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Fights happen in military barracks. This fight should have been reported and handled at the unit level by a NCO or Lieutenant. Something is out of balance if a three star general is notified of a fight. The punk has to be disciplined or he will become even more of a bully. He is a ticking time bomb for Karl's survival in the unit. Jorgen was right. The punk wants Karl kicked out. Starting rumors is just one way. Getting into a fight is another. Jorgen is worried. Karl's black eye will be noticed. It could get much more visible tomorrow and stay visible for a while. I hope Karl can see well enough to go to classes. Jorgen is good for Karl and can help him get through his training. I am surprised how academic the training is. It sounds like Karl is being trained to be a pilot. What a tough step up for a former farm boy/worker. Is he able to be a pilot or is this too much ? Can he take on a better fitting role? Is it time for him to meet Arthur?

Kat had a very needed , painful discussion with David. The police were called about a noise complaint. His wife, Elisabeth, finally moved out after what must have been a huge, loud fight with items destroyed in the house. Kat suggested he go to a therapist, and he opened up to her: “I don’t know,” he admitted. “Sometimes I’m scared that I’ll wake up and it will be gone. The pain. And then all I have left of him will be gone,” he replied and broke into a sob and she regretted coming in. Now she was faced with emotions and tears, and none of it was her forte" Well, David was honest expressing his feelings and pain and Kat tried her best. Is he at the bottom of his destructive passage and is he ready for a turning point to pick up his life?? Can he do something and see others so he can begin to look how to live his life and still not be traumatized? What will Kat do now? This experience did not make her feel good. Will she follow up on more loose ends ( close friends, anyone benefiting from the marriage breakup, the missing prostitute, etc) with increased vigor?

Wow, that was sudden and unexpected and definitely shifted the story dynamic and mood. Life seems much better for the three now good friends. Xavier made the first move and took the right step to lay beside Kyle in his hospital bed. Xavier and Kyle realized that are more like brothers and are not meant to be lovers. I expect he win end his self-destruction dating trying to find a Xavier replacement. Jasper now know Xavier is not into Kyle and is open to talking more to him. Jessica has her old friends back and is no longer going to try to win over Xavier as a bf. It all sounds healthy and on the right track.

How did the bad guys escape? They used a secret passage. The sub-bottom where the pups were located was not on the old blueprints. I bet an escape tunnel could not be on the old blueprints since it was added later.

BTW--I am wrung out. Our great author must be tired and needing a break I am going outside to drink a fine whiskey ( no fruit infusions) and smoke a fav cigar and think more about this story Thank you for this excellent, optimistic chapter

Thank you--what a generous action-- Brilliant--exciting, engaging action--ferocious fight well described-Fulfilled more that I could dream as possible for a near term resolution with serious casualties for the bad guys and fewer for ours ( more for future fights) and many pups being saved Sebastian is calling the high council snake shifter so it looks like Alberts and Belland will soon be persona non grata and targeted for hunting. Is the snake shifter really an ally? But, why did Caleb and the leaders leave early and by a secret way? Did they know the front way was being watched ? It seems they could have been alerted. Is there another traitor? Where are those escaped leaders and any other pups? Is a trap being set up for Sebastian and his crew? It seems another big battle is coming up. If Alberts and Belland try to escape, will they go to a close by airport?

Wonderful next steps--mmm Sebastian has Milo with him in his kingdom and he seems to get better. They are naked in bed. I think Sebastian's aunt told Milo that had to make love to cure Sebastian. It is going to happen. So there is a passageway between worlds. One guy found it first and now Milo found it. Magic is not needed The parents now know about the kingdom and the truth about Pepin and Sebastian. What a shock ! Will they believe what Pepin says? Will the parents and others go to the kingdom or will Milo and Sebastian come to earth to meet them ?

The military can fit people into many keyholes with lots of job openings. Karl will have to learn to read and write in a minimal way. His job related aptitudes will be tested and he could be assigned into one that fits him--a guard, a gunner on a plane, a logistics clerk who fills orders, etc. Not everyone has to be a pilot or skilled mechanic. Karl might even like his new job. It will give him a sense of accomplishment and show him he is part of a team onto his goal of helping fight the war.

