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  1. scrubber6620

    Chapter 109

    What grand, enjoyable times with many friends, Armand has a stellar reputation I loved this comment' about art and fellowship----The group never stayed static " Our arguments were concerning the medium used and whether we agreed with other critiques. I call it learning with loud voices over a bottle of wine. Why don’t you come with us?”
  2. Awesome--the new handsome, powerful bear god on earth was saved by a valiant, bear hero. Two sources are identified for punishment : the benefactors and the African Lycan Council. Now they will be sought for punishment in Africa on their own territory. The bears will be very motivated to seek proper revenge.
  3. BTW--not all kids are cute and appealing and fun to be around. Maeve and Maci have all the right characteristics and are total charmers. Loe's engagement numbers go up when he features them. This all suggests the rebranding will succeed spectacularly. The story and purpose behind the use of rebranding money should have a strong positive impact. At risk kids will be helped and saved. Loe will strengthen his well being, too.
  4. Mrsgnomie I am another vote for your next story. We need more exposure to the problem of child trafficking. I hope you show some good guys preventing and saving some kids and the bad guys being found and punished. " I'd been wanting to do a suspense/mystery and that's what the next story will be. We will find out all about the corruption, cover ups, and the men in charge of it all. +
  5. scrubber6620

    One Down

    Wow--A major, unsettling, unwinnable fight--The Night Clan is decimated. Konstantin survived and Simone and India died. Kavan was kept away-He could not measure up to the enemy fighters and would have been targeted to kill Konstantin. Now what--Is the Night Clan ended? What will Konstantin do? Is he the new leader? I do not want a bloodsong. I want a real mate without the bloodsong complications.
  6. Shocking--Impossible--Check your facts--Damn--What bastards--They will get away with it--This is bigger than one person--So Much corruption. Causes stream of consciousness thinking--- The parents had the nerve to sue when they were criminals and part of a hideous criminal activity--Loe was sold to a pedophile who would have tormented him and killed him. He is still out there. His accomplices are free. Three main reactions Loe is very strong and is going to confront what happened by speaking on a major national podcast He is going to dedicate funds from his new child's clothing line to fight human trafficking He is a hero who is using his success to help others in great need. Wow!
  7. scrubber6620

    Chapter 54

    Losing the support and trust of Will--and Stef and JP and Brad and Darius and others in Will's camp --is going to potentially seriously impair Zach as he seeks out friends or even opportunities beyond college and football. I beieve from what Will has said that his opinion about Zach is firm and he is not going to forgive Zach. In his previous mindset, Will would have tried to set Zach in a good financial position and occupation in the future when other things ended for Zach. If Zach was injured badly by the coke can, suing Will should separate him more from the family Will was pushed at this time into a full break by Zach's violence toward him and lack of showing and concern or trust or love. I think it is reasonable to expect them to break apart eventually as their lives separated with different locations and demands and friends in some months. This intense breakup just yesterday means a friendship is lost and their lives may never reconnect on more than a superficial level due to some relationships. My assumption is that Will should keep on growing and learning about life and relationships. Zach will be in a set pattern and having to hide his true nature, Will is going to be open and living a healthier, less repressed life. I also assume Will is going to be spectacularly financially successful much than most people with his decisions and advice from Stef. Zach is going to be reminded of who he lost when he reads about Will in the future. However near term, Zach is going to make Travis be very worried about him and his violence plus maybe Travis could see more value in being friends with Will than a shallow Zach. Zach also has lost Will's help in fending off Curtis Buck--The cell phone loss is one painful action that has removed Zach's privacy.
  8. scrubber6620

    Chapter 108

    The famous Louvre evocated powerful feelings in Armand. His extended family visited it, but Armand was really touched by seeing his painting of a child abandoned by her mother. Others saw how he was impacted and tried to help him recover. I hope another painting evoking more positive feelings will ger posted at the museum. Armand can convey a range of feelings with his paintings. Maybe seeing this one will inspire him. He should have good scenes from the move to the new building for the children.
  9. scrubber6620

    Chapter 54

    I think Zach and Will are done as a couple. Will is going to move on and have a full , separate life at a different college far away from UCLA , different friends and sexual partners and a different occupation. Zach if he stays in football will be focused also in a separate life not connected to what Will does or who he meets and plays with. They will not have a reason or occasion to meet and reasons to avoid each other. Stef and JP and Brad will be on Will's side.
  10. scrubber6620

