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Definitely allowed to be a thing, LOL. I'll bet you a couple of looonies on that. Sorry, couldn't resist. But isn't it wonderful how the world is changing? Thanks for your thoughts and support, even with my bad puns.
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Chapter 1- The Grid and Dice Newsletter Game
Parker Owens commented on Drew Espinosa's story chapter in Chapter 1- The Grid and Dice Newsletter Game
A day Devin let life roll off his back, like water off a...oh. There's a metaphor, I think. I like the very real touches and vivid detail you add. Hope there is more someday! -
All sorts of interesting and unanswered questions here. I loved this tale, and imagining all the unspoken background is only half the fun!
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Oh the poor brother! Oh the poor family that gets to try and put all the pieces back together! Great story!
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Isaac Goldeneye sighed deeply as he pulled his rental car into the darkened grocery store parking lot. He pulled a hand over his face trying to wipe away the weariness. He got out and headed inside. It had been a long day in a strange town, and Roswell, New Mexico, seemed stranger than most. Isaac needed something to eat. In the deli area, he found some pre-packaged sushi, a few shrimp spring rolls, and a salad. The pleasant girl at the checkout smiled at him. Girls often did, to his discomfor
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Written in response to the Grid and Dice Prompt: A lonely duck who can't shift flies away from Roswell, NM with "Shit, they saw me!" echoing in his brain.
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A man at the twilight of his career is invited to a speaking engagement. What he hears in response matters.
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And now I feel sucker punched, too. Artfully, seductively done. You are crafty and a craftsman and you have my full admiration for this piece. All the little touches from the meal to the setting to Jason's description perfectly misdirected me. And the finish! Bravo.
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What Happily Ever After Really Looks Like
Parker Owens commented on mitchelll's story chapter in What Happily Ever After Really Looks Like
So happily ever after begins here. What stony, I suspicious start. And what a duplicitous bastard Reed is. -
As you so often do, you write a wealth of detail and weave so much substance into this chapter. From the scenes in Miami (roving eyes, CJ? ) to the surprise party, you give us vivid looks at the world you have opened up for us. What are we to make of Thiago, whose character and depth increased considerably in this part of the story? Saying 'no' to a US Senator makes him a worthy friend to CJ, indeed. And when Ritchie comes to DC to live, maybe CJ's joy will be complete. Although, given the comments about Owen's state of dress in the morning, and the noise level in the basement, maybe his joy is pretty full, as it is.
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Now there is a metaphor I hadn't considered. Wow. I am glad that symbol occurred to you; even more happy that this chapter was a good one for you. And yes, Scott has come a very, very, long way. Thanks so much for your insights and for continuing to read the story.
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Thanks, tim. To climb from the bottom - if it's at all possible, as you say - often means detours, switchbacks, and indirect approaches. Scott has learned some of this. And I know Graham wants to be there to help Scott climb, and shield him from the very aptly figured boot. Thanks again for reading and for your generous encouragement.
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Yay for early reviewers....thanks very much for this review. This was a hard chapter to write in that the change in character had to be plain, yet (I hoped) not beaten to death or made too obvious. The change from using another, to engaging with another as equals is a huge transition. Scott has learned about this, with Graham's help. And of course, it is fun to see them enjoy the process . But that Scott can feel emotion, and appreciate Graham's need just shows how far he has come from his predatory past. Many thanks for your steadfast support and really thoughtful reviews.
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Scott is now for real. The predator he was seems to be gone, left behind in the sea. And now Graham has pulled Scott out of the sea, and into his arms. You are right - both Scott and Graham are vulnerable and, well, human. I am glad you feel joy and some sense of celebration. Thank you so much for continuing to read the story, and for your thoughtful and generous comments.
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Can I say that you made me very happy with "worth waiting 25 chapters to see...?" I am very glad you thought that point in the story was worth the read and the wait. Scott has come a very long way, though there is more growth yet in him, certainly. I am glad the story got you right, um, there. Many thanks for reading and for your very kind comments.
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Well, a little fun and a night out were definitely in order. And Bryce was certainly all over that idea! Alek on longer appears to be attached to a girlfriend. Hmmm. And the Russian's concern and attention both at the washroom, and afterwards, was touching. But it simply points more emphatically at the choice Liam is going to have to make one day or another. Nathan must know where he stands, and Liam must do more than say the right words. If Liam can't forget about Alek, I can't imagine he won't send Nathan away - he's just too nice a guy to string someone along. But then, what do I know? I'm not the author of this perfectly enthralling story...
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Thanks for your insight and thoughtful response. No, I don't think the old predator would have wanted anything to do with previously worn clothing. As for the new man who emerged from the sea, well, he was there all along, wasn't he? It is hard to know. I enjoyed writing this chapter, and was glad not to have a cliffie at the end. Graham has had enough excitement for one night...
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You have a marvelous sense of metaphor...what a great way to look at it. Thanks for continuing to read the story, and I hope you enjoy it.
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Finally, a name for the man who had none. And your comment about finally thinking with the heart instead of the libido is exactly right. I think Wally (thanks for not letting on)is finding this both exhilarating and difficult. It says a lot about Graham that Wally is thinking that way. Many thanks for your comments and for reading this story!
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I had the feeling you'd be happy with this chapter... Thanks!
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It took the enormous wave five, perhaps seven, seconds to fully pass over the Feigenbaum. The ship rose sturdily, allowing seawater to wash away and out of the scuppers and back into the Gulf. Its engines turned steadily, pushing forward slowly into the face of the oncoming weather and waves. Nothing terribly remarkable. But those seconds were easily the longest of his life. He’d been hit by the wall of water like a full body blow; he felt the sea trying to scrape him off the side of
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Your warm words of affirmation are very kind and very generous. I am glad you want to read more. Wally finally wants to do something for another person - something incredibly foolish, something touchingly sacrificial - and he's about to get hit. Wally has changed, hasn't he? But is that change going to matter? But you are surely right that Graham must be horrified...thanks again!
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Untitled, Special Delivery, and Seasons
Parker Owens commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Untitled, Special Delivery, and Seasons
All three are differently beautiful, Val. I delighted in the Shakespearean allusion in #1, knowing exactly what you mean about the discontents of winter. In #2, your brilliant last lines utterly shift the view and tone of the poem. This is a marvelous twist. And in #3, your observations about the wind and your return to its recurrent (and unfulfilled) promises ache with melancholy. I loved the image of the wind chasing 'bored leaves' and of the wind bringing weather out of its season. For sadness and hurt are often unseasonable, aren't they? I send you hugs for your melancholy, but kudos for your captivating work. -
Chapter 46 Shining a Bright Light into Darkness
Parker Owens commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 46 Shining a Bright Light into Darkness
Let the move begin. It's not exile, it's hope. Vega will be back, and sooner than they think....and the new Cahlar is taking his mantle up. Will his live for Tobyn survive it? -
This poem's yours, oh, Emi bright, I want to see your face this night, and you can smile or laugh or frown (as long as you don't wear the crown)...
