JayT

After his parents are killed, TJ's world is flipped upside down by what he discovers.

Gary-you are an amazing writer...thank you for sharing with us. I'm looking forward to next week. Jay

I saw that one coming. Oh, the uncontrollable anger that causes him to just snap, like it's someone else saying those things and losing control, are the exact symptoms of someone being bipolar-manic anger based. Trust me I know because it was like I was reading my own description of a bipolar episode.

Gary-now i fracking love Warren....great job....keep up the fantastic work....see you next Monday Jay

it seems like Billy's life is spiraling out of control

The characters in this story give up too easily when someone is trying to talk them into something they don't want to do. None of them have stood up for what was right. I'm sorry, but if my "best friend" was about tied up in the bedroom I would not just be sitting out in the living room drinking and then rape him because someone threatened to shoot me. There are such things as phones. Call the fucking cops, stand up for your best friend, the two of them could have taken him out.

great ending! now I want to know if he makes it to the Olympics lol

so it doesn't really matter if Alex had his phone turned off that week, there is such a thing as a landline at the hotel

Gary-You're my fracking hero!!!!!! That was amazeballs. Jay

wow I knew Kenny would come around eventually....Zac is going to have to do something truly elaborate and romantic to get forgiveness (but he needs to make sure Austin is the only one who sees what he does-I have the feeling that Austin doesn't like the spotlight that much)

Okay so all of that just happened.....Is Dustin now Mike's paid "boy"? I think Billy may have a little bi-polar manic issue (I know all of the signs....I speak from personal experience).

I wish he had bashed the deacon's head in with the Everclear bottle......not kill him.....just put him in a situation where he was powerless to hurt anyone else ever again....and then cut his d!ck off.....but I can see why Ezra did what he did....he was in pain....I'm not sure if he consciously knew that the pills could possibly kill him or not or if he was just in that much pain that he wanted to end soon. Jay

OH Zac is on my shitlist for sure now....How dare he do that to Austin...Has he forgotten that Adrian has ignored him all week and gotten himself a girlfriend? Adrian couldn't even look Zac in the eye all week. Zac is an ass. He needs to drop Adrian and look at what's right in front of him. Jay

Wow.....major changes in the characters.....not sure how I feel about that...Jerry was fine after the initial shooting....he came into Erik's room at the hospital and didn't act differently at all....Erik has straight up turned into a slut.....I'll stick around and keep with it....I hope things change

OUCH!!!!! What do you say to someone over thirty? That one hurt lol

tim-I like Terry for Dave soooooooooooooooooooooo much.....I hope he'll open his heart to him....great job bud....not ready for it to end though

damn cock-blocking hunters......great job Gary....see you next week Jay

was it the third stall that Austin ran into??? YAY!!!!!

Okay, Billy is supposed to be smart. He was told to tell "Tony" that the prices went up. Dustin's sister even told him that Brett was buying from them. At the end, he called Brett Anthony. If he is as smart as he claims to be, he should be able to put two and two together and get four, I totally understand what Brett is doing. I am severely ADHD and self-medicated myself for years using speed. It was the only way I was able function around others without being extremely hyperactive. Brett has voiced his feelings about how others view him because of his ADHD. I've been there, hell I'm still there in my head sometimes. It sucks knowing that you annoy everyone around you because you can't keep still or shut up majority of the time. If Brett is really self-medicating, then that's what he'll have to get Billy to understand.

In a few years, Toby will have an interpreter for him, since most brothers/sisters that close in age so a lot of silent communication. I have a feeling that Dennis will know exactly what his older brother is trying to say.

I had to go and make the gayborhood comment the other day....that brought up Friends of Dorothy......well i was going to suggest using Friends of Eric and Seth lol.....great minds think alike...or we're both a little bit crazy hehehe

did you change Marc's name to Brad?

eek the first gayborhood lol

tim- i know i said Jae was stupid and that Dave was too good for him but you didn't need to go and kill him lol.....he has someone waiting for him at home if he open his heart to him.....Great Job!!!! Jay