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  1. JeffreyL
    First Tattoo, then Tiger Winter, and now this. You are going to spoil all your fans. This story was wonderful! As usual in a few words you've given us characters that seem real and a story line that leaves me satisfied and yet wanting more. I believe writing is indeed your super power! As always it is a pleasure to read a story by you. Thanks. Jeff
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    High Hopes

    JeffreyL commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in High Hopes

    "Here's hoping this one (chapter) meets with your approval." What's not to like? CJ and Harley on a road trip. CJ and Harley visiting Harley's cool grandparents. And having some farm blood, CJ and Harley having farm adventures. I am enjoying this part of CJ's summer. Looking forward to his Australia trip. Thanks for more good writing Carlos. Jeff
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    November 20th

    JeffreyL commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in November 20th

    Wow Cole! Burton's story was amazing!! I read your note about what you were trying to accomplish and I think you nailed it. Each chapter a glimpse into a year in Button's life. With each year you told us so much in what was really only one episode in that year. And most amazing to me: I didn't feel like I'd missed anything. This story was a great reading experience. Thank you. Jeff
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    Bedroom

    JeffreyL commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Bedroom

    Hey Sasha! It's nice to have you back with a new story. I love Emmett already, and I'm curious about the other two. Zeke reminds me of Zander, a character I really liked from another story of yours. Great sex between him and Emmett, by the way! Huan-Yu I'm not certain about. You didn't give us much to go on, so I'll just be patient for now. Not many can tell a story like you do. I can't wait for more! Thanks for a great start. Jeff
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    You know Cole, I should be really mad at you right now. I just finished this story and cried for the last several minutes. It was beautifully written, and your characters were very real. Thank you for this great story. Jeff I should tell you I am enjoying all the 1550 stories. Again, thank you.
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    Tattoo

    JeffreyL commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Tattoo

    Today has been a special day! Both you and Carlos Hazday shared stories. It is so nice to read something new by you. Although I haven't tired of rereading your stories from time to time. I'm not certain what your magic is, but your stories are always so readable, and your characters are such interesting people.It is nice to have you back. I hope all is well. Jeff
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    Blizzard Row

    JeffreyL commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Blizzard Row

    You did a fine job of pairing the worsening storm with the increase in Cliff's depression. Since I've found your stories I'll have to look for more about Cliff. Thanks for some great writing. Jeff
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    I can hardly believe David and Towey's story has come to an end. Thanks SD. It was a lot of fun! I guess it's time to find another story to read. I'll miss these characters and your easy to read writing style. Thanks. Jeff
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    Downbound Train

    JeffreyL commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Downbound Train

    Hey Carlos. Glad to have you back on my tablet. And CJ and Harley as well. As usual everything is pitch perfect in chapter one: great characters, fun and funky bits of info about stuff in the story, and your great style of writing. I love the way you move from scene to scene with gaps between, but nothing ever seems to be missing. And to repeat Spikey thanks x10 for continuing this story! You know your fans will love you even more if you keep writing until CJ and Harley are reminiscing in their rockers on the porch of the old folks home. Jeff
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    Hey Carlos, I waited three months before revisiting CJ and company. I binged all four stories in a few days. I caught a few details I missed and some foreshadowing I didn't pick up on before. Still enjoyable the second time around. Love that kid and his family and friends. Thanks once again for you great characters and good writing. Jeff
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    I didn't realise you were out of commission for awhile. Guess I was too, without knowing it. I had to read three installments to be caught up. Thanks for more story on the guys. As ever, they are a fun group to follow. We come back, and I hope all is well. Jeff
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    Chapter 24

    JeffreyL commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 24

    Thank you for such a fine, thought provoking story. Dorian's speech at the end was powerful. Thanks again for a good read. Jeff
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    Oh Wayne, The sweetness of the prologue makes chapter one even more hard to take. Cody is such a nice guy (in spite of being a football player
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    Secrets Revealed

    JeffreyL commented on Sammy Blue's story chapter in Secrets Revealed

    Hello Sammy. I have just read chapters one through twenty-six in the last two days. I am thoroughly enjoying the story of Josh and Jacob! I am curious to know if you are writing in German and then translating, or is it the other way around? Either way it's very impressive to me! I look forward to reading more. Hopefully, soon.
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    Been worrying about Cory. Thanks for getting started on part 2. Appreciated the background. Makes me think chapter 1 will not be pretty. Jeff
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    Hello Luis. I just found your story and read chapters one through eight. I really enjoyed what I read! I am way to old to remember first love clearly, but I can imagine it happening something like this. I would guess for a gay teen it would be even more difficult. Not wanting to out yourself, and yet trying to tell if the boy you like is also gay. I also want to tell you how impressed I am that you're telling your story in English, which is not your native language. I'm not certain I would know if you hadn't mentioned it in one of your notes. Anyway, keep up the good work. Jeff
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    Oh Dayne, I don't even know you, but you are truly evil (I barely avoided all caps on that evil
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    Julie

    JeffreyL commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in Julie

    Hello Thorn. I just finished chapter 3, after rereading chapters 1 and 2. You have three pretty interesting characters, Daniel, Michael, and Julie, and an interesting potential heavy (oops, Forgot his name - Julie's cousin). The set up is good, and I am anxious to read some more. Thanks. Jeff
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    Thin Blue Line

    JeffreyL commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Thin Blue Line

    It was great to hear from CJ and company. Thank you for your insightful writing on a sad state of affairs. Jeff
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    Chapter 50

    JeffreyL commented on WolfM's story chapter in Chapter 50

    I can only repeat what so many others have already stated. This is a great story! I will miss Ethan and Aiden and all their friends and family. Looking forward to more in the future. Thanks for such an enjoyable read. Jeff
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    Epilogue: Overtime

    JeffreyL commented on QuinnDK's story chapter in Epilogue: Overtime

    What a delightful epilogue! Thanks for one more peek at these guys. You have finished this story nicely, but don't let it stop you from thinking about writing another story about Henrik and Ezra. Jeff
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    Just wanted to say thank you. I am really enjoying Kellar and Tobyn's story. Jeff
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    Wishing you a speedy recovery. And thanks for another great chapter. You've gotta love these friendships. Jeff
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    The Viking's Lover

    JeffreyL commented on QuinnDK's story chapter in The Viking's Lover

    What a great romance! I really liked Ezra and Henrick. Wouldn't mind reading about them in another story... Thanks for a good read. Jeff
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    Chapter 26

    JeffreyL commented on VVesley's story chapter in Chapter 26

    Just basically binged the entire story after finding The Bond and relizing it was part 2. You've created an interesting and well thought out world. I hope Luca will be ok in part 2. Can't wait to see the reaction from the other characters to the wedding plan. Thanks for an enjoyable start. Jeff
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