On no--red herrings in the author's comments ! So unfair, if true!

They are ships passing in the night and are not connecting or talking honestly. They are seeing the crime and ending of a life so differently. I am surprised they has not been a period of anger at what happened and an understanding that they were targeted. The police figured it out. They might at some point try professional help, but I am not sure how the topic could be introduced and be accepted. I am wondering that even if they find out who did the crime and why it was done, if they will be able to stay together as a family. These two are so broken.

Caleb is working with the kidnappers--Even if he was not told the details of the plan by Sebastian, he can still destroy the plan. He knows Wayne and Sandi don't have a kid. Did he see them in town and has he blown Sebastian's plan up with the couple being killed or beaten up and then the evil ones are set to hurt Elijah when they get to the mine ? If he did not see them in town, will Caleb put two and two together when he sees Elijah and is told about his parents and then expose the false scheme?

Oh God No! Caleb is not a plant--He has joined with the evil ones. Talk about 52 card pickup--It is all rearranged How much does Caleb know of Sebastian's plans? Sebastian has to let the group know what are the next steps. Was he prepared and kept Caleb so far out of the loop he is not aware of the true surveillance plans.? Is Elijah now in danger of being killed? I still don't see how they are going to get in the mine. Are they going to draw the evil ones out? Will they attack them when they leave? The next chapter will be either even scarier and violent or more hopeful. and leading to a better outcome. I can't wait to see what you have decided.

Alpha Caleb got out of the SUV by the mine with the most likely key evil High Council members Alberts and Belland, Wow, Double Wow! Is he in league with them and a huge spy who is revealing and under cutting Sebastian's plans ? If so, Sebastian and the others better regroup and move fast. They could be in serious trouble and could even be attacked soon. Or, is he a double agent sent out with Sebastian's knowledge with a cover story of being disgruntled or envious to beguile and eventually hurt the ones who are kidnapping the pups ? If he is working with Sebastian, then the good guys have an inside wolf who can create a panic or mess and secret Elijah away. The High Council member presence confirms their link to the sordid kidnappings. Now , they could be ready to be brought down and the kidnappings stopped by the Sentinels. Sebastian's efforts so far indicated that there was no an easy, safe way into the mine--other than the front door and the inside build up was large and complicated. Caleb and Riley could get out the front door--if someone created a diversion -if Elijah changed into someone else The Sentinels will need to be ready to safeguard Elijah and Caleb if and when they escape and then taken on Nichols and his men and the High Council members. Alberts and Belland's arrival might be the reason Elijah was taken so fast. Nichols wanted an example to show how their set-up worked on pups. Will the bad guys be surprised what happens next !!

Karl has been fitting in and made a friend. good, He is not discouraged and resilient. The officer took a sincere interest in him and offer to help him if the situation with the bully became too tough. Karl found the stares of the officer disconcerting, Was the officer analyzing him for a professional or perhaps personal interest ? Did he know something about his background with George. Or, maybe he was asked to watch out for him due to a friend asking him and did not want a special relationship. Time will tell.

What an unpleasant high school party that did not fit Alec and River. They stayed too long and finally heard some cruel, harsh guys who did not want them at the party. Finn did not spend time with them. He did not realize they could not blend in with the others present. They had to leave. They were upset. Finn was clueless. Alec finally was told by River that Finn was totally into him. He would not accept it--yet. But, he did agree to ride with Finn around the area late at night. Finn wanted to talk. Ok Finn, it is time to come clean with Alec and tell him and show him how you feel. Any problems in your relationship after you fully get into each other and people find out are down the road. Enjoy any good times and feelings for now, please.

