very, very wise for Liam to clear the air with Nathan, seeing as Nathan reacted as I might have expected and hoped. A lovely chapter. More please? Now?
  6. Several nights later, he was deep into the project of sorting out Cookie's cryptic ship's accounting. He'd created a spreadsheet which had begun to sprawl wildly, despite his best attempts to tame it. He'd put together coffee and early morning munchies for researchers staying up, and then went back to the puzzle. He thought he had part of the problem licked by using several clever sorting commands, but a whole lot of the entries defied classification. He'd actually had to go and look up things i
  7. I cannot help being delighted with the discussion on CPE Bach. I quite agree that he lives far too much in JS's shadows. This discussion is generally making me (1) despair over and (2) rethink the music history course I get to (occasionally) teach. If there are any suggestions for a revamp, I'd be all ears.
  8. I love this poem. It is utterly entrancing. Your depiction of the wind, whispering, reminding, recalling...how wonderful.
  9. Yes, and I wept, too. Your words to Michael, and then his to you opened the floodgates. These are terrifying, courageous and beautiful words. Beautiful.
  10. Parker Owens

    Backstage Tryst

    What a story. You write the sex so vividly and smoothly; such things are often hard to write. And it attracts for all the things that went untold, too - now I want to know how they connected, where our narrator had to go through...all that, and what happened after, of course. Perfectly marvelous.
  11. It is very hard to bare your soul and be vulnerable, either to the boy you liked, or to a community like this one. This guy would have had a heart of granite not to appreciate a poem like this, though. It is true and lovely and beautiful; it is nothing to be sorry about. Happy Valentine's Day!
  12. Parker Owens

    Valentine

    Hoping these made you feel a little better, brother. I am glad they appealed to you, and maybe they were as good as a hug.
  13. Parker Owens

    Valentine

    Perhaps not what Hallmark would have printed, but they express a love and hope that's true. I am grateful you read them, and thought them good.
  14. Parker Owens

    Valentine

    I would, indeed! Thanks for reading these and I am very glad you enjoyed them, especially Valentine. I hoped you would .
  15. Parker Owens

    Valentine

    Hugs in return! And thank you very much for your kind review. Happy Valentines's to you, too.
  16. Parker Owens

    Valentine

    Thank you very much for reading through these and responding to them. I hoped that the first one would have the power to charm. The second is a bit sad, I agree, but I hoped to give the sense of waking to one's beloved. I am glad the pictures are vivid enough to come through.
  17. Parker Owens

    Valentine

    Thanks so very much for reading and comments on these. Sometimes, the words just take care of themselves.
  18. Valentine I rue the day I came into this world, and blame the angels who misread the date of my arrival, limbs and hands unfurled, untimely, and abominably late; Not only did they err as to the year, they utterly mislaid the proper map, so I came all too wrongly, and I fear geography compounded my mishap. Yet even though both time and tide divide, our spirits join together in the dance of poetry and story, closely tied, to celebrate the triumphs of romance. Though age and dis
  19. I am now blushing a deep Valentine's Day red. Thank you for reading through the whole story, and for your very, very kind remarks. It is a very hard story, at first - and for some very unfortunate kids in North America, all too true in one aspect or another. As a happy-ending addict, I would not have left Andy to hurt forever, though. Each of the characters in this tale lives in my head, still. I hope you have enjoyed making their acquaintance, too.
  20. What a zinger at the end! Sybil has a mate! It seems that the truest thing is that the shifters have some of their confidence back, and can begin to look with hope to the future. But now I worry at the price Kellar seems to pay for all the healing he has been doing. Is it possible for him to be hurt in healing? Is there a chance that Kellar might a healing and not ever come back? If Tobyn gets that idea, there could be a real, fierce, snarling argument; a true, um, dogfight. Great chapter... wanting more!
  21. Parker Owens

    Chapter 8

    You have give us a chapter in which Marty and Hrishi, who have been circling around each other to a great extent, fully collide. The result is undeniably heated and sexy. I appreciate how you don't turn this into an event that sweeps away every previous impression each had of the other. If such things change, they often change more slowly. But I, for one, would like to see each one give a little more...both to and for the other. Great chapter.
  22. You have me in your corner, thinking of you, hoping for you. There is a deep well of love and peace in all of us. And given what you have lived through, I will not bet on the doctors...
  23. Thank you for reading this story, and at such a rate! I am particularly grateful for your saying Tricia not a soap opera Ina traditional sense. Andy is a deeply hurt young man, who has finally found someone - actually several someones - who love him. Monica was a fun character to write; a mom who knows how to parent (she thinks), but who hasn't met anyone like Andy, either. And you are right in that an adult who can apologize will make an enormous impression on Andy. I appreciate your review, and hope you continue to enjoy Andy's story.
  24. Parker Owens

    Chapter 20

    A beautiful chapter. Tyler shows himself to be a friend and then a boyfriend who is wonderful and patient. Ryder is very, very lucky.
  25. Parker Owens

    Quiet Days

    Growth and change are slow processes. They of go unmarked and get glossed over in fiction. I have tried not to let that happen here. Thank you for reaffirming me in my decision. I am very grateful for that. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
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