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First, Karl is threatened by a search by German soldiers Now he is tortured by French Resistance fighters. Some think he is a German spy and the pain that Karl experiences is awful and prolonged. He is unable to walk. The person who found him believe he is a good person and not a spy. Others are not convinced--still. Karl is going to be watched. What a sad situation.
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More L&L and a Gift Given
scrubber6620 commented on Aditus's story chapter in More L&L and a Gift Given
Kavan has had a rough period training. He is not a killer --or rather does not want to be one. Give him time and a need to survive. He has found one fighting skill--he is a good knife thrower. Well, his group's politics are fierce and dangerous. His sire skirts the edge of rebellion and still fancies an enemy lady vamp By luck, Kaven found out he is a shadow melder and maybe a shadow dancer. These are very rare gifts and he may have more gifts. He saved Konstantin from discovery and found out he was a shadow melder. The gifts usually kept secret among a very few/ -
Having a friend who can introduce you to a town makes it more interesting and enjoyable. I hope they are all wearing comfortable shoes. They are going to be walking and walking. Maybe, they will opt for a bus tour or two to help the parents relax.
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Being a parent of twin infants sounds heavenly..... "Loren visibly relaxes when he sees me, the relief in his eyes abundantly clear. “Today has not been a good day. The girls have been crying nonstop. Nothing I did helped. Three minutes ago, they shit everywhere. I’m not joking when I say it shot out of their diapers with the force of a cannon.” He nods at the tangled mess of soiled diapers nearby."
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Flying with infants on a plane can be hell. Many cannot stand the pressure on their ears and scream. Everyone around them is upset. One humorist said there were two classes of travel--first class and with kids. I can see infants prove the statement.
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What a horrible transit with arrogant, untrusting airport staff. Brady and Devlin worked through the issues and bad feelings. The stayed reslient and finally made it to the yacht and Marc. Their path on the ocean is still up in the air. Let us hope they stay safe. Interestingly Devlin thinks he has found a home on the yacht "....but I had a feeling… that this was now my home. I stopped for a moment to think about it… smiled and kept walking. “Everything ok Dev?” Brady asked me softly when I caught up to him, “Yes, things are looking good for the future. Well, I hope it will be,” I replied. "
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The trip to Europe has started out well-a smooth plane flight, seeing some sites, meeting friends, pacing themselves to adjust, and enjoying good food. GG in a dream named the orphanage--Home of God's Children I can say from my trip to Paris--only one treat so far has not been enjoyed by the kids--thick, hot chocolate. Paris is famous for it. It is remarkable and a historic drink everyone enjoys.
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Karl continues to be unlucky. He is shot down over France. He finds his way to a French farmhouse where someone is trying to help him, However, it seems the Germans are searching for him and are now outside the farmhouse. Will he be killed or put in a prison? Karl seems sick and needs medical help.
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The first year winners are very happy at being selected for the combat teams. The friends are all bonding and chatting, Zoel comes in and threatens and challenges. Two top students get involved and become nasty. The scene is being seriously watched by many. It takes a teacher to calm things down. Bitter feelings remain. Power seems to draw out anger among individuals of ill intent. Good guys tend to be victimized. I hope Rafe and crew stay safe.
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Love the action and mystery--and scary ending --great chapter
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Should not the hybrids be seriously traumatized by their sexual tormenting by the buyers? It is not prominent yet. I have read that human youths taken away by pedophiles need serious counselling. Is there something about their wolf nature that helps them to adapt to their abusers?
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Mark since you brought it up.... I cannot wait to read how you show Will and Travis in the Malibu and Hawaii sex rooms. Travis wants to play and find out what can happen. He trusts Will. Maybe Will cannot get into the Malibu one without his dad's help. At least the two can have fun in Hawaii on Spring Break. Has he ever offered to play with Zach in a sex room?
