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Four great moments and well scripted and very touching Cameron found and recovering in the motel happily acting with Elijah and Tyler Cameron meeting his parents in Montana Cameron and his parents finding about their support available in Montana Elijah telling about the spark of Kage in him that selected and found Cameron--he was believed Tyler and Elijah stayed close and supportive. They are becoming a stronger team. This process needed a good result. It is great that Cameron can communicate, and his parents accepted and loved him.
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I hope this means you are in high spirits and very safe and ready to take on the day-- Thanks for posting while disaster surrounds you. Sorry to hear about your sore feet and knees and sunburn ears. In the Midwest, people say about possibilities--God willing and the creek don't rise--You came through and your fans are so happy for you.
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Chapter 35: Deadly Decision
scrubber6620 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 35: Deadly Decision
Wow--Vincent is taken to meet the seven gods and he is dead or is he not dead ?. But they bicker and get going after each other without making a decision. Destiny is not taking Vincent. His end is not decided. Lady Terik takes it upon herself to find a solution. It takes time and in the end no one knows what she is going to do. Vincent finds him back in the real world and acts to save Mason. Stefan says Vincent's destiny affinity must have taken over, Vincent speaks to Stefan and says he is going to hurt him now--but his voice sounds like Lady Terik. So a god is going to power Vincent to take down Stefan. I hope he is weakened so he cannot threaten Vincent again and hurt others. Amazing ! I did not envision this Terik intervention solution.- 78 comments
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This scene is awesome-- “It’s a challenge,” I said, appealing to the competitive athlete in him. “I want to see how many times you can get to the edge before you explode.” He smiled and almost gritted his teeth, and our game turned into an amazingly fun time. He’d get close and tell me, and I’d repeat the number like I was the Count on Sesame Street. That made him laugh even as he desperately tried not to blow. We repeated that four times, but after that I could tell he was too far gone to wait any longer, not that I wasn’t. “So good,” he moaned. “You did really well,” I said. “Now it’s time to blow.” He picked up his pace, and grabbed my dick to stroke me in time to his thrusts. “It’s fucking time,” he said. “Fuck!” I yelled as my orgasm exploded. I tossed my head back as I blew the first rope of cum out of my dick, and it shot so far it ended up landing on my face. I looked up and started laughing, mid orgasm. That made him crack up just as he started to shoot, so we ended up alternately laughing and moaning. He collapsed down on top of me and I wrapped my arms around him. “That is the most fun I have ever had,” he said, then laughed again. “God, that was fun! How could Travis not want more of Will ? Who has really changed is Travis Will always wanted him and held off when he was told to by Travis. They were friends and he wanted it to stay that way. This evening Trvis did not stop Will as they both wanted more and they became increasingly turned on. Will stepped up and treated Travis as a trusted partner and told Travis he could bareback him --like Zach did. This was important, I believe. Will proceeded to give him the time of his life. He had to be seriously comparing his sex with that with Zach. He knew he would be seeing him later that evening. He had a reason to not have sex with Will, but it did not stop Travis. Afterwards , he finally realized he made the right decision. Zach sees him as a guy to burn off steam and not engage emotionally or mentally. I bet Zach will be pissed off tonight when Travis cancels. He wanted sex with him more than Will and lost out. Is he--still-- mad at Will for finding them fucking? Travis wants Will to spend more time with him. He wants more awesome sex. He is in high school so his time off is not wide open. If and when Zach learns that Travis is not as available for him and Will is the new passion for Travis, I bet he will not take it kindly.
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Why does everyone hate Zach?
scrubber6620 replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
I think Zach will hurt and keep on lying to Will several times and decide eventually he has to live a separate life without Will if he gets on a pro team. Zach could get really mad when he finds out Trvis prefers Will to him. Zach might say things to Will he regrets later. Maybe things will come to a head earlier and Will has a moment of clarity when he moves to the East Coast in the fall. They will not be able to have regular sex. Will should develop new relationships and maybe find more fulfilling open relationships. -
Wow-Mark you have a gift. What hot, realistic sex scenes between Will and Travis. They acted and thought and connected with each other. Will is a fabulous bottom who is training Travis well. Oh course, we had to have some soap opera drama and Travis almost left but he came back because he preferred to stay wth Will and not see Zach and fuck. Zach made him feel like a cum dump. Will made him feel alive So Zach lied to Will and was going to see Travis, not a study group. Will felt no guilt over capturing Travis/. Tavis wanted to be with him as much as possible. He wants Will to extend his time here and comeback the next week. I can see Will doing just that.... BTW, Will introduced Travis to Stef and left him with the Curtis Buck tape and Stef will listen to it. Will also acted very mature and suggested Stef judge his Cam business on its merits and not how badly he treated Will. Stef was ready to back away from it.
