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Interesting development--and a great plot twist The settlers are growing and prospering and the leaders sought out and received new guidance from Mithras. She was pleased and said a second settlement with Gnos nearby should be built where she told them. However , Mithras warned them of a great dangers., A space ship is arriving soon and is seeking something special which is not known to Mithras. If the new people find it first, they are to be warned to not touch it without the original settlers being present. Who are the new ones? They seem to speak the same language as the settlers? Earth was falling apart and only these old settlers remain of the only attempt to leave . Did others leave also? Or are they from another planet? What is being sought and why is it so important? Could it pose a threat--like a nuclear reactor?
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Amazing--- “Oh, fuck,” he whispered, “you’re big.” “Glad to see you’re finally acknowledging the might of my cock.” They made love twice and it was exhilarating, joyous, and path breakingly blissful and so much better than they expected. Jonathan was a perfect bottom boy. Maddox was the perfect top. They fit together like hand and glove. It had to be a surreal experience. No objections. No problems. Everything they tried worked and felt awesome--amazingly. They kept doing things and cooperated and learned how to relate sexually. Wow!
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CJ easily reconnected with friends and has up to date political discussions as if he never left. Life goes on with wonderful friends and little controversy at this time. CJ used technology to stay in contact with Owen. He kept his real reason for being in town a secret while accomplishing his ostensible reason for the trip: finalizing plans for a surrogate. They seem to have found a good birthing mother. CJ is glad Owen has come to think that they share everything, including his wealth. Owen talked of "our" money. We learn CJ has expressed to Owen his current evaluation of Northman. He acknowledges he was good at his job and had taught CJ something. I think this is new information, He is not going try to rock the boat in the office and also not ask for more time off for the possible movie award. CJ is being gracious and forgiving. He is turning the other cheek and seeing some good in his boss. I wonder how Northman will respond ? This quick trip and the undercover spy matters had to upset him. He is being left out of the loop. Somehow I thought Northman was jealous and upset with the opportunities and connections CJ had. He maybe a fine bureaucrat in his present role. But, CJ will still be a strong outgoing star on a path for better things with other responsibilities and options. Is a personality conflict inevitable?
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What an idyllic experience--good food, good friends, good experiences in the city of lights and romance. They have many reasons to return. Armand was very kind to give his hostess and friend, Madame Lavigne, a painting and still kept his famous name silent. It should be worth a lot right now and more in the future.
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Thanks for the fun tale. Dreams sometimes will never die or be given up with age. I am looking forward to a great celebration tonight. I am cooking the corned beef and cabbage for friends. Best To You !
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The tide has turned, Loren wants Jay badly. He wants sex with him without any baggage, but Jay wants the baggage--ie emotional attachment. It's only a matter of time that he moves to be more like Jay wants or he breaks and they part. I like that Jay has begun to become part of Loren's online life. Can Loren be the guy Jay wants? What will Jay do to also bend towards Loren's likes? Jay's tactics are working--slowly, methodically , kindly . He is truthful and says what he wants and Loren finds he has to be with him . He cannot make a full commitment to Ja--yet. He learns of Jay's friend and becomes jealous and cannot believe it. Finally they are having orgasms , but, I guess, not full sex. Jay denies Loren a full coupling. Loren is masturbating thinking of Jay. This interplay is fascinating and compelling. I am still reluctant to accept they can meet or stay apart for such long periods.
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What an enjoyable high class visit and tour of the man's art collection. He has eclectic tastes. Armand and Collin were welcomed and treated courteously. I was surprised that the collector has works by GG and Armand and he did not know it or their names. Armand remained silent and did not reveal their identities. He should be proud to know he was valued enough to be part of such a good collection. It was interesting to find out that GG signed her paintings with a bluebird symbol. Armand's arrow seems to be following a family trait.
