Parker Owens
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Now there is a metaphor I hadn't considered. Wow. I am glad that symbol occurred to you; even more happy that this chapter was a good one for you. And yes, Scott has come a very, very, long way. Thanks so much for your insights and for continuing to read the story.
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Thanks, tim. To climb from the bottom - if it's at all possible, as you say - often means detours, switchbacks, and indirect approaches. Scott has learned some of this. And I know Graham wants to be there to help Scott climb, and shield him from the very aptly figured boot. Thanks again for reading and for your generous encouragement.
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Yay for early reviewers....thanks very much for this review. This was a hard chapter to write in that the change in character had to be plain, yet (I hoped) not beaten to death or made too obvious. The change from using another, to engaging with another as equals is a huge transition. Scott has learned about this, with Graham's help. And of course, it is fun to see them enjoy the process . But that Scott can feel emotion, and appreciate Graham's need just shows how far he has come from his predatory past. Many thanks for your steadfast support and really thoughtful reviews.
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Scott is now for real. The predator he was seems to be gone, left behind in the sea. And now Graham has pulled Scott out of the sea, and into his arms. You are right - both Scott and Graham are vulnerable and, well, human. I am glad you feel joy and some sense of celebration. Thank you so much for continuing to read the story, and for your thoughtful and generous comments.
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Can I say that you made me very happy with "worth waiting 25 chapters to see...?" I am very glad you thought that point in the story was worth the read and the wait. Scott has come a very long way, though there is more growth yet in him, certainly. I am glad the story got you right, um, there. Many thanks for reading and for your very kind comments.
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Well, a little fun and a night out were definitely in order. And Bryce was certainly all over that idea! Alek on longer appears to be attached to a girlfriend. Hmmm. And the Russian's concern and attention both at the washroom, and afterwards, was touching. But it simply points more emphatically at the choice Liam is going to have to make one day or another. Nathan must know where he stands, and Liam must do more than say the right words. If Liam can't forget about Alek, I can't imagine he won't send Nathan away - he's just too nice a guy to string someone along. But then, what do I know? I'm not the author of this perfectly enthralling story...
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Thanks for your insight and thoughtful response. No, I don't think the old predator would have wanted anything to do with previously worn clothing. As for the new man who emerged from the sea, well, he was there all along, wasn't he? It is hard to know. I enjoyed writing this chapter, and was glad not to have a cliffie at the end. Graham has had enough excitement for one night...
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You have a marvelous sense of metaphor...what a great way to look at it. Thanks for continuing to read the story, and I hope you enjoy it.
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Finally, a name for the man who had none. And your comment about finally thinking with the heart instead of the libido is exactly right. I think Wally (thanks for not letting on)is finding this both exhilarating and difficult. It says a lot about Graham that Wally is thinking that way. Many thanks for your comments and for reading this story!
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I had the feeling you'd be happy with this chapter... Thanks!
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It took the enormous wave five, perhaps seven, seconds to fully pass over the Feigenbaum. The ship rose sturdily, allowing seawater to wash away and out of the scuppers and back into the Gulf. Its engines turned steadily, pushing forward slowly into the face of the oncoming weather and waves. Nothing terribly remarkable. But those seconds were easily the longest of his life. He’d been hit by the wall of water like a full body blow; he felt the sea trying to scrape him off the side of
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Your warm words of affirmation are very kind and very generous. I am glad you want to read more. Wally finally wants to do something for another person - something incredibly foolish, something touchingly sacrificial - and he's about to get hit. Wally has changed, hasn't he? But is that change going to matter? But you are surely right that Graham must be horrified...thanks again!
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Untitled, Special Delivery, and Seasons
Parker Owens commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Untitled, Special Delivery, and Seasons
All three are differently beautiful, Val. I delighted in the Shakespearean allusion in #1, knowing exactly what you mean about the discontents of winter. In #2, your brilliant last lines utterly shift the view and tone of the poem. This is a marvelous twist. And in #3, your observations about the wind and your return to its recurrent (and unfulfilled) promises ache with melancholy. I loved the image of the wind chasing 'bored leaves' and of the wind bringing weather out of its season. For sadness and hurt are often unseasonable, aren't they? I send you hugs for your melancholy, but kudos for your captivating work. -
Chapter 46 Shining a Bright Light into Darkness
Parker Owens commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 46 Shining a Bright Light into Darkness
Let the move begin. It's not exile, it's hope. Vega will be back, and sooner than they think....and the new Cahlar is taking his mantle up. Will his live for Tobyn survive it? -
This poem's yours, oh, Emi bright, I want to see your face this night, and you can smile or laugh or frown (as long as you don't wear the crown)...
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Thank you, Emi. I am glad you thought it lovely. Dawn comes in many ways and many forms, as you say. But it is one of the few events that unifies all seven billion of us, I think. So does yearning that comes with Dawn. Anyway, thanks so much.
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Emi's picture is a must, making mine to be as dust, trailing postings is his bait, truth be told, I just can't wait...
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Marty came to Hrishi's defense, and quite convincingly. I hope Hrishi doesn't think of sex with Marty as some kind of quid pro quo; that would very likely poison their already fraught relationship. The scene with Leon had me just about shouting: 'grow a pair and tell your best friend, dammit!' Well done...
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Matt completes an eventful holiday weekend with his sister, and you represent these moments with grace and humor. He a very fortunate man. Matt is even more fortunate for having Parker, which you show us again in their reunion. The story about Parker's friend Barbara is both scary and ominous. A very good chapter.
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I am so very glad you stuck with the story from Stefan to Eric to Andy...and to Zander. The dark clouds eventually face way to sunshine. The story was written for all the Stefans and Eric's and Andy's of our world, hoping that we can be more mindful of them, and willing to help. Many thanks for reading, and for your very kind review.
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A very thought provoking three lines. I like this. Thanks.
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Oh, jealousy! Well sent up and described...Tom had better watch out, because Jeff has definitely laid claim. But will Tom contest it? And how cute the 'sleepover' request is. And convenient...
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And now, in the morning after, you show us Jeff and Paul in a somewhat more practical mood. They have a real discussion about moving forward, even as things have already happened so fast. Do they feel that, too?
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What an effective poem you write: you have me trembling with you, anticipating, feeling and imaging sensations. And in this, you also project love and intimacy, as the line 'play the keys of my soul' resonated so much with me. This was magnificent.
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One single chapter, and a long, lovely hot ride. You write live at first sight really well.