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What happens after Zach wakes up?
scrubber6620 replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
Daddydavek I really like your idea of Will Having Jake investigate Curtis Buck. I am also sure he did not just fuck one underage girl. He can blackmail Curtis and get him to stop spying on his kids and fucking young girls. Anyway for Jake to castrate him since he is a sexual predator? Will and Jake can do this on their own. Travis does not have toknow. -
The ending was beautiful and important. Ivan lost his grandfather and gained a loving family--that included GG who helped him connect again with his grandfather. Love abounds and soothes.
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" I took the hint. “Wade realized that Matt would not be nearly as upset about him having sex with Sean if Matt saw them together, experienced them together, and was thus aware of the dynamic.” At first I discounted what he was saying, because while Zach and I were definitely jealous people, I didn’t think we were as hung up on the sexual aspect of things as Matt was. Then I got that wasn’t the point. “If we do that, then all three of us have a relationship. It’s not three relationships: Zach and me, Zach and Travis, and me and Travis.” “I think it is possible,” Stef said. " Is it possible? Is Zach too jealous? He will know Taylor is cuckholding him and now Travis is. Will Zach like the sex with Travis and Will too much to give it up as Stef implies? He can pair with them in the future and not have another threesome which will show him how they all relate Some how I think Travis will be flexible and open to new things. After all he wants to try a sex room with Will.
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What happens after Zach wakes up?
scrubber6620 replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
I think it is 60-40 they will have a threesome at some point but it will not be sustainable. Zach and Travis will be together most often since they live near each other. Will is going to travel and is based elsewhere in in Palo Alto. Will can see the other two on selected times and then he is off to Massachusetts. I think it is 40-60 that Zach will blow up and walk away from Will for a long while. He will still have Travis to fuck and they are living close by each other. The wild card is what plan Will develops to take out Curtis in the next two months. -
Wow--Kage's residue in his chest turns Elijah on and causes him to have to masturbate thinking of Kage. As Elijah's peaks he gets a brief image of a young man-I hope he is another hybrid target to move on, He should look through the files to see if he was abducted. If not, his connection is not yet defined Thanks to Kage Elijah has a near term goal. I will love hearing Elijah tell Tyler about how he learned who to find next-after he searches the files. If he is not found, Elajah will have a good reason to keep his trap shut. Or maybe, Elijah will sacrifice himself and keep on masturbating looking for more images. At least, it seems supernatural help is becoming accepted.
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First, the good parts--Devlin was able to continue helping the fishing boat and trained his replacement. He has overcome his reticent towards Marc and is willing to stay with him on his yacht . Marc's interest beyond friendship is not defined yet. The bad parts. Marc's long lost sister is being chased by a very bad guy who wants her dead for talking to the police. She is going to be on the yacht with her 3 kids. How safe will everyone be on the yacht? What is next--a hidden home on an island for the sister and her kids? Is this added pressure conducive to developing a friendship between Marc and Devlin?
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Chapter 36: Mischievous Mind
scrubber6620 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 36: Mischievous Mind
This ending hurts and is unsatisfying. It offends my sense of justice. Vicent lost his parents and dedicated his life at the end to fight Stefan. Stefan , the cruel, is finally killed. Mason broke his neck. The world will not come to an end. Stefan winning would have caused mass death. The winners had to pay a price. Terik, the god, had to give up her divinity and became human. She is also how a male called Erik since she inhabits Stefan's body. She said Vincent had to give up something to live. He has lost all his magic--all his three affinities. Not just one, but all three. Vicent has his life and Mason and Owensville. His life has been fundamentally shrunken and redefined. to his home town and his good friends He has to find a new purpose and Mason and his friends will help. Masan and he still share as great love and they will need each other as things are radically changing. Vincent has to tell others what he has lost. He cannot help them as did just a few days ago Can Vincent be happy as he is now? Is this it for Vincent as a mage? Is there a surprise revision coming? Will any of the other 6 gods act to help him? He no longer has any contact with them. They will have to initiate anything.- 66 comments
