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  1. Parker Owens

    At Play

    Scott has indeed found what he was missing. Well said. Scott remembers who and what he was, though, and that must gives him pause, as we have observed. Yes, he has certainly changed, no question. But he must have some very uncomfortable memories, to say the least. Perhaps it is these that give his current condition, and his deepening love for Graham, such meaning. Thanks for your perceptive reading and very kind remarks.
  2. Parker Owens

    At Play

    You are very likely to turn my head. Scott and Graham has a really nice ring, to it...and the relatively slow pace at which they advance to sex must have driven Scott crazy. Deliciously so, and enough to surprise him, perhaps. Their love is indeed sweet, and maybe redemptive, too. Thanks for your support and kind thoughts.
  3. Parker Owens

    At Play

    This chapter felt satisfying on many different levels, and you identified many of them. For once, Scott is happy, and happy as being part of Scott AND Graham. This is a real first for him, and perhaps this is most satisfying to me. Many thanks for your perceptive reading, and for sticking with the story,
  4. I think the theory that the waitress was trying to pick Matt up is the right one. But that memorable line with stick with him for a while, I bet. Getting Ginny HIV test results? Didn't see that one coming...thanks for the new installment...
  5. Parker Owens

    At Play

    Graham seems to have brought out some wonderful things in Scott. It's possible, too, that Scott has captivated Graham, and made him think a little bit less about all his research...at least not all the time. Many thanks for reading and for your review.
  6. Parker Owens

    Chapter 1

    Jesse and Marty make quite a pair! Where were they when I was growing up? What a pity I never made it to San Diego. They are quite an appealing partnership...thanks for writing about them.
  7. Parker Owens

    June 2015

    Brad is undergoing an intervention at CJ's insistence. Maybe it will work out. Maybe not...Brad may need more help and counsel than he currently admits. But we know CJ and his family and friends will be there for him. Loved the interplay with each couple following on in the beginning...each talking about the one in front. Splendid writing.
  8. Parker Owens

    Chapter 10

    Thought for Liam: Yes, by all means talk to Aleksei. But be certain that you are ready, first. Thought for Nathan: you are one very fine individual, and a paragon of a friend. You may be far too good for Bryce. Thought for Lit: This is a splendid story, and a delight to read...and to anticipate. Thanks for writing it.
  9. Parker Owens

    At Play

    I like the chrysalis metaphor. It may be particularly apt. Scott could not be the man we are beginning to know without having gone through being 'Wally' first. And it is clear that Graham loves Scott AND Wally. Many thanks for your insights and for reading the story!
  10. Parker Owens

    At Play

    Well. I hope you found it worth reading, anyhow Scott and Graham did not dive directly into sex, but their mutual attraction made intimacy inevitable. And while this perhaps frustrates both of them a bit, I think it has Scott thinking things he's never considered before. And it is sweet, isn't it?
  11. Parker Owens

    At Play

    Thank you, tim. I am so glad you thought so!
  12. Parker Owens

    At Play

    The bunk was narrow, really far too narrow for two bodies, but he hardly minded. Especially as the two bodies in question were still pressed together quite closely; Scott and Graham. He was spooned up behind Graham, clad only in underwear. Through the fabric, he felt his own cock nestling in his lover's naked groove. His one hand grasped Graham's iron hard member, his other arm wrapped around Graham's chest holding him close. He paused, panting slightly, trying to prolong the pleasure for both o
  13. Parker Owens

    Chapter 2

    I am captivated by Su Yin, who seems so beautiful and innocent, yet doesn't know it. And it takes a demon to convince him otherwise. Perhaps this demon is not everything legend has created him to be. And if that were so, what might become of the pair?
  14. Parker Owens

    Chapter 4

    Jim is so thoroughly bruised and battered by his misfortunes and reversals that its a wonder he can speak to anyone. But he does seem to give of himself, from whatever little he has left in reserve. He seems well on his way to being a brooding and bitter old man in rundown New England town. He'll make a great central character in a horror movie, unless there is something or someone to help him. Or so it seems to me.
  15. Parker Owens

    Chapter 3

    Ron seems to be in more and more pain, the more and more he tells us. Why ever did he come home? There seems to be no joy in Waldron for him.
  16. What a very beautiful meeting of mates; you described the immediate attachment between Delia and Hutch brilliantly. The move was undoubtedly accelerated by mates sensing each other, and not just Hutch, Arthur, Sybil and Delia. And of course, being allowed to see our favorite pair in their own mating... Very lovely.
  17. I did, and it's fantastic...
  18. This is quite beautiful, utterly enchanting. It has a dreamlike quality that will echo in my mind for a long time.The first stanza's images are arresting - cold and warm juxtaposed so effortlessly - while the second stanza's allusions to the cosmos and the divine make me hear music. The third stanza showers a radiant smile over your beloved. Your special someone is a particularly fortunate person to have you write like this.
  19. Parker Owens

    Chapter 12

    The sun is not shining completely on Marty and Hrishi yet, but the clouds have certainly dissipated to some degree. Maybe they're breaking up. And if so, there could be a particularly interesting, lovely and heated relationship for them both to experience. If this chapter shows us anything, it's that openness will only deepen their ties. Many thanks.
  20. What a powerful response to a horrible place you felt you were in. And I can relate, each word a missile, a brickbat, a stone thrown at your head and heart. I am glad you are not there, now.
  21. Parker Owens

    Chasing Jayce

    Now that's one hell of an April Fool's joke. Perfectly timed, perfectly executed, and absolutely stunning. If I were Andy, I might not forgive Jayce, although the kiss at the end of the story would certainly take some of the sting away. Perhaps a few more kisses, and Andy could be convinced to forget all about it...This is a wonderful story. Love how the anticipation of making a digital friendship real is built up and then deflated - only to be brought fully back to life! Many thanks!
  22. Parker Owens

    Downhearted

    I absolutely loved this story. It took the theme and wrapped it around my heart. Wonderfully done. Many thanks for this delightful and touching tale.
  23. Parker Owens

    Fool Me Once

    Things like this can't really happen, can they? And the cheesy last line! Perfect.
  24. Parker Owens

    Happy Birthday!

    Someone who needed and deserved an extra special day - no, bunches of them - got one. I am very glad the narrator found someone who will look beyond the obvious and see the person who wanted to be loved and delighted in for himself.
  25. Oliver Treadwell sighed heavily for something like the thousandth time. He did not mind air travel, not at all, but he wasn't a frequent flyer. Packed into a too-small window seat without sufficient legroom, he squirmed, trying to find a least uncomfortable position. "Excuse me," he apologized to his seatmate as his elbow strayed into her territory, "sorry about that." "First time flying?" "No, no, just anxious, that's all." The large auburn-haired woman nodded in understanding. "Nothing to
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