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Now, the important mission of bringing the two groups into a workable treaty can begin with Ases , the new ambassador and Essell's old friend, on board. Essell ponders---"..... I knew he’d have orders above and beyond being an ambassador and bringing a treaty to get it signed by the Kardoval. Learning about Garjah’s people might also seem like a diplomatic mission, but if my mother got her claws into him, she’d treat this like one of her friend or foe first contact scenarios too. I wanted to try and figure out just what Ases had been up to, and how much of his disregard for the rules and hatred of form over the function of government held up to working in it. He wouldn’t have been the first youthful rebel determined to change how things were done to be be seduced into accepting how things were or convinced to lose their ideals altogether. I can see Essell spending time with Ases to better understand his motives and objectives and bring him into his and Garjah's way of thinking, if he can. Essell will need to get the evidence to help Garjah and Bouncer improve or not their opinion of Ases. Will Ases bring information on what has happened to Captain Sonez? The last incident with Sonez had to be shaking up the earth establishment. Do the powers that be consider Essell acted rightly or wrongly ? Will the fight be influencing Ases? Will Ases speak of any advice given by others on earth? Garjah's world has technology more advanced that other worlds. Will Ases have a military spy mission to collect information, copy technology and assess strengths and weaknesses, too?
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I loved this chapter. Armand and all were so congenial and helpful over great works of art. As he said it, only in Paris could this happen. The food was simple and pleasant and the conversations flowed easily with no conflict. What a heavenly day! Like others, I am hoping the private collection tour the next day will be eye opening. Maybe, the collector will value Armand enough and want a painting from him?
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I liked how they all gathered and toured the museum and Armand acted like good, informed artist and educator. Everyone seemed to get along. Madam Lavigne will have some wonderful memories Collin and Armand are having a very enjoyable, fun honeymoon and lots of good sex.
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You said---- "Here's hoping to having the next chapter blow up everyone's expectations! " Oh No! I am expecting great sex with two guys finally bonding. It won't happen? I guess I will have to wait for your next cliffie as that chapter ends
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The lottery cycle is repeating with Ned's grandson in the contest. Ned poignantly remembers what happened around Peter's sacifice/contribution. Will the grandson go through the same lottery struggle as Ned and lose his life or will his young lover's life be taken for the group's survival ? Is the Gnos seeking Ned in order to plan for the next lottery or suggest a change?
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This is such a complicated mating dance. I think they are going to reach a stable, loving agreement and then , I am mistaken : "He brings my face back. “A six-five athlete that’s three-hundred pounds doesn’t get to pout.” He’s smugging: smug smiling. The little hypocrite. “If only there was a way I could make it up to you…” He kisses me softly, his tongue sliding against mine. The kind of kiss that says all the whole ‘I don’t date’ statement is bullshit. It’s the kind of kiss that blows the first one out of the water. He pulls away and looks as kiss-drunk as I feel. He tries to collect himself, then decides to fuck it and grabs me for one last lingering, so-gentle-it-hurts kiss. Well, I guess it’s not one last kiss. We kiss all night. Between bites of dinner, making another video, dessert, and lots more before Loren leaves for the night." Loren has modified his online behavior to suit Jay and tells him he has been online since he was 14 and he has his own clothing line. Loren is an institution which Jay has only now realizes. The ending scene is magnificent-if you like heated up and not satisfied sexual desire. Jay is not like Loren's other partners. He wants more than sex , They kiss for hours fully dressed and then they separate. they will have their first intense sexual efforts ?
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Chapter 14 - Breaking Point
scrubber6620 commented on Salander's story chapter in Chapter 14 - Breaking Point
Nic is clearly gay and has other partners , but is only having sex with Jake now. I think he was traumatized some years ago ( raped?) and has set limits on his positions and being touched above the waist. These limits and his emotional problems have to be due to his past scary and painful unwanted sexual actions with a male. There is a potential for both Jake and Nic to at least partial heal each other by being open to learning from each other beyond enjoying sex. There is also a possibility of a train wreck for Jake especially if their sexual actions become widely known. For now, the sex is good and getting better. Why mess it up with becoming friends and more ? Can they stop growing closer? Will an other scandal happen ? I do not know. -
Thery really took advantage of the Louve and were very helpful to some students. Armand was a painter from early on and shared his works with others generously. He must be a likable, appealing person who can teach others about paintings and artists. He has definite opinions about what he likes and does not like but is very approachable and is not dogmatic. It seems the Louve has opened Collin into wanting to visit Egypt and see more history and art in the country
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Karl learns to fly easing his self-doubts. He is very pleased after his first plane flight. Arthur is a good trainer. The pace of war will likely push his training forward at high speed and combat might not be far away.
