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Fantastic chapter. The new airport is up and running with only a few complaints from the Aero Club regarding the new regulations for the airspace surrounding the airport. Xander is being kept quite busy with his being the CEO and Operations Manager of the airport. It seems that Sebastian and Lewis have a new yacht.
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Very excellent chapter and story. I hope that Edwin is able to get to where he isn’t hounded by the media all the time. I think it would be great to see another story about Edwin and his possible relationship with James. I enjoyed reading this story from the beginning.
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Great chapter as usual.
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Fantastic chapter. I thought the turtle biting James on the toe was a little bit funny even though he didn’t think it was. The man that took the picture of Edwin is being detained for the authorities who will take him into custody. I hope that he gets charged with impersonating another person in hopes of getting his picture and he has to stay in jail for awhile.
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Chapter 43 – The End of Another Year
Butcher56 commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 43 – The End of Another Year
The year may be over and a new one beginning but I think it’s going to be a very interesting year for everyone. I also think that Rev Kirk will be staying on as pastor of the church after the last two sermons he did trying to show Rev Belec that his strict ways of following the scriptures in the bible are not as they appear to be especially since he only follows certain ones and ignores the others. I believe that he may be leaving the church in order to find one that will better suit him. I’m glad that the Currie family and friends had a great Christmas and New Years celebration and Josh even got to see his biological children and grandchildren all together for Christmas instead of two families coming for thanksgiving and the other two families coming for Christmas and they were able to get extra time off work so they could spend a few more days with the family. Thanks for the great chapter and story about the Castaway Hotel that Josh started many years ago. -
Fantastic chapter as usual. Poor Justin still battling the demons that he’s always battling as they want to take control of him. To me it sounds like he’s been keeping the pain inside him all these years from the times he got beat by his dad. He needs a place to go to release his anger to get it out of his system. Thanks for the new chapter.
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Rehab is going to be tough for Cosmo due to his inability to walk unaided, he has a very long and rough road ahead of him. He will have to fight very hard to gain his strength back. I can understand what he’s going to go through because my son is going through almost the same thing. My son was hospitalized in September for kidney failure and after he was transferred to a top hospital in the state they found that he had a severe infection in his abdomen due to his bowel being trapped in four places and he also had 4-5 perforations in it as well causing the infection. He was in the ICU for a month and he’s now in a rehab hospital due to get out on the 25th and he’s still not able to walk unaided. I’m thankful that he’s even alive because while he was in the ICU he almost died twice, one other thing that I’m thankful for is that he’s no longer in kidney failure, the kidney started working like it should after the infection was dealt with. I hope that everyone is staying safe during these uncertain times and that everyone has a safe and wonderful thanksgiving.
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Great chapter and story. I think the idea that Eric had about having their own news channel is great and with Peter doing the first few broadcasts before they go back to Boston, we’ll see how it goes and then they can get someone else to do it after that. I really think that this will be well received by the people who live here. I also think that the announcement of Olek and Helga’s marriage will be accepted even though she’s pregnant, they’re still going to go through the proposal and the one year engagement before the wedding. We’ll have to wait until the press conference and then see what the people think. Love the story line.
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Great chapter. Will being who he is would do anything to help Kai and Kiki get away from someone who hates her because she chose the brother and not him. Since he arranged for her to get fired from the restaurant she had no income so Will offered her the guest house at his compound as well as a job of getting the approval for the work that he needs done at the main house. She’s also going to get the contractor to get the job done and done to Will’s specifications. I hope that Wills dad’s prediction doesn’t come true because if it does it means trouble for Will.
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Fantastic chapter. Eric, Seth, Thomas and Hana get to see where Dara and Demetrius live.