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Devlin keeps staying in a difficult work and living situation with one person out to hurt him and verbally abuse him. Without reason or evidence, he is called names and his living area is damaged and vehicle marked with dung. Devlin does not seriously complain. He adjusts and moves on. His hateful aggressor is needed since he is the only mechanic and is given almost a freehand to vent his spleen when he wants. Devlin has developed other friends who look out for him. Tonight, his aggressor is getting drunk and very vocal. Devlin and some of the staff are staying inside away from the mechanic. Will the mechanic hurt others.? Will he trash Devlin's vehicle? Is he going to cross the line and be fired by the bosses?
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A Well-Planned Revolution
scrubber6620 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in A Well-Planned Revolution
Yep---one chapter and an epilogue for the marriage? What a whirlwind and a short time to solve the problem and take care of the blackmailers.- 44 comments
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Take your time. The crew can be patient--I hope It sounds like you have a very heavy workload and many people in great need. Recovery can be stressful and seem too slow. The people in your trailer area must be very fortunate to have you as an advocate and problem solver. Good Luck!
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A Well-Planned Revolution
scrubber6620 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in A Well-Planned Revolution
Heck--the plan to save and protect Johnathan was not described We just heard-- “So, do you like Ray’s and my plan?” “I do. It’s not too much, not too little, not that I could ever accuse you guys of that. And it’s subtle, and a statement --” “I don’t know about subtle. In case someone doesn’t understand the meaning, Rusty will make sure to clarify it for them." So we have to wait to the next chapter to find out what the plan is and if it succeeds Jonathan and Maddox are a sold, love making couple on the way to marriage. They have great friends.- 44 comments
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Hey, I know you have been acting under great , uncommon stress in a new situation. Only you and not us know how bad things really have been and will be. I hope we have been supportive and not overly demanding with only a few juvenile remarks since we are only human. I am taking your comments in the spirit of our regular friendly bantering and back and forth. Please take your time and pace yourself. I went through a hurricane in Virgnia with lots of disruption and no home destruction and a typhoon in the Philippines with lots of destruction and no FEMA. It takes time and lots of hands to recover. The shock stays. People have many needs and recover a different speeds.
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Devlin keeps on making bad choices. His aimless driving and selection of a very out of the way place to work has resulted in him finding an abusive situation with a hateful, aggressive , violent room mate who hit him for cleaning up the very unclean cabin. Devlin took the assault seemingly in stride and camped out back in his tent. After his car accident he should be careful with head injuries. He did not report his attack to the wife right away who should know what the roommate was like. Plus, Jack was loudly complaining about him. Hearing he was mad about his placed being cleaned up should not be a point in his favor to the owner in a normal situation. Devlin was the good guy in this situation. In a small place, it would be obvious he camped outside and did not reside inside the cabin with Jack However, Devlin stayed on site after waking up and so far has not complained. He was asked into to talk to the husband as his wife was frowning. Devlin should report what happened to him during his further interview. He has to be honest. He needs correction action. We do not know yet why the wife was frowning. Is she upset with Jack for hurting Devlin or Devlin for upsetting Jack. If Devlin does not receive an apology from the husband and new living arrangements, he should promptly leave. He cannot sleep in a tent long term. He needs a much better solution. If things are going to be ignored or swept under the rug( maybe since a mechanic is needed more than a new guy), then Devlin should leave right away. Jack will have it out for him, and the managers will be showing they cannot seem to handle him for some reason. Perhaps, Devlin would be lucky to find out Jack was fired or even quit.
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Mark--I am really looking forward how you handle the next three days in Will's life You have lots of options--As I sit outside relaxing I am dreaming up fun scenarios that can be insightful, educational, passionate, revengeful and shocking--involving Cam, Jeff, Zach, Travis, Jake, Brad, Daddy Buck, Stef, Anders-Hayes, Dan and at the fashion party Darius, Belona, JJ and the gold digger. What you write is always much better than I am considering. But then the dreaming is very enjoyable to me.