    Chapter 54

    Nice conspiracy theory bringing in Elizabeth Danfield, Spyke. I had not thought of that connection. I wonder if Curtis Buck is just an asshole and has a need to control all around him. You might be giving Mark ideas, though. I am focusing on that the real Zach has come forth under pressure when help felt his pride and sexual dominance was threatened. He felt Will competed with him for his girl and gay playmate on the side. But they were part of Will's world before Zach stepped in to this location. Maybe even Taylor chidden him if Will's kisses were more skilled and passionate than his and hurt his feelings. Zach until now kept his hurtful, angry feelings under warps till he exploded. Zach has made a serious mistake that he has seemingly not yet understood. Will could not listen to his messages. He has decided. Will only now just sees Zach is not showing love and care for Will by his hard statements and since he has seriously physically hurt him--just like Zach acted before when he was 15 and had an unhealthy relationship with an older man. Zach can be abusive and sees and wants things his way. He is not aways a loving, caring person. Will does no longer feel any love and does not feel safe in his presence. Will is strong enough to stay out of an abusive relationship. Zach will miss him when he has time to consider it. He is the real loser and is bereft without an ally facing Curtis Buck and two sexual partners who might see him now in a new light without Will as a friend in public with visible injuries.
  11. scrubber6620

    Chapter 32

    These guys have been immersed in a loving family with great stories about wonderful, compatible terrific sons and twins. They are feeling very positive and in a great mood. Cinnamon rolls helped and gave them a sugar high. I think they are wanting these positive feelings to continue so they will want to take the most optimistic approach to the rancher. Without realistic grounding, they are crazy and very trusting. A Texas rancher must have lots of guns. They need better information. I hope they rethink their plan and do some serious investigative work as they get closer to the event. Option 2 could go far worse than they think--- "Why not do just that? I mean, what’s the worst that can happen? He tells us to get the hell off his property and that we’re crazy?”
  12. scrubber6620

    Chapter 32

    Hmm--Tyler and Elijah feel so connected to the twins who have been gone 8 years. The new information seems to say they are with a person in remote Texas who has them after his neighbor was killed. We do not know the reason the new person kept the hybrids or what he thinks they are. He may not know they were shifters. Are they exotic , wolf like pets to him and not sexual playthings? He feels a need to hide them? Does he feel ownership now as a rescuer or see them as sexual plaything. Could they be like lost animals without an owner who need care and feeding and attention from a new owner ? How do they act? Are they sad or loving twins and grateful for being rescued and not sexually tormented. Tyler and Elijah are considering walking up to his door and asking about his half human-half wolf captives. I think that is a bad idea without more info. How can they explain who the hybrids are or that they have parents who miss them? They have to have a credible, non-shifter based excuse to take the hybrids. Well, they could say they know their names....However they have not articulated one now. If they walk up to the door and ask, Elijah better be ready to use the tranquilizer on him or shift into a bear if the guy refuses to help them or pushes them away as crazy people. Elijah could shift and scope out the properties, Sebastian's crew could check his online presence with more intensity and turn off and site security. I bet Elijah could find the twins and see how they are treated. If they are treated as pets in a cage, he could find a way to free them without the new person knowing.
  13. scrubber6620

    Chapter 54

    I did not expect this definitive an outcome. No subtlety, Mark. This is the Zach the haters have seen. Damn--Zach crossed the line--big time. He abused Will and Will could see no love--no reason to stay with Zach Will concluded...."It was easy for me to be this cold because I couldn’t trust him anymore. Tonight, it had been a toss across the room. Tomorrow it might be a black eye. Then the next time it could be worse. I didn’t want to be alone with him. " Stef and Tom now agree with Will. Zach has tried to contact Will. Will simply sent him pics of how Zach had hurt him. Is Will going to stay firm? What could Zach do? Will should recover painfully. Is Zach simply bleeding or is he more seriously hurt with a serious eye injury that could impair his football ability? I hope not. What could Travis do? Does he have to pick Zach or Will?
  14. scrubber6620

    Epilogue

    Awesome story--ending with love and good feelings all around, On to next year and more adventures... Thank you, Great job.
  15. scrubber6620

    Chapter 107

    What a busy day--full of trips and sightseeing sought and reconnecting with friends The City is being unreasonable about the orphanage. I do not believe a court would kick out the kids when a replacement is being finished. It would be too cruel and publicly embarrassing. Colin sounds dedicated on running for city council. He will be a better, more caring man than the one now in place.
  16. scrubber6620

