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Another great chapter I hope we will see some more real quick. I like how you snuck in the reference to BLUE BLOODS.
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It would seem that Jessica became Chole between chapters.
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Great story, Xander and Xavier's names were interchanged several times. It was a bit confusing. Mike
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A Saturday in the Country
soundtechmc commented on JamesSavik's story chapter in A Saturday in the Country
This is a terrific story. The number of characters so far would beg for a list with name, age, chapter introduced, and short snippet about each person. -
I just found this story today, I really am enjoying it. Just a comment about the Blackhawk, I spent many years in the Army working as helicopter mechanic. Most aircraft system do not have fuses. Most all aircraft systems have pop up circuit breakers that can be reset as necessary.
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You have said that you can only post two chapters a day. I doubt there is a limit on chapter length, so why not combine chapters into much longer length. If the story is already completed that should not be a problem. We are all hungry for more story as quickly as possible.
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Will we see an update to this story in the future.
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Has this story been published before. It is very familiar.
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I wonder is Tony wearing "the Ring". Does anyone else in the family, in Italy, know the history of the ring and the family in the US.
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Are the chapters going to get longer again.
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How big is this ship, length, width and displacement.
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In ref. to Butcher's comment above, the last few paragraphs of the chapter you have Hunter and Fraser names reversed.
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Your Breakfast is My Dinner
soundtechmc commented on astone2292's story chapter in Your Breakfast is My Dinner
You are 100% correct. I spent most of 4 years working in a CNC machine shop in central Texas. All of my friends and family didn't have clue what I had to live with. Being single is definitely a plus when you don't have to worry about others in the house disturbing you or you them. -
Ch16 is still in the wrong place. It has no connection to Ch 17. It should be after Ch 40.
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It is obvious that CH 16 should follow this Ch.40. This Ch addresses the future pool and ask Sal to be his body guard. In 16 the pool is already being dug and Sal is building the security fencing and has apparently taken the job as body guard. In looking at Ch's 17, 18 and cont., it would appear that the correct Ch 16 is not to be found. It would appear that Harry was probably first mentioned in the missing correct Ch 16.
