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  1. Windy and raining here.. no hail so far.
  2. My shrink have an issue with that ..
  3. ~ has no idea what any of you are talking about~ i leave this and go ..
  4. This one was a long but worthwhile effort. As many have said, the end was unexpected. A great twist. Thank you SA!
  5. The stories have all been great so far. i'm terrible at figuring out who the authors are, but i do like surprises!
  6. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 1

    Bit of a rollercoaster but in a good way. Thanks SA
  7. "There's no such thing as God. And it's assholes like you, believing that crap, that has caused all the problems in the world." Ernest raised his voice. The rant was directed at his son. "Religion is for the weak and weak-minded." Steven stood at the edge of the gold-colored living room carpet. He stared furiously down at the floor. “But—” “But nothing. I can’t stop you from going to church or whatever you want to do. But I’m not surprised you were lured in.” Ernest was seated on the s
  8. We are promised that He will be found when we search for God. “If you seek him, he will be found by you” (1 Chronicles 28:9) And we’re told there will be a great reward. What will Steven's search bring him?
  9. How many years have we known each other? Your office has had AC issues since then, lol. i hope the new one works!! Lots of good news in your post.. i'm glad for you!! xoox
  10. Makes sense. i'm sure the hot choc has sugar, you couldn't drink it otherwise. We usually have a decaf coffee in the afternoon. i used to have to sweetner but i've stopped using anything in tea or coffee other than some milk/cream. i do have some amazing hot choc powder and i have one now and again. This stuff: It's sooooo good. Gourmet Village makes lots of diff flavours and a sugarless version. i bought a bunch of these last year to give out as xmas gifts.. i have one now and again!
  11. Yeah. As an ex-sex worker writing about sex is an issue for me. Reading about or talking about casual sex with strangers ... it makes me cringe. Here my personal experience defo affects my work. i've written sex scenes but it's a chore at the best of times but i've done it because the story called for it. Often i'm happy just using the fade-to-black option, or just closing the bedroom door. Thanks for another worthwhile article!
  12. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 1

    i had trouble reading this in one go. There's a lot of telling happening in this story, meaning lots of details are dumped on the page. It's not bad, but it's hard to read for some. Me being one of those. However, i came back to it several times and I'm glad that i did. This was a story of acceptance, patience and ultimately love. Nice job, SA.
  13. i only made one iced coffee this year so far ... coffee has been bothering my delicate stomach..lol so i don't drink much of it now. And i don't drink any caffeine for the first hour after i wake up, only water if anything. but I'm glad you're still enjoying your icy treat!!
  14. yeah.. just fans today and lots of iced tea
  15. been hot.. but AC not required today as of yet. Plus sitting in the backyard is cooler. Nice breeze today.
  16. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 1

    When i was thrown out, i wasn't quite old enough to drive. Never learned. Never met a Trace until much later. But he did save me. Another well-written piece. Much much, much too close to home. @kbois is right, some sunshine would be nice. But some things need saying, doing that brings them into the light, so everyone can see them. Secret Author is bringing out a lot of secrets assuming people are writing what they know. And as @Bill W says, you could certainly continue this and put Bill and the rest of us out of misery! Great piece, thank you.
  17. Have a wonderful Friday ... i need to wear my best underwear today.. off to varied doctors who seem to like to see me in them...lol Have a good day all.
  18. That would be better .. their winters are usually 59F to 75F .. i could manage that but when it's hot there it gets hotter than here. There is no paradise on Earth, though @Wayne Gray may disagree, in which case we should all move to Northern California. Bring yer rain boots though!
  19. omg i woke up wondering that lol
  20. Simply wonderful. Your love of the natural world shines brightly here.
  21. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 1

    i find i cannot say anything about this piece, not because it's not well done, because it is. It's just too much today. i will try to come back to it. Thank you, though.
  22. Mikiesboy

    Soulmate

    i think we had a huge connection when we met. But some things have happened that many split up over. Humans screw up. We had to decide whether the years we'd put in were worth losing. They weren't. And so we carried on together, and we made it work. Even soulmates who are.. need to tend their relationship. Thank you for reading and your comments!
  23. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 1

    Difficult to hide the characters' truths as this type of story has been done before. However, the twist and Tom were welcome and different. Nice piece. Thank you.
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