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Why does he keep looking familiar to Roy? Similarities with someone he knows? Does Zafiro looks like Avery?
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Thank you for this story. I know you changed the end a bit, but this sounds less fluff, more real, and I really like it. Good they had some family members with them. I almost wish you had given us a description of what was happening, cause I wanted to see if in the end nieces on both sides were good flower girls 😃
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He is in love with Nate... Or is it Kyle?😊
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Making Progress Is Overrated
Sweetlion commented on Jason MH's story chapter in Making Progress Is Overrated
I don't know... I am starting to feel that Greg and Kyle will not be together, although I thought that some chapters ago. Not sure Greg is ready, or will ever be ready for that. Unless @Jason MH through us another curve ball. I still think though that it would be a very interesting turn of events, maybe when Kyle is a bit older. It would definitely shatter the glass and show the difference between Greg and Kyle, between conscient choices and deception and abuse. -
it felt short... I really wanted to know whats up with Brandon... I can't believe he would cheat on Billy after what then went through, but I feel he has some problem. Did his dad find out? Or he is just nervous for not been able to go as Billy date, is he fearing disappointing Billy?
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Thanks @Myr for the suggestion 😀
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Chapter 116 Reading Between the Lines
Sweetlion commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 116 Reading Between the Lines
Wasn't there semen and body marks I'm Robbie? Even the nurse/doctor saw. He should tell Nicola -
Great chapter. To be honest a full acceptance from Noah's Mom feels forced to me. Her personality shows that she is super dominant and used to always have her way, so I don't think acceptance of Noah and Jordan will be realistic. I imagine because of the other siblings and grand kids, that they will reach a balance where there are civil and polite to each other, when they get Noah and Jordan get together with the family for birthdays and whatnot, but not more. I cannot imagine Noah and Jordan staying in Noah's parents house or having a warm relationship with her mother without other people around. It's a harder reality, but then, it's life.
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Chapter 116 Reading Between the Lines
Sweetlion commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 116 Reading Between the Lines
Nathan might have a lot of defects, but he is true when he says Robbie is a drama queen. His stupidity is getting old, why don't he repost Alex for sexual assault/rape? It is not safe for him to be in that house. -
Hi all gamers. I recently got an xbox 360 from a friend that was moving back to Europe. I was more of a PC player, rpgs and strategy, but got all Dragon Age for my birthday. As I finished these ones now, I am looking for suggestions of a game to buy. I am not a heavy gamer (don't play everyday) so will probably just buy one or two. Anything good? I was thinking of looking to The Elder Scrolls V: Skyrim Legendary Edition, but I want opinions or other suggestions. IF there is a good one for xbox 360, a final fantasy is also an option. I am more of fantasy guy (I am always a mage), but also liked KOTOR and Starcraft games back when I played on the PC. What should buy? 😀
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Great chapter! Is the meeting just the council, or other people attend? After Rick I can't imagine the Council giving too much trouble to Rory and Milan, The older ones know better than to challenge Sanctuary and the proven Alpha. But like Annie, the younger ones might not be so nice to Milan, and although Rory would probably feel like he has to protect him, Milan is not a pushover, and I can see him bitch-slapping (with words 😄) some annoying people, and gaining his rightful place beside Rory.
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Chapter 15- The Astral Princess's Blessing
Sweetlion commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 15- The Astral Princess's Blessing
Hi @Thirdly, nice story, although I didn't remember some of the gallant's names and colors. Do you guys have your images here as well? Or we have to search the internet? -
Hope Noah's siblings receive Jordan well. It was a great chapter
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Welcome all. I'm sure you will like the site, it's an amazing community.
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Hi, is the story related to the star crossed series, or a stand alone?
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Sometimes, other things are more important than food Hope that by being able to completely read him, the insecurities Diarmad felt were broken.
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I guess the fears are very similar, regardless of the family one grew up. Julie is so nice and cute.
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I knew he was sick but I don't even remember what he had. He was always open about it, but could make you forget it by how nice, with a touch of mischief, he acted with everyone. I'm so sorry Jamie @jcl1990
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Ok maybe Noah got his heart broken and they don't have a second chance right now, but hope he still tells Jordan the truth. Like Jenn said, he owes it to Jordan, and the amount of bad decisions he makes is becoming tiresome, even for his strongest friend.
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From Failed Anger to Failed Relationship
Sweetlion commented on Jason MH's story chapter in From Failed Anger to Failed Relationship
Great chapter. I like that Kyle finally put Greg in is place, I mean as teenager he is much younger, but he is not a kid nor dumb, he could sense a feel Greg flipping attitude towards him. Now at least they were forced to acknowledge that Greg has a problem that he is projecting on Kyle, and that they will have to eventually talk about it if they are to remain friends. -
Why should he hide when he is angry in is own house? They might all be wonderful people, Chris, Eric (I don't think so), and Ren, but not for Jonah. And it's not only being bossy, Ren's behavior, the flower and secret note, and the tattoo for a "boyfriend" that isn't, is only one point below Hitchcock creepy. Even if they would be a perfect match n another life, Jonah should really stay away.
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Ch-ch-changes (and Epilogue)
Sweetlion commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Ch-ch-changes (and Epilogue)
Thanks for this story. I enjoyed Nick journey into finding a family and his worth. I know almost everyone will disagree with me, but the only thing I didn't like was the end, that Nick and Noah are together, I feel they should have stayed brothers. -
i think Jenn did right. She let Noah know that Jordan was really hurt but is starting to move on. She was even careful but tell him to go fight for him, but only if he was sure of what he wanted. If he is not dumb he should read between the lines, and understand there there ins no "Noah time" anymore, he cannot take whatever time he wants to figure himself out. They are adults, it's not high school anymore. Jordan will be definitely shaken, but I don't think he will come undone, it wouldn't make sense. I am more worried he feels bad for not liking the guy very much.
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Good story, it creates contradictory feeling, much like the sea itself. I am happy for each of the characters, but feel a sadness, or general melancholy with the merman. The half told story of the dreams, the lost city and its extinguishing sea people, made me sad that the king's heir didn't reclaim his throne. What will happen when they get old, and the sea keeps calling? Will they only see it in their dreams? If the seaman can transform into a landsman, is there anything in Atlantis that allow a human to transform into a merman? Hope Krilla and Alek find a way to get old together, and don't have only a summertime happiness.