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Chapter 41– A Very Busy December
Butcher56 commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 41– A Very Busy December
The holidays this year are going to be a bit more joyous because my son will be out of the hospital after going in to the hospital in September with kidney failure and then finding out that he had what the doctor thought was a blocked bowel only to find out that he had a severe infection in his abdomen due to his bowel being trapped in four places and he also had four to five perforations in the bowel. The doctor told me that he had to remove a good amount of the bowel in order to fix it. My son was in the ICU for a month due to the infection and his blood pressure kept dropping to a very low level and it caused him to go onto a ventilator at three different times. He’s in a rehab hospital now and he’s going to be released from there on the twenty fifth of this month and he’s not in kidney failure anymore after the infection was cleared up the kidney came back up on it’s own, he hasn’t had dialysis for almost a month now. -
Chapter 41– A Very Busy December
Butcher56 commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 41– A Very Busy December
Another fantastic chapter in the continuing story of the Castaway Hotel. I’m glad that they have found a new church to attend after the first of the year, one where they will be treated as people who have the same sex as their spouses that they love. They won’t be condemned by the minister for the choice they’ve made. The house is very full again with everyone there to celebrate the Christmas holiday with the ones who live there, even Josh’s biological children all showed up instead of just two of their families coming for thanksgiving and the other two coming for Christmas. “It seems like you’re using more and more tables every time we come to one of these dinners,” said Aunt Mary. “Yes, the family is growing,” Dad agreed, “but the more the merrier.” The love from the house is shown every time they meet for a birthday party or other times they get together as a family. -
Great chapter as usual. After all the repairs and replacement of the items that were missing the yacht was 4 days late getting to Cairns to pickup the production crew for the 13 week filming of the tv show. After the producer called to see if they had arrived yet , when he was informed that they had arrived and were eating dinner he wanted to come right away and the captain said that he needed to wait until after 8 am to come. I hope that the trip goes well and that the film crew will abide by the rules that they are not to film any of the permanent crew members or their cabins as they are off limits.
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Chapter 40 – The Confrontation
Butcher56 commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 40 – The Confrontation
It’s to bad that the new minister has decided that he won’t accept Josh and his family members due to their being gay. He said that he would be preaching to the congregation with the true meaning of the Bible and the way it’s written. Josh talked to the retiring minister about his talk with the new minister and he suggested that Josh talk to the minister at the Presbyterian church as he has a lot of the same views that he has. Josh realized that they hadn’t started decorating the house for Christmas yet due to all of the birthdays and the meeting with the new minister. The boys have all given their approval for the decorations and they have even said that TJ was really watching the lights from the tree. -
Great start to the story. Trey could be a partner for Dallas if he could keep his mind off wanting to make out with Dallas every time he sees him. I wonder how the walk home is going to be?
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Great chapter. Edwin has made a very generous offer to the staff of the school for a one night all expense paid trip down the river at the end of the trip a motor coach will be waiting to take them back to their vehicles either at the school or the car park. After the school trip the yacht will then sail off to meet with the crew who will be taking it to Singapore where it will be remodeled to the specifications of the new owner. Edwin and his crew members will be meeting the crew at the same time as he takes possession of the new yacht. They will then prepare to get ready for the production crew for the tv show.
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Although the honeymoon is ending with the Duchess returning to Venice and then Eric, Peter, Boris, Yuri and the agents will be returning to Makarovia. Their time on the Duchess may be ending but they have all of their memories and the friendship that they acquired during their honeymoon. Then soon they’ll be back in Boston to begin their junior year at Northeastern college where they have asked the agents they have during their honeymoon to come back to Boston with them and be their security there. Fantastic chapter as well as the story.
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Nikki: The Prince of Asphodel
Butcher56 commented on Solus Magus's story chapter in Nikki: The Prince of Asphodel
Fantastic chapter with a twist for an ending. Nikki just found out that he’s the son of death and he’s a prince of the Asphodel. With the help of the High Magus Shiraea he was able to get his mother back and revive her. The High Magus knows his mom by the name of Evva and she insisted that she tell him the truth. I hope we don’t have to wait long for the next book to get ready. Thank you for the great story so far I can only imagine what the next book will be like to read. -
I feel bad for Kai and his mom after the loss of his dad. Now they have to move out of the house and have 2 weeks to get it done or she’ll get thrown out in two days. Will is going to try to convince her to move into his guest house in exchange for watching over things for him. The way things are going right now I think that would be the best option for her.