BTW, the sexual entrapment planned by Domogarov using the handsome naked male ballet dancer is called a "honeypot. "It is a classic spy entrapment technique. But, the dancer did not try to seduce them. He was straight and out of sorts. CJ and Owen were very kind and understanding. Usually someone tries to trap a key person into a sexual relationship and also have blackmail material-explicit films or pics or letters from the guy being blackmailed. The dancer might be faulted for failing--or he might get away since he is a key star and needed by the ballet. Recently, a congressman on the Intel committee was caught in a long-term sexual relationship with a Chinese spy in the US. He is still on the committee. Domogarov is a very bad guy and has a well-known reputation as one. He is also a sexual predator. We were told he took up with a guy at the embassy he met at a bar and tied him up and fisted him . The US guy was ruined and sent home. Domogarov was kept in Mexico.

Like real policework with a too interested civilian thrown in. Leads found and lost. Crazy guys all around. What about other possible leads on who benefits and who close by wants to hurt them or interrogating the lost prostitute or the first one again? With the passage of time, the ones who did it might slip up and reveal themselves at work or in a friendly conversation or looking at bank records, etc. Will David be pushed to give things up at work? Was someone paid to do the deed? Will that person be found or speak more about his crime to others or be killed?

Thanks for your direct answers. You are one of a select few authors who do respond and help your readers better understand your intentions. I know we can go off is wrong directions and miss things and want certain developments. I suggested some thoughts only to let you know you had me interested and thinking. It is your story and I know you will write what seems right to you. I am fully enjoying the ride. These two guys are worth learning more about.

It will be good to hear from Ellie next week. She and Jake can help each other. They both have serious things to discuss and advice to give and accept. She seems to welcome being with Jake. Jake needs an honest sounding board he can trust. He is on new ground. He is full of lust and the thrill of something new and very thrilling. He just had the best orgasm of his life after a sad sex experience with Meg. I think he wants to understand what changes he is going through and still retain his humane outlook on life and find out what Nic can mean for him

It really is up to the Russians to get rid of their spy. The US State Department could declare him "persona non grata" and he would have to leave within a set number of days. The Russians would retaliate and declare one of our spies also persona non grata. This way of kicking someone out is serious and not done lightly. A long time ago we did that to 50 Russian supposed spies in the US and the Russians picked 50 of ours to leave their country. One of my friends served as an admin officer in a US embassy was kicked out of St Petersburg and he really did not want to leave. Let's see what advice Ambassador Cox has on Monday. Even if Domogarov was told to leave, the Russians would want a replacement in place so he would have time to take revenge.

Some further thoughts Will any body marks show up after this ( or any future sessions) in the classroom or locker room? Jake noticed his red hand prints on Nic's ass cheeks Could Nic have placed a hidden cam in the room? He picked the room and was there early so he could find a good spot for the cam , he also selected the chair to be fucked on so he could have the cam properly located. Will Jake text Nic and tell him he is ready when Nic is for them to resume their "new " normal activities? Besides kissing , Jake liked holding Nic's cock. It is thin and smaller than his. It is perfect for Jake to suck and even take in his ass when they are ready. Will Nic at some point accept Jake as a hidden friend with benefits who could help him out when he needed a sexual release ? How will Nic use a willing, eager Jake in the future ? Will Nic help Jake suck him off and even rim him before fucking him? Blow jobs can be given with less preparation, quicker and in more places. Will Nic introduce any kinks--like wiping up his cum with his briefs from as session and give them to Jake for his jack off sessions? Will Nic want to fuck Jake? Will Jake agree? Will Jake start taking condoms and lube with him ? Now that Jake knows he likes some gay sex, will he start looking up gay porn and read gay online erotica to get ideas about what gay guys do? Will Nic be willing to have sex with Jake at his home in his bedroom? Will their sexual activities calm them and help address their problems? When will they have honest discussions ?

I hope not, it is huge and a money loser. It is more of a ego trip property for a rich owner. Originally it was given to the US by a heiress as a southern home for a president. It was too expensive for the US government to operate on an incidental basis, so it was sold off. When Trump bought it, he opened it to Jewish people and no other large country/goff club in the area was open to them at the time. Maybe it will appeal to Jeff Bezos.

