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JeffreyL

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  1. Trying to figure out why Chuck wants to change his name? Maybe I need to reread earlier chapters. I love the way Chuck keeps working out possible solutions to his hotline plan. And I think Don's plan to be assaulted was actually pretty good. In spite of all the trouble it caused him, it may just succeed in putting a stop to the religious extremists. Thanks. Jeff
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    Taking Root

    I am glad to see Chuck got his feelings about Tom sorted out and decided he really was a friend. Tom was one of my favorite characters in "18 Weeks." Also it's good to see Chuck have the hotline to focus his talents on. More good story. Keep it coming. Jeff
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    The Interview

    Realized I'm behind a bit and doing some binge reading to catch up. I like the way the story is progressing, and I really like the bits of "18 Weeks" that pop up. Thanks. Jeff
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    Chapter 29

    Very sexy, and a nice break from all the tension. Jeff
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    Chapter 8

    So, only one more chapter. It seems like Dave is on the mend, and I like the promise of Terry hinted at earlier and now a possibility. It will be a little sad to have this story come to an end. I am really enjoying it! Thanks Tim. Jeff
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    A Matter of Taste

    Mix two interesting character with a great set up and you have the makings of a good story. I just finished rereading "My Last Day Without You" and I enjoyed it even more the second time. It made me decide to check out your other story. This story has a strong beginning, but I notice you haven't posted for a while. Please continue. I'll check back for more story. Thanks. Jeff
  7. Very clever use of the old werewolf vs silver theme with your hunters. And I like the idea of copper as a countermeasure. Another good chapter. Keep 'em coming Gary. Thanks. Jeff
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    Red Rose

    Before I got to the end I was thinking of Sasha's Ink Boys series. And then the mention of Kip made me smile. I think you and Sasha must be sharing writing secrets. You are both so damned good at saying so much with so few words. Thanks for more good reads. I am really enjoying this series of short stories. And I loved Fred. The jerk you love to snicker about. Jeff
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    Chapter 7

    I am glad Ryder was able to get some things off his chest with his Dad. For me the jury is still out on dad. I feel he loves Ryder, but maybe he wears his coach hat too much, and maybe he is trying to make a perfect football player. And now a bit of a cliffhanger right before the first day of school. And no going to practice? What gives? More good stuff. Thanks. Jeff
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    Moose

    What a nice way to enjoy the weekend! A new chapter of Tiger Winter, and one with promise for Emmett and Jian. Although having read several of your stories, it may be just a tease for now. Loved Emm's friends and the moose event. Loved hockey time with the brothers and some cuddling. I think I'll have to read it one more time before I go to bed. I have several authors on this site that I follow and enjoy reading. You are always at or near the top of my list. Thanks for more good reading. Jeff
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    Chapter 6

    Didn't see that coming. Callen has always been Trace's rock and now all this drama. Sasha really is a bitch. I hope you get the next chapter posted quickly. Don't know if I can wait too long. Thanks for more good reading. Jeff
  12. I really enjoyed your story, especially the family dinner. In spite of being short, nothing seemed to be missing. It would be fun to see what happens to Rob and Jack as a couple. And never underestimate the flu. My wife died from complications brought on by the flu. This was a nice break from Thanksgiving with my crazy (but loveable) family. Thanks. Jeff
  13. Thanks for a chuckle with my breakfast. Damn crazy Americans we are! Thanks for the plug for supporting food banks. It's one of the not-crazy thinks we do. Happy Thanksgiving, Carlos, to you and yours. Jeff
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    Story

    I'm not certain what got me to read this story, but I'm glad I did! A sweet little Christmas story, nicely written with well drawn characters. A joy to read. Jeff
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    Chapter 7

    Well knock me over with a feather! I liked the way you gave us a feel for Dave's travels without getting bogged down. I was not expecting this turn of events. Guess I'll be patient for the next chapter to get some answers. This story is really keeping me interested. Thanks Tim. Jefc
  16. More good writing about these interesting characters and their predicament. You've put an interesting spin on the shifter story with this aura Kellan can "see." Can't wait to see what happens next. Jeff
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    Levko

    Your story is wonderful! I don't pretend to understand the world of doms and subs or the violence some people use. I liked Lev right away and my heart ached for him as he made this journey. Seems like HEA, which I wasn't expecting. Maybe you'll revisit Jon and Lev sometime. Again beautifully written. Thank you. Jeff
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    Brotherhood

    Only been on a bike twice in my life when I was much younger. Never drove one. Have been on a road trip or two. You made the whole day sound pretty enjoyable. Your writing puts me in the moment, and I get the vicarious pleasure of a bike trip. Thanks. Jeff
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    Chapter 1

    What a fun story! I enjoyed your characters and the way they learned to communicate. Although the ending was satisfactory, you certainly left the door wide open for more. I for one, wouldn't mind one bit if you wanted to write more. Maybe in the next chapter Reuben could visit Perry's world. Just saying... Seriously, thanks for a good story. Jeff
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    Chapter 8

    Thank you, Lilly. I was beginning to wonder if Toni I was ever going to figure Marc out. Now we'll see how things go from here. I'm glad they have such a supportive group of friends. Good story! Thanks. Jeff
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    Fantasy

    I read it twice because it was so good! And OMG what are oranges and bacon bits fried in butter and red wine? Instant food orgasm! Is there a recipe you can share? I loved reading about Jian interacting with Emmett's family, and Emmett's family gently trying to understand and, I think, encourage Emmett's feelings toward Jian. Loved waiting to go to bed until Christmas is over, "the best kind of Christmas love, snow, and family could buy," and I chuckled at people who stand on thin ice. Who knew Logan had so much going on in his head. So much good stuff! I even got a little teary-eyed at one point. As ever, thanks for your good writing. Jeff P.S. Did you notice: no scolding Emmett for over thinking and no whining to "hurry up Sasha." I'm rather proud of myself.
  22. What a great story! I quickly came to care about these guys and suffered with them through all the ups and downs. Your characters were well-rounded and believable. Your dialogue was also believable. Thank you for this epilogue which tied up most of the loose ends. And a special thanks for the last line. Heidi and Eric crossed my mind at the end of the last chapter. I think I'll assume they hit it off, and the family grew from three to four. Thank you. Jeff
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    Broken Men

    This is a very satisfying ending, and I haven't read the epilogue yet.
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    A Dark Night

    This is well written. We get the horrific nature of the attack and rape without a lot of gory detail. Now I'm wondering how this can possibly resolve itself. Well done. Jeff
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    Secrets

    I am curious to see how you resolve this major drama moment. Maybe we will finally see everyone's true colors. Thanks for more good story. Jeff
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