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Thank you for this love story. It took time and pain to get to the right point for both of them. The two guys finally found each other in ways they did not expect. They fell and stayed in love. The renovation unexpectedly took 10 years and they lasted through its challenges. I can see them living happily ever after.
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I am very happy to hear luck was on your side with the hurricane. The pictures from the news are horrendous. The wind, sounds, rain and debris had to be so over the top. I am sorry some people around you are acting irrational and being overly demanding. Eventually, I bet they will realize you are needed and on their side to solve problems and get relief. This mess has to take time with many around your whole are needing help. The news said it is a once in 500 year event. The utility experts from what I heard on the news are in force with thousands from out of state helping. Good Luck !
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Chapter 1 Sentimental Journey
scrubber6620 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 1 Sentimental Journey
Bod guys felt deep pain for so long and slowly connected through the things they had in common. By the end of the tale, Woodrow and Paul are on the way to becoming kindred, fajitas loving spirits. I like how they developed and worked out their issues and shared similar feelings. Paul first and then Woodrow realized they should see each other. Woodrow was finally ready----"Laying back on the bed after he sent his address, he felt the peace that had eluded him for so long. He embraced it, feeling he deserved it, and not questioning whether he’d done the right thing, however it turned out. Life was to be lived, and yeah, he had high hopes, but what was wrong with that?"- 70 comments
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I join the movement and encourage you to continue the story. It has great possibilities. The people are very interesting.
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Please be safe --The news accounts for Florida are scary You must have lots to do and much must be uncertain right now Take it easy and only post when you feel able
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Things are happening in slow motion.The boys have a scavenger hunt for plants in a class. The wild card is something called graycell. An old plant with a mysterious history. The smell was distinctive and a version of it was in the satchel wanted by their enemy, Zoel. Why did Zoel want it? Frodd wants to fight Rafe in order to recover his pride and the respect of his clan. Meanwhile, Frodd is paired on the hunt with the kind hearted omega, Andre
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Wow--Karl was rescued by Germans but did not like it. He was tormented and had bad dreams. He found a way to sabotage the ship and blew it up. He dove into the sea and was lost and swam without any idea where he was located. He expected to die and drown this time.
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The plan worked. Garjah was released and only one rebel was exposed. Timok was ready with the antidote to help a drugged Garjah recover and be able to move. The next part will be tough. Turn the people and the galactic community against the Kardoval-expose how they lied and mistreated Garjah. Let us hope Ases mech broadcast capability works, Essell was a hero and Bouncer intuitively, almost thoughtfully supported the effort.
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Devlin's tough times continue. He moves about aimlessly. After his panic attack he runs away not letting his friends know his plans. He has too many bad memories of his present place. He cuts his ties for now. His friends should be worried. What will they do? Driving near a railroad crossing he has an accident and his car rolls over. He collects a few things and walks till he finds a motel. But, he blacks out and ends up in a hospital. He does not disclose his accident. He does not want any complications. Devlin locates a used Jeep and eventually buys it and takes off driving without any idea where he wants to go. He knows his bank account is getting low. Maybe, he will find a job. Will any friend come looking for him?
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You laid the groundwork--Asher is not insane. He has found a ghost--I am not sure what happens next--This is a mystery tale.so far.
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City governments have the power of eminent domain and can foreclose on property to accomplish a public purpose--like build a hospital or another government building or even economic development for a business-but have under the 4th amendment to the US Constitution to give just compensation or fair market value for the property to the owner. Who owns the orphanage and the property? If the non-profit owns the building and land, it must be paid for it and if the price it not fair, the city can be sued which will delay the move. The matter can be taken to state and even federal courts since a constitutional matter is involved. The city most likely wants to avoid a long delay and should want to settle. It might have thought the charity would be naive and not know how to fight legally. If something illegal is being followed by the city and the goal is not public, it can be sued in addition to a price dispute. I can see Colin helping to find a new location and building. It might be tough to meet a 6-month deadline, though. Having more money from the city could really help.
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I love biscotti--what a treat and what a find for James and Marcel On line I found At the end of about any meal in Tuscany, being it at the restaurant or at home, you'll be offered with Cantucci and Vin Santo. Italian Biscotti or Cantucci are crunchy almond biscuits, traditionally dunked in Vin Santo - a sweet Italian dessert wine, but you can accompany them with also with Tea or Coffee. Typical of Tuscany, they can now be found everywhere in Italy and abroad being one of the most famous Italian sweet treats