Yes, now we know more and there is more to learn. Kat said at the end....'It was brazen, and the fact that he returned to the scene of the crime with no hesitation made her worry. She knew that this wasn’t just an accident gone bad, this was something far more sinister." We have some new angles--another prostitute to ask and any info from the car and people around the parents to investigate plus who benefits if David is out of his business. It was personal. More than one person was likely involved. Someone had to be watching to notify the driver when they left the dinner party. Could anyone at the party be involved? Likely someone had to pick up the driver when the car was torched. Someone had to know about the site that was used to leave the car. Either prostitute should know the person and could be threatened if they tell the police. The interplay among the two detectives is compelling. I hope Kat finds a healthy balance.

Finally, they are going to meet up. It took longer than I expected and Nic was in control essentially all the way through The location of a used, old classroom surprises me and Jake. Nic said he does not go to a new place with a new guys. So this classroom was used by Nic before, but it is not a comfortable place to have sex in. They did not let anything stop them from playing. Nic got into it right away and got naked and turned Jake on. He found out Jalke really liked his body and kissing and fucking him and stroking his cock. They learned more about each other: Nic did not like kissing as much as Jake and loved being fucked and did not want to be touched about his waist ( a carryover from his rape?) Jake loved fucking Nic, giving him a handjob and being praised for his sexual skills or large cock. I am surprised Nic had Jake sit in a chair and then sit on his cock so Jake could fuck him and both guys could control the action. They could also kiss this way and see each other's faces and eyes. Jake saw Nic being fucked bending over so this is another one of his fav positions. Now that Jake is not a new guy, maybe Bic will go to Jake's home and bedroom next time. Nic spoke at the end as this was a one-time thing. He did not still realize that Jake is fixed on him.He acted as if both just got their rocks off with no emotional connection. I don't think Nic is ready for one yet. "....he walked out, leaving Jake alone, half-dressed, and feeling strangely used. Despite that, however, Jake was absolutely certain that this would not be the last time. _ Jake said he had the best orgasm of his life. I am here for sex and lots more--You created a fun, interesting and thoughtful chapter that let the guys be themselves with their limitations. Things are not worked out completely. It's not a fairy tale. As I re-read this chapter, I think you well exceeded my revised expectations. It was much more than seriously erotic. It was character building. I think these guys are going to be becoming more connected . If they can help each other grow and resolve some problems is not discernable at this time to me.

What a pleasant surprise that suggests a possibility of a longer- term relationship. This felt realistic and fun ! The pizza date was path breaking showing Jonathan that Maddox really wanted to date him not just use him as a sex toy. I wonder what the ripples in the water of public news that Connor finding them eat will be? Maddox has Connor's number and Jonathan doesn't yet see him as a user. Maddox was restrained and respectful and still tested and teased Jonathan. Jonathan was taken aback by how open , demonstrative, and possessive Maddox was . He had hoped Maddox would back out--no luck--and still thinks Maddox will tire of him like Drew did. Maddox wants to learn more about and experience all of gay sex possibilities with Jonathan. Jonathan is so turned on by Maddox and can't yet admit it. He thinks everything will end in 30 days. Maddox sees them together much longer. The blow jobs were great and nicely described as they both showed what they are made of. Jonathan said he was not ready for anal. He is a virgin. Maddox wonderfully gave the first bj and did good job. Jonathan returned the favor and captivated Maddox. He was stunned. Jonathan had only blown Drew and Maddox was a more considerate and interesting sexual partner and surprised Jonathan. Maddox in turn was surprised Jonatthan had blown only one guy then left it alone when Jonathan would not talk about the guy. They both had great sexual orgasm created by the other guy. They are going to want lots more and do lots more. Jonathan now seems them going together for the gull f0 days but be careful and not out in public--Good Luck with that pretense. They still need to talk about their sexual expectations and try new things. Jonathan needs to move beyond his Drew limitations and honestly discuss his past with Maddox. It is good to know Maddox knows lots of places on campus and around it for intimate arrangements-mmmmm. BTW--any chance Jonathan will make love to Maddox first? He likes his ass played with....