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Hi @Cia, are you done with this characters, or are you still going to use anthologies for their story. It was a very fun read btw, hope you continue, it would be great to see the fruits of their effort.
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Hey, hi everyone
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What happened?
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Going with @Thorn Wilde as well.
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From their conversation the last couple of chapters, Grimfaeth must know exactly what Naxthul choice is, that he will be the new avatar.
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Another strange thing... Why did the Gor start marching? Lord Hount seems to believe that they will support him, but they might join Maxthane alliance independently. Did they kept an eye on humans and in the demons, like the Elrok seem to have? Who guides them, an old prophet, or a new character? It's interesting that there isn't a new Chosen from the Gor yet.
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The teachings and reflections from the Chosen in the beginning of the chapters look like epistles or religious text... Will they start to appear to the people of the world, as stories tell previous Chosen did? Or will Grim? Hopefully they will appear to our heros one more time, so that this time memory of the Trial can be better preserved.
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Sorry, I know some people will think I'm terrible, but I feel absolutely nothing about Mickey... Glad he is alive, but that's it. Mark is an idiot to jump back to a relationship, Mickey needs to grow a personality, and so ethic values by the way, before dating another person. (It's not even about the cheating and fucking other guy)
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Chapter 6: A Talk Wth HR
Sweetlion commented on GabrielCaldwell's story chapter in Chapter 6: A Talk Wth HR
Well I admit that the behavior is strange, one could think Jonah was playing Brian. The think that until now makes me think that might not be the case was that he was very uncomfortable in the end, and not trying to distract Brian with sex. I wonder what happened in Jonah's life that he seems to lack some organization/adult skills... Where is his family? Is he an orphan, or was thrown out by his family? -
Congrats for the 100 chapters. Is there really another traitor, or it's something different? Can't wait to find out.
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Hey, I admire the way you are challenging yourself, and always trying to improve, so I hope I was not misunderstood. Personally I am not a huge fan of super short chapters at all, although I understand the criticism to very long ones (not that i mind, most of the times. I have less of problem with it in more "adventure-like" stories or vignettes, like some of Cia and Mann stories (although even then I fell that 1.5 to 2X of characters would probably be best). Particularly this chapter when i read it felt a little compressed, with all that was going on. But it's just my opinion, I just said something because I thought you would like to get different feedbacks. 😊
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To be honest I don't like the chapter length for this type of story, it is too short and it feels like something is missing. But it was a good one Carlos.
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A Surprise in the Bedroom
Sweetlion commented on JujuTheDruid's story chapter in A Surprise in the Bedroom
Well, that was strange. So Rayo hated the Gods and even killed Taisla, but not Morgoren? What does he still needs from him? -
I really dislike Andrew's attitude. Hope Aubrey doesn't act too bitchy, but is mature and sophisticated, so that Andrew sees how "real people" are supposed to be. Plus I kind of hope someone fucks him (doesn't have to be Aubrey) he needs a humbling experience a out what bottom and top means.
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Sorry, I'm happy you caved to the pressure, love the series. 😛
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Thanks again Mark for another chapter. I wonder if they were lucky enough for some of the bombs to hit the Russian ships?
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damn, only saw this post now
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Hehehe! Yep! That's pretty much all I do...
Sweetlion replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
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What's Rhidian age, he is Drew's nephew... Rhidian for Jay? 😉
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Great emotional chapter. Did Kyle stayed at the funeral when Wade left? Is the "simple" uncle less rough in the end?
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classic author excerpt January Classic Author Excerpt: The Falcon Banner by Topher_Lydon
Sweetlion commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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I'm probably late for this party, but like others I followed some authors here (funny thing I don't read them anymore, some left, some post rarely), lurked for a while reading stories without logging in, then decided to make an account so I could comment and talk to an author.
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Oh no! I hope one of them talks to Daniel directly to tell him they want him, before he does something stupid. If he asks to go with the grandparents, them even the best judge would agree. Hope someone prevents him from ruining his life.
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ah, Is that how the book of Ghayle was written?
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Great ending! Thanks