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What a mess. Will cannot run away, if he wanted to do so. Zach is in his bed and should want his ass. They need to fuck and talk and Will has an early start. Will must tell Zach about Taylor fucking Vaugh and it looked like they were a comfortable, regular pair. It might influence his thinking. They need to wear a condom. It is an open question whether or not Zach will explode finding out about Will and Travis. Zach could come back later on Monday. Zach could walk out and stay away for days. Will is going to stay till Friday. The three might meet later in the week if Zach needs time. Zach might pick one and not want to share. Is Will going to be forced to choose one? This has a 7 month time frame. Will is going to be at Harvard on the East Coast in September. They can be together till them and then any sex will be far apart. Travis needs Will's support and strength. He has few people he can trust. Will can help him much more than Zach can help him. Zach is not in need as much as Zach. Travis needs to be safe for two months until he turns 18 and can get the income from his trust. His dad is going to pull out all stops before his birthday to get info on him to activate the morals clause to let Curtis keep control of Travis and his trust. With Travis keeping away from Craddock his dad will be upset. Will can scheme to keep Travis safe. He is a fighter and can offer a backstop to Travis along with his mother. They have a spring break in Hawaii planned which might send his dad off the rails and get another spy. I think also Will has opened up Travis and he is willing to try new things--even a sex room. Travis gets relief from Zach and he is connecting deeper with Will. It is ironic that the only other person Travis has sex with is his sister's high school boy friend and friend in the side now.
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What happens after Zach wakes up?
scrubber6620 replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
Will cannot run away--even if he is the second choice for Zach this night. Zach and Will are going to fuck. Zach expects it, He tells Zach about Taylor and Vaughn. They wear a condom now. They agree to get blood tests. In the post orgasmic bliss, Will asks Zach to come back at 4:30 to see Travis to work out their mutual issue. Having sex is on the table unless he objects. Travis shows up at 4:00 and suggest they meet with Zach to work out their issues and have a threesome. Travis can agree or back out. He is in charge of what happens or does not happen If they have a threesome, they decide it is a one time thing or not. They decide if they will or will not have an open three person relationship with each guy to fuck the other in a two way and how to trade off dates. If they do not want to share, they agree to think about what they want and will meet later. -
The Pride Of The Cock
scrubber6620 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Pride Of The Cock
BTW--I am glad Sunny Hill is not overly correct or easily offended Wearing such a bold t-shirt likely tied to a graphic vid is dramatic and exceptional, I bet I can see some fragile sorts to claim the " pride of the cock " t-shirts triggered them and claim sexual harassment and demand the wearers be kicked off campus and the offended ones be given counselling to ease their pain.- 49 comments
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The Pride Of The Cock
scrubber6620 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Pride Of The Cock
You have told us that your next story will feature Rusty in his senior year. I assume(?) the usual gang will be around him. I wonder what curveballs and surprises will you add??? Will the vocal lessons take Rusty into a vocal career or education option? Will he stand up to his dad? Will the Hamiltons back him? Will he stay a ladies' man or maybe become bisexual and find his own Jonathan? I love how you write about passionate gay sex. I am going to miss it, if you do not have strong gay characters in Rusty's story.- 49 comments
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The Pride Of The Cock
scrubber6620 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Pride Of The Cock
BTW--Loved the plan Because it worked. Jonathan and Maddox were pleased. The right people made their case and people liked them and wanted to be friends with them. The t-shirts sparked discussions It turns out it was outcast hatters and not Connor or Drew--who was not involved Thank you for coming up with a realistic revenge mechanism--The girls are punished- 49 comments
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The Pride Of The Cock
scrubber6620 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Pride Of The Cock
According to Rusty, one hundred percent of people between twenty and twenty-two in the world were watching porn Naw--guys start when they can Internet access 14 or so or earlier, I bet --who knows when guys stop watching porn I have read one of the top markets for viagra is for men in nursing homes--their sex drives are not quenched There are guys posting on Xhamster--a free porn site from 18 to past 70 OK so do not hate me--but--It is a gender thing--guys like porn and visual images or girls and men--girls love romance and the written word more than images- 49 comments
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