quiet in here ... spending lots of time in Live Poets ... two tanka down... three more to go ... nice to see people using it as a workshop, as intended.
possibly it would. people were cheering for Paul.. and the thing with Jared made us hope for them. So this felt like he just left ... i think if you expanded it to include a proper convo with Jared, so say goodbye or i need to travel and then we can see where we end up. Anyway it is your story, and you choose how to end it.
yep ... i only write the story in my head ... all of it. I don't believe in changing things because of reader's feelings. I love their feelings and they can tell me they dislike something or someone but i won't change things because of it.
Like i say often ... i want to read the story you wrote ... not my own. nice one, Thorn xo
oh man ... the lab lady at the doc's is very good... you hardly feel a thing when she is vampiring you ... however, i just looked at the site and yeah... massive bruise. lol.. oh well ... and i am bored ... and it is snowing. Lots of snow is due the next few days.