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  1. Sweetlion

    Flying

    Wow, that's a stressful start off vacations, but I guess being stuck in their work life's they haven't had any practice... That a picture Marc would love receiving That was cool and I am happy they are getting back together on a physical level, it's important for partners.of course Teddy being the rational doctor he was even careful on the sex, wanted to be the one doing all the work, but also without getting to hard on Ryder, so I guess power bottom was a good choice but for the way Ryder complained when they were starting, they are probably trying out other ways in this vacation, maybe they can make a game out of it, kind of physical therapy "try all the possible combinations"
  2. Sweetlion

    A Day's Exploring

    Yeah, even if he still doesn't feel comfortable with it, it will do Eric good to interact with the guys as a couple.
  3. Sweetlion

    Chapter 17

    Wow, I wonder were the exit is! Strange that being so old Grim didn't know anything to use against the golem or control it, there must be a way, unless they just went rampant without their original owner/maker.
  4. You got it 
  5. This was a hard chapter. We could feel their pain, and poor Liz, she was such a nice and bright person. I wonder what did she ask of them, specially that would affect both families. They are already going to marry, and she didn't have any baby for them to raise, or something... Unless she asked for them to marry on Australia on the vineyard, so that she could be "part" of it... Damn, do many questions. I thought you didn't do cliffhangers Thank you Carlos
  6. This was an amazing chapter. Oli is learning that you are still valuable, actually you are better, if you are in touch with your feelings, if you own them instead of letting them drown you. And Teddy issue getting the required wake up call to his behavior about work, how he "robotomized" it. He was always driven and an achiever, but after Ryder he made "keeping in constant movement" a way of life. He is realizing that those he love need him, he has to be present, as a brother, and specially as a partner. Ryder doesn't lose his mischief streak, but it was funny being afraid of Oliver... Hey, if he can sing a play for 40 minutes already, he can probably survive a mild nookie with Teddy, it's only like 13years late
  7. Sweetlion

    Chapter 22

    Yey, Carl arrived! Hope the boys have a bit of time together, it's use not right being married and have to be apart almost immediately Hope some of the other members of the Order, like Elsa or the Nandras recognize Jared and stop the attack. With Carl there maybe Alex can be controlled and not kill Jared. Together with a dress down to Marion from the "big sister Almanita", maybe they can finally convince her to leave the past behind and join the peace faction, some Ironian soldiers would be nice.
  8. Sweetlion

    Chapter 16

    Btw, apologies for my autocorrect that keeps changing Kirra to Korea
  9. Sweetlion

    Chapter 23

    Hope they get urges, but not that
  10. Sweetlion

    Chapter XIX

    I am afraid of what reaction Chris will have... Ok Greg might be pathological, but but what exactly was the problem with Mr Montgomery? And why did he involved Chris? Still, his explanation doesn't excuse Greg, when he didn't get what he wanted, he resorted to threats, violence, and intimidation from a position of power.
  11. Sweetlion

    Chapter 23

    Finally, good that Kohen took a risk and initiated a physical connection, slowly he is recovering.
  12. Sweetlion

    Chapter 16

    Sam is so funny. Of course I feel a little for him as well, he is "out there" flirting but probably still feels alone, maybe more than Jackson who has such close best friends.
  13. Sweetlion

    Christmas Day!

    Yup, the fire is ready to burn! With what Teddy and Ryder have on Nate hope they sue his ass out! Nice presents, good vacation time with the family, and them chose a good old fashioned revenge, better than anxiety. with his blood pumping he might even be able to start handling the sexual part of their relationship
  14. Sweetlion

    Chapter 16

    I wonder if there was some kind of exercise excuse to rob Korea of his inheritance, I also guessed that the Inquisitor is the friend responsible for him. I found Korea and Styx interaction a bit too rushed. The powerful characters become more and more interesting, it seems that although still part of the "regime", Veil is perfectly conscious of what became of it.
  15. Sweetlion

