Thank's molly. That's a pretty vivid picture, i'm glad you could see what you did. I'll do my best to show my process and write notes as we move forward.
Zero to Hero Poetry Prompts
Tanka
The prompt was to write five Tanka poems about the current season, which in this case is winter. I'm not a huge lover of winter. I love to read Tanka, but for me it is a struggle to write. I have used the supportive group in the Live Poet's Society forum for the first two (so they are 'right' as far as Tanka goes) ... the last three i have bravely struck out on my own, with AC's Guide. Let's see how we do.
Oh, winter so cold I ha
quiet in here ... spending lots of time in Live Poets ... two tanka down... three more to go ... nice to see people using it as a workshop, as intended.
possibly it would. people were cheering for Paul.. and the thing with Jared made us hope for them. So this felt like he just left ... i think if you expanded it to include a proper convo with Jared, so say goodbye or i need to travel and then we can see where we end up. Anyway it is your story, and you choose how to end it.
yep ... i only write the story in my head ... all of it. I don't believe in changing things because of reader's feelings. I love their feelings and they can tell me they dislike something or someone but i won't change things because of it.
Like i say often ... i want to read the story you wrote ... not my own. nice one, Thorn xo