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    Harry

    JeffreyL commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Harry

    This is another second, enjoyable reading. I noticed this episode highlights your talent at creating interesting, believable characters. These people can really suck you into a story- Thanks.
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    Yonder

    JeffreyL commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Yonder

    Hopefully you're not sick of me saying so, but once again the second read is as good as the first! The Camp Refuge guys have cast a spell and I am caught up in it. Thanks again for sharing 5hese stories!
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    Family

    JeffreyL commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Family

    Greetings and Salutations, Wayne! This is another satisfying second read! I am loving this Camp Refuge series as much this second time around as I did the first time! Thanks. Thanks. Thanks. 🤩💜🤩
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    Hey Wayne! Another second reading completed. I love Greg's idea of Camp Refuge! I love the group of people who came, stayed, and called it home. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story a second time! Thanks.
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    Why Pride?

    JeffreyL commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Why Pride?

    This is a little detour from my current reading: a new for me story by you and a first read by me! I am very impressed! You gave an important lesson is such a few words! And of course your great characters and dialogue! Thanks.
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    Epilogue

    JeffreyL commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Epilogue

    Hi Wayne! This reread is only a year and a half after my first reading. Once again I enjoyed it as much the second time as the first! Since I enjoyed it so much I guess I should browse through your story list and choose another one! Thanks.
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    Home

    JeffreyL commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Home

    Well here we are three years later, and I have just finished reading this story for the second time! I enjoyed it just as much this second read as I did the first time. I really like your writing style! I have been revisiting stories I've enjoyed on GA, and having a lot of fun! Thanks for sharing your writing with us!
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    Chapter 36

    JeffreyL commented on Rob Colton's story chapter in Chapter 36

    I think this is my third time reading Noah's and Eli's story. You did an excellent job creating their habits, personalities, and dialogue! I was never certain which one would make me laugh next! All your secondary characters are funny, including Reagan and Derek! Your stories are always a pleasure to read. Even the second or third time around! Thanks.
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    Chapter 3

    JeffreyL commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Chapter 3

    I don't know how long it has been since I read this story. As usual your characters and dialogue are first rate. Even though I remembered most of the story, I still enjoyed this second read! Thanks.
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    Chapter 33

    JeffreyL commented on lilansui's story chapter in Chapter 33

    Greetings and Salutations! I want to let you know this story was as enjoyable this time as it was the first time I read it! I had forgotten some of the details, but I remember how much I loved Rory, Milan, and all the secondary characters! I am wondering if Grandma Asta is related to, or is based on the three fates. If I remember correctly, one wove the cloth (of life), one measured the thread, and one cut it when life was over. Grandma's red scarves reminded me of that. Thanks for this most enjoyable second read! What a great story!
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    After chapter one, I was not certain I would stay interested in Mike to want to read his entire story. Starting up his AI and meeting Chris have really changed my mind. I love all the detail you include about life on the moon! It adds to the story, and makes Mike's adventures much more interesting! Thanks.
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    Moving Reasons

    JeffreyL commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Moving Reasons

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    Moving Reasons

    JeffreyL commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Moving Reasons

    I am sorry Clancy59 reads faster than I do. I has to stop, reread the sentence, then burst out laughing at Basilisk Nagini! I wondered at the time how many others noticed. I should have realized GA readers have sharp eyes and minds! The Harry Potter references were a lot of fun! I have to echo the several comments about enjoying hearing about Thiago and Fab, enjoying the travelog of Atlanta (not been there yet), and feeling more informed about the Black experience. Once again kudos to you Mr. Hardly. Thanks.
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    Our Destined Life

    JeffreyL commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Our Destined Life