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Chapter 5: Comprehending Crime
scrubber6620 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 5: Comprehending Crime
The four parts I see in this chapter cover the gamut of emotions. Vincent and Mason are so happy and in love and agreed to be married at a pack meeting. Alpha Scott completed his evaluation/removals and began needed leadership changes of the on the way to be renewed, more satisfied nearby pack, Dirk is working his way into the police department and is seriously puzzled by who killed Shaw. Finally, hate and motives for more murder were told that will rock the town's shifter world. One of the humans in the police department has a very dark side that he hides well. He killed Detective Shaw and hates shifters . He has told hunters that this town is full of shifters and wants the hunters to kill them. He seems normal, but is actually a telepath. He can read other minds and hide his feelings from other law enforcement individuals. He wants hunters to show up and kill the three alphas and other shifters. So far, his identity has not been revealed. I wonder who he is? We know he is part of the group still to be interviewed with the names starting with F, P and R. He feels he has done his job killing Shaw and finding out about the shifters and plans on leaving town in a while to get away from the "monsters." You really gave us reasons to be pleased and then very worried. Any hunters trying to take on the Owensville shifters might well be surprised to find the presence of beings with powerful magic to stop them. Mason and Vincent and other shifters are unaware of the threat they are facing. -
Chapter 14 - Breaking Point
scrubber6620 commented on Salander's story chapter in Chapter 14 - Breaking Point
Thank you for giving us hope for Nic and Joey. They need a new environment. Once Joey was occupied again, Nic texted Luke: Get ready. We're moving out tomorrow. Poor Nic. Things will get better for him soon. -
Chapter 14 - Breaking Point
scrubber6620 commented on Salander's story chapter in Chapter 14 - Breaking Point
Both Nic and Jake have complicated, painful lives and are tormented by others with no total solution in sight. They keep having sex at school and liking it. Jake wanted better sex with Nic only. He let the school problems with Meg publicly go over his head and did not take any actions against her which angered Meg. She has a very cruel tongue. She should get caught saying the wrong thing at the wrong place or time. At least Jake regained Luke as a friend and had his sport and team mates. He is on a steady, if not too rocky path. Nic is the one who faces immediate trouble from Jakes hopes and Amos's actions. "Jake snuck into Nic’s thoughts often lately, much to Nic’s chagrin. He didn’t like the curious, fluttery sensation in his stomach every time he got a DM from the jock around noon. Nic got what he wanted out of the arrangement: discreet, regular, and no-strings-attached sex, and Jake was getting better at it each time. That’s all he ever needed. So why did he feel like something was missing? And worse, why did that feeling go away when Jake said or did certain things – like smile at him?" Jake did want to get closer to him and even asked if he could go bareback. Nic said he would think about it,but was freaked out. He did not want any guy to get close to him. His history and pain from his past would rise up and torment him with panic attacks. Jake was not a rapist! But, it did not matter. Nic's past and present demons were very powerful. Amos was a present demon and he feared him --especially when he was on drugs or alcohol. BTW, if Amos is getting paid by the VA, then he has a service-related physical or mental disability. Nic reached his breaking point and decided to move out and take Joey with him. I wonder what Amos or his mother will say or do? -
If you want to see true evil displayed, visit the Holocaust Museum in DC. It is chilling. I also visited the Dachau concentration camp which is carefully peserved and all the horrors are easily seen The German government carefully arranged photos of camp life. .Dachau itself is a bustling suburb of Munich and can be reached by its subway. The contrast between the camp right next to the city could not be more arresting
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An engaging and thoughtful first day in the city: great art, canals, boats and tears from a poignant museum. Europe can bring out so many emotions and Collins showed especially he is sentimental and caring. I am glad they are getting married tomorrow. They are wisely pacing themselves after a long plane flight. Armand is a wise tour guide that will help them both maximize their options and enjoyment.