    Chapter XVII

    I see that from the way the story is going, even if I would prefer something in between. And Chris only admitted that he liked control and a a little rough in the bedroom when he met Mr Montgomery, it didn't have necessarily to mean that he wanted his whole life planned and controlled, he was still also described and defiant and confident back then. And that was before his life experiences as a prostitute, he could have change some of his views (an interesting detail about control of his life is his knowing exactly the number of times he had unsafe sex). But from the looks of it, I guess we likes to domination.
  16. Sweetlion

    Chapter XVII

    I understand the feeling of feeling better and safer with Greg controlling behavior, since he is completely alone, but now that he was some security, I wish Chris would get some grip on his life, try to make some friends, instead of accepting being bossed around. With no old man, he can go out, find activities to do... The letter is elusive at best, although I believe Mr Montgomery Sr is trying to get them together. But I am curious about the wrong doings now.
  17. Sweetlion

    Chapter XVI

    I agree with @Geemeedee, civil is good, submission candy easy forgiveness is not. I really dislike Greg domineering, controlling personality. Specially when it's rich and powerful people controlling those who had harder lifes, and are in a more fragile position. Chris addressed the issue of have been a prostitute and his working relationship with Greg father, but the threats to his future life cannot be ignored. He even wants to control Chris movements. He might be doing the house things, but Chris is not his employee anymore.
  18. Sweetlion

    Chapter XIII

    Why doesn't Chris puts all in the open with the other brothers? What Greg did was borderline crime. Violence, intimidation, sexual aggression... Poison would be an appropriate cocktail to serve Greg, if it was not dangerous for Chris.
  19. Sweetlion

    Chapter XI

    Ok, I hate Greg now! I really despise dominant, violent bullies.
  20. Sweetlion

    Chapter X

    Damn! Why did Chris accepted that? He has savings now, the old Mr Montgomery helped him get back his pride, hope he does quit to became a boy toy again. He should just go a tell his brothers, if the don't like it they can get themselves sorted, the old man knew. And Greg jerk behavior can't go unpunished.
  21. Sweetlion

    Chapter IX

    Does Greg hate Chris because he knows he reminded his father of their older brother, the one he had a strained relationship? Or is he sexually attracted to Chris and angry about it, maybe thinking it's beneath him, and so takes out on Chris? Good thing so see Chris growing and standing for himself.
  22. Sweetlion

    Chapter VIII

    Sure, and welcome back btw, I am also following your other story (actually had forgot that I was following, you took your time ). I don't have problems with what two adults in equal foot do, is the remaining that I am not a fan, but we can have that talk in other place. I will keep following Chris story, I am curious to Greg special animosity towards him, even if he is not a nice guy in general.
  23. Sweetlion

    Chapter VIII

    I was not sure if I should read this story, as I am not a fan of fetish and BDSM tags normally, but since I like your previous stories I gave it a try. And quickly fell into my addiction, binge reading, so this is the first chapter I comment. We still don't know what happened in Chris life before the Rob, Randy and prostitution part, why he seems defiant and naive at the same time. But I really liked be standing up for himself against Jr, hope he maintains this new attitude and self worth. He was professional and polite, and the guy was an asshole.
  24. Oh, for a moment I thought you had come back to this story. I missed the guys. It is still a very nice short.
  25. Ok I admit that I didn't like the way the vacation discussion went. I thing Ryder was too soft, I was not expecting a tantrum, he is better now, but a bit more adult fight. I live Teddy, but he needed a reality check, lack of time off and quality time is a major reason for relationships to go wrong. Thank God Blake showed him he was been a ass (ok I guess he is still learning too, he used work to escape from reality for too long). Nice, a baby! I join the others asking for name, and sex! And Liz knowing that Oliver has a boyfriend that was Teddy for sure, they are almost an extension of each other, after Liz help keeping Teddy together those years ago, Teddy probably don't keep a secret from her for long. Reporters, damn they are annoying. Ryder, with Oliver's help, should make a new Instagram movie. If people new that he was there in pj due to helping an unidentified friend labor, instead of having a problem himself, some journalist would probably be very embarrassed. A a healthy functioning Ryder would be a great publicity too.
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