    Hello Mrs G. Thank you for sharing this story. I think I am about out of superlatives to describe it. I'm certain someone else commenting has used the rest. It has been a total pleasure to read!
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    Imagine low bowing and groveling in Mrsgnomie's direction. I would give this story six stars if I could! There have been many good stories written and shared recently on this site. I think it is safe to say this is one of the most enjoyable, if not the most enjoyable one of all. Mrsgnomie has outdone herself! The characters are all able to worm themselves into your heart. From the "biggies" Jay and Loren, all the way down to the smallest child at Cousins' Camp, you'll love them all! The dialogue is first rate, and you want the plot to hurry up to the HEA, and at the same time last forever! Do yourself a favor. Read this story!
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    All i Know

    JeffreyL commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in All i Know

    I love this poem, Tim! I think several others more correctly identified it as a love note. ❤ Happy, sad, or thoughtful it is always a pleasure to read what you've written. Thanks.
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    Thanks for another great CJ story! I have nothing clever or new to add to the many comments already posted. I enjoy your writing style, characters, and dialogue! It might be time for a summer reread from the beginning. Time to chuckle over CJ's tee shirt collection. 😄
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    A Time to Celebrate

    JeffreyL commented on northie's story chapter in A Time to Celebrate

    Over and over as I read the comments I found readers talking about your writing and characters, and making observations that I swear came from my heart and mind. It seems like I can hardly call Eric a curmudgeon any more. He's more like Cinderella, and his fairy godfathers are Andy and Adam! I loved the character growth over two stories! I look forward to more about these guys in the future. Thanks. 😍
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    A Meeting of Minds

    JeffreyL commented on northie's story chapter in A Meeting of Minds

    I don't know how he would deal with it, but I'd like to give my favorite curmudgeon a big hug! And maybe you too while I am at it! You did an excellent job writing how Tyler and Eric both felt! I am glad Eric borrowed on his experience with the video to help him get through. I am so proud he was able to come up with empathy and compassion for this kid who wronged him. It might be cool if Eric were to take Tyler under his wing and let him help with the yard work at the neighbors. I am excited and a bit sad this chapter in Eric's life is coming to an end. Thanks.
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    Thanks for the cameo in the most discussed chapter (so far) in this amazing story! I refuse to speculate or worry. Based on the earlier parts of the story, the next part will be exactly right for your characters. I hope you aren't tiring from hearing "I love this story!" again and again.
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    Chapter 1

    JeffreyL commented on Georgie DHainaut's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I really enjoyed this story! I read it thinking it might be a shifter story based on the title. I was wrong about that, but I ended up reading the entire story in one sitting! I hope you will consider revisiting Vince and Cagey at some future date. I would enjoy finding about the next part of their story. Thanks.
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    Greetings Mrsgnomie! I haven't commented in some time, but I wanted to say how much I continue to enjoy this story! All my standard "greats" apply: great characters (both main and supporting), great dialogue, great plot! I am not a football fan, but I love the fact that Jay is a Seahawk! I grew up north of Seattle, and my brother-in-law would disown me if I didn't support the Seahawks some. 😄 I was also pleased you posted pictures of what Jay and Loren look like to you! Thanks.
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    Coral Castles

    JeffreyL commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Coral Castles

    I just wanted to add my thanks for an enjoyable and educational story! They make me wish I was more of an artist. It would be great to bring your descriptions of the illustrations to life! Thanks again, Carlos!
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    Bertie and Cecil

    JeffreyL commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Bertie and Cecil

    This is a fun story! Bernie and Cecil are great characters! They act and sound very real. The subject of body issues can be painful and sad. You treated it with a light touch and ended up with a clever story! Thank goodness for Cecil. His even temper and thoughtful comments were good for Bertie. Thanks for sharing, Tim! P.S. Enjoy that nude beach vacation when it happens! 🤭🤭🤭🤭❤
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    Ties

    JeffreyL commented on northie's story chapter in Ties

    I know I have said a hundred times how much I love my "favorite curmudgeon." And how much I enjoy Andy and Adam. I don't know that I have said much about Brian and Sandra. They are more of the supporting characters you have written so well! They are not two dimensional, but well rounded, developed characters. And I love how they have become a part of Eric's life, and the way they support him! Thanks.
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