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I love the back and forth and self-doubts and misunderstood or unaccepted feelings being expressed by Maddox and Jonathan. They are so in lust with each other but won't believe it. You ended with them agreeing to a real date,. Jonathan will cook a great meal at Maddox's place and his roommates will not be home. They will end up with Maddox fucking Jonathan and both will think this is a divide. Jonathan thinks he could move on to find a real boyfriend who will be a long-term lover. Maddox will find out if he will love him and leave him once he has conquered Jonathan. Both are mistaken so it would seem. They do care for each other and might find this out , if they can ease their self-doubts. The seduction Saturday could go a long way to letting each other know more about their partner. I bet Maddox is a considerate , insightful, skilled user of his body and knows how to read and pleasure another body/partner. He might even be a guy who wants to create his and his partner's orgasms and is not selfish. He might amaze Jonathan and help ihim want to have more love making--not fucking-with Maddox. Maddox will be challenged to apply his skills to a guy with a different way of operating. Jonathan is a virgin so he will have to be treated and prepared slowly with lots of preparation and even lube. I hope Maddox has studied up on gay sex mechanics. If things go right Saturday, both guys will want repeat performances. and much more love making and a deepening of their relationship can take place. I remember that Maddox might be open to being fucked by Jonathan. That openness should blow his mind. and create a close bond. Maybe they will go public about their feelings in the future? I am concerned that Jonathan doesn't see how wrong Conner would be for him. He is a user. Maddox has eyes only for Jonathan. He is not portrayed currently as looking with interest at any other girl or guy. He should not really be thinking he is going to love him and leave him like Rusty suggested or caused him to doubt his motives. BTW, is Rusty being portrayed as 90-10 on the Kinsey scale with an interest in bedding Maddox if he fucks and maybe is fucked by Jonathan? He jokes about getting into Maddox's bed. He keeps asking if Maddox is fucking Jonathan so he can be viewed as gay. I am expecting your next chapter will be amazing.
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This chapter devolved delightfully with everyone being in character and the main questions about reasons/motivations and the actual trip were answered. I am very glad that there were no fireworks or explosions and deaths. The spy was going to leave at some point and had been preparing for it. He had a bad relationship with his ambassador and CJ's treatment and exposing him was the final straw. Cj learned he was considered a guy with great potential, an encouraging visible record and was a target for cultivation and investigation. Even not using Google, CJ had Domogarovs number. Domogarov was a bad acting guy with low tastes and crude ideas about CJ so he could not have succeeded in recruiting him. It seems Domogarov needed CJ to be with him on the stressful plane flight to soothe his nerves and let him talk to a non-spy as he finally went over to the US. He explained his reasons for targeting CJ and why he needed to leave Russia. CJ should have been proud and as Owen said the Russian played to his real weakness: his vanity or pride. The personal side back in DC for CJ was very comforting . He is so well grounded with likable friends. This is not a spy novel. If it were such a novel, Domogarov 's presence might have been discovered and he would be targeted and CJ might be in trouble with Russian intel HQ. Or maybe he would be a double agent who is not defecting but going through the motions to learn about the state of US spy craft before he broke away and returned eventually to Moscow.
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Both guys are comfortably planning out their home apartment and getting ideas to renovate the club. Armand is creating more works and is also going to paint a wall at the club which should be very impressive. The village scene has been described by them as touching. The trip to Europe should be so much fun and enlightening for Collin and Armand who might get more ideas for painting. They are getting married which is a huge step and one they must really want. They are very kind to the staff at the club by giving them a summer vacation with pay. In the future they will have to finish the plan for the club and consider menu changes from foods enjoyed on their trip and the cook's trip to Europe and some revised club rules to stop the bad eating habits of some of the girls. BTW, sometimes female eat just small plate portions or appetizers in order to not gain weight. These girls, though, are getting food at no cost to themselves.
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Jay has raised playing hard to get to an art form. He won't give an inch. Loren now wants much more. He has Loren and both know it and Loren is smiling, Hooray? It seems playing hard to get is the only way to get off the bottom of Loren's list. Now the chase and capture can begin in earnest! I hope Loren can add Jay to his online life. It could get even more popular.
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