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I’m glad to see that Edwin has regained his memory and he was released from the hospital and has since had his cast removed from his ankle that was shattered when he jumped from the truck. I hope he and the captain will be able to get some more crew members very soon because the majority of the crew resigned due to being scared after Edwin had some men chasing him. The yacht is going to be used for a tv show for 13 weeks. They’re asking for access to all of the general areas of the yacht as well as the crew and bridge areas. Edwin has decided that he will be on board for the entire time that the production people are doing their work filming the tv show.
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What a great chapter to wake up and read first thing in the morning. The congressman was sure doing his best to make sure that the Americans didn’t join the alliance with the supernatural beings along with Canadians and Europeans who were going to join it especially after the show of magic that they witnessed. The congressman sure thought he was so smug that he had so much power that he could tell the president not to join the alliance and he wouldn’t join. That was until he had pissed Chris off enough for him to get a real good idea of how much power Chris actually has when he was thrown into a wall and held there by Chris using his aura. Congressman Taylor tried to get loose and found out that the more he struggled he was just held tighter then Chris told him that he could turn all of the supporters of his against him just by using a suggestion and also he could make his district turn blue as well as all of the other red ones, then he would turn all the blue ones red if he so desired. When he was let loose everyone saw that he had pissed his pants and I can only hope that he has a change of mind and tells the president to join the alliance. The rest of the chapter was equally interesting because he went back to the realm and had another fantastic sparing match with his Gramps where they walked away with a tie I think it was great that King Ethnar was enjoying the opportunity to fly over the country to see the beauty that he remembered. The ending of the chapter surprised me when Victor took Chris back to the realm and then drove them to a hilltop outside the palace grounds to show him the beauty of the elven sunrise, then Chris had his turn to give Victor his valentine surprise. Chris summoned the book of song and chose one song that seemed to take over the town including the palace then while that one was playing he chose another song that showed Victor how much he means to him after that Chris told him that he wasn’t proposing or marrying him right now only declared them life partners.
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Chapter 37 – Changing of the Guard
Butcher56 commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 37 – Changing of the Guard
Great chapter. I haven’t heard of a minister going from a large congregation church to a smaller one. I have known minsters who are asked to leave because they were going in a different direction than the majority of the congregation wants. I can understand why the congregation has so many questions for the new minister as he is moving to a smaller church than he was in when his wife passed away from cancer and is more than likely buried near that church. Time will tell when he decides to speak to Josh or not and if he’s going to answer his questions about the reason for his transfer. -
I like Edgar, Barry and Pano they just seem so down to earth and friendly. I think it’s one of the best reasons for Eric and Peter wanting to get to know them better. Fantastic chapter and story.
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Great beginning to the new story. I’m glad to see Xander has now completed his college courses and he’s graduated with a double degree in Business and Law. He has taken on quite a lot of projects and he’s completed the majority of them all within a 3 year window of time. This includes a new business office building for his own business. I have missed this family and their business and personal experiences, looking forward to seeing them again. Thank you for the great opportunity to catch up with the family again.
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Awesome chapter. It seems like there’s one guest on the latest cruise that keeps asking questions of Edwin and won’t take no for an answer. After he told her that she was in a restricted area she just kept saying that he was awfully young to be an officer on the yacht. He decided to take a break and do some snorkeling and comes across a couple of cabins and a shed that held a yacht as it turns out that this is parks and wildlife property. I’m glad that Edwin told the crew about how he came to have his two titles, and when he was asked how he should be addressed by the crew he said that he would be second officer Fordell or sir, and that the guests were not to be told who he is other than who he said he was.