    Chapter 31

    Am I right in believing the hybrids are used for sexual pleasure and sometimes unlimited or kinky pleasure ? 8 years of sexual torment has to play heavily on the mind of the twins No matter how beautiful they look or great they smell, they must need serious counseling. Any real relationship with a new partner may take years or may never be possible. But time will tell --The hybrids have to be found and their mental status has to be assessed.
  17. scrubber6620

    Chapter 31

    Danilo Syrtis said: Not good at math, not good at chemistry,… then how do you cook ? 😂 kbois replied Pinch of this, dash of that. Maybe a smidgen more... As far as I understand it--cooking is artistry and inspiration--recipes are guidelines and not iron clad baking is math and precision, and recipes have to be followed carefully and exactly measured, etc.
  18. scrubber6620

    Tough Chapter 13

    What a crazy trip. The yacht was put in a too tight place that served as an entrance to a harbor and was stuck for a few weeks. Marc took too great a risk. Devlin said he was going to leave at one point but has stayed and been delayed by the troubles of the yacht. Luckily the boat had not been damaged. Marc has said he wanted to know Devlin better. No mention has been made of his efforts or Devlin's reaction. Devlin is made uneasy by the luxury of the yacht.
  19. scrubber6620

    Chapter 106

    Michelin Guide Star Rating Descriptions One star: A very good restaurant in its category. Two stars: Excellent cooking, worth a detour. Three stars: Exceptional cuisine, worth a special journey.
  20. scrubber6620

    Chapter 31

    I am struck by how influential and helpful Kage has been in guiding the teams. They now fully recognize it. So far 20 pups have been found and they have been helped to communicate with convenient adaptive tech. Tyler and Elijah had almost the same colorful dream. Elijah then picked the next targets with help. They are lovely twins with loving parents who have been gone too long. Sebastian is worried they might have gone feral without a pack to support them. The team has tranquilizers now to use if needed. Maybe by being twins and having their own support system, they have been able to prevent going feral.
  21. scrubber6620

    Chapter 31

    I want the buffalo chicken pasta--mmm It sounds amazing--Thanks for the tempting idea
  22. scrubber6620

    Part 3

    Our hero and Kaelie found the gravestone. The ghost is Elias C Blakley. The ghost has trouble moving around and conserving his energy. He is sad that he cannot find out more right now. A web search told our hero that the museum would have to be contacted to finds out more about Elias. They will go to the museum tomorrow. I wonder if our hero, Asher, has a connection to Elias. His family founded the town with others and his relations throughout. We need to find out about the mysterious mayor who stopped an accused witch from being killed. So far there is little solid evidence--only a few questions and a worried ghost.
  23. So Karl was hated by one of the Frenchmen because he thought his boyfriend, Clement, liked Karl and not him. He was jealous of Karl. Neither Karl nor Clement saw this coming. It comes out only at the end with a further meeting in the barn. Karl was badly hurt because of Manu's hateful feelings. Clement finally argued and showed Manu he loved him only and that Karl was not a problem Life underground maybe more pleasant--unless the Germans attack.
  24. I liked the medical drama House. The doctor was obnoxious, foul mouthed, uncouth and nasty, but totally brilliant and the one to come to if your patient had a serious problem that was so far unsolvable. His reigning statement was--"Everybody Lies" The issues was not why they lied--embarrassment, legal problems, etc-, They issue was what did they lie about. The drama went into the personality clashes and searching and consequences of the lies when exposed. In one case a sick kid was adopted and his parents were afraid to tell him and they thought could lose his love. His real parents had a medical condition that now showed up in the kid. House had a team of student doctors who played detective and found what was needed--sometimes not following the law. He would be a great doc to go to if anyone in this story got really sick.
  25. scrubber6620

    Chapter 111

    Grajah is more hurt than he puts on. He acted out physically. Essell is the only one to see the pain inside Garjah. Garjah was truly hurt by the Kardoval . The worse pain was from the loss of the bond--that pain is ended. Now Essell needs to counsel and strengthen Garjah, He has to help him recover and lead others. Essell tells Garjah the trust the people have in him is key. He will explain more soon. I wonder how trust in Garjah can be used to free the people? Is Garjah willing to take the leadership role that Essell sees? Will Garjah come up with a different plan?
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