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I was not sure if I should read this story, as I am not a fan of fetish and BDSM tags normally, but since I like your previous stories I gave it a try. And quickly fell into my addiction, binge reading, so this is the first chapter I comment. We still don't know what happened in Chris life before the Rob, Randy and prostitution part, why he seems defiant and naive at the same time. But I really liked be standing up for himself against Jr, hope he maintains this new attitude and self worth. He was professional and polite, and the guy was an asshole.
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Tales of the Guardian Force: The Gift
Sweetlion commented on Brayon's story chapter in Tales of the Guardian Force: The Gift
Oh, for a moment I thought you had come back to this story. I missed the guys. It is still a very nice short. -
Ok I admit that I didn't like the way the vacation discussion went. I thing Ryder was too soft, I was not expecting a tantrum, he is better now, but a bit more adult fight. I live Teddy, but he needed a reality check, lack of time off and quality time is a major reason for relationships to go wrong. Thank God Blake showed him he was been a ass (ok I guess he is still learning too, he used work to escape from reality for too long). Nice, a baby! I join the others asking for name, and sex! And Liz knowing that Oliver has a boyfriend that was Teddy for sure, they are almost an extension of each other, after Liz help keeping Teddy together those years ago, Teddy probably don't keep a secret from her for long. Reporters, damn they are annoying. Ryder, with Oliver's help, should make a new Instagram movie. If people new that he was there in pj due to helping an unidentified friend labor, instead of having a problem himself, some journalist would probably be very embarrassed. A a healthy functioning Ryder would be a great publicity too.
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Good job Daniel!
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So that is the problem? I understand being afraid of getting hurt, but the risk is no different than a gay man stop loving his boyfriend and falling for another man. And Jimmy still identifies himself as gay. Why did he dated women we still don't know, maybe he is just a Kinsey 5, not a 6. Is Drake afraid of the sexual part, that Jimmy would want sex with a woman? So many questions into their past. Nice chapter
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Finally! What an idiot just hurting himself. But it work in the end. Now they just need little Nathaniel Congrats
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They are so nice together. It is true that Oli is only 13/14 (Teddy and Ryder were 17/18 when they started dating) so younger teenager doubts and moods are to be expected. And Ryder was very levelheaded, it show a again that he his is best when he is not closed in himself and his dealing with other people's problems.
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Why kill Ysabel now? Someone in the order is not thinking this... Sure, before the wars I would understand, but now, they need all the generals they can get. They already have Do Coteau traitors in Jezebel and her father (hope the order finds about him). I feel bad for Luca, he is a great guy, I hope he get past his block about sex, and even if he doesn't love Adrian yet, hope he experience something good with him, he needs see that it can be good, and Adrian seems a sweet guy that would be great for him.
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So cute! I know everyone is different, but hope Mark is a stabilizing influence as Teddy and Ryder are to each other. With all the banter between them, I think Oliver actually likes some of Teddy's preppy stuff
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Damn, what an end... Really curious about the talk now.
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How is Grim imortal is an interesting question, and whatever mark he has, gave in the most respect from the Elroks. I also think that Dogo is Styx's father. But Madame Godani... She is doing way more than help Styx escape... Is she his real mother, maybe disguising it as an orphan so he wouldn't be hurt to affect her? And maybe it is my soft spot for mages, but I really like Max, despite everything, he has a good heart, and something tells me that he might be quiete powerful if he has to. So I guess I am on the team "Stane"
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Over The Rainbow • Part VII
Sweetlion commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Over The Rainbow • Part VII
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Great, Kirra and Styx chapter! And we learned the shadow monster weakness... Did Kirra heard Prism thoughts? I imagine he would know Fasha's weakness. Can I say I am a little sad with potential sparks between Styx and Kirra, I think I am on Max's team, he will need all the strength and hope he can get if he will ever challenge his father.
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Kohen might just be primary target, we know we was special to the consortium, at least was the one they had longer. Kohen needs a caring touch form the Captain, to show him he is good, not dangerous
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Break Ups and First Dates
Sweetlion commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Break Ups and First Dates
Great chapter with Oliver POV. That school doesn't have the best educators for sure, although if the mother is going to complain, which she should, Oli shouldn't bee with her this time. I might not think that the teacher dealt with the situation correctly, but he did break a rule, not for the first time. While it was heartbreaking to see him crumble, it was also great to see the beginning of the rebuild, musically and personally. He is going to play just because he loves too, his relationship with the "big brothers" is closer, and he seems to have decided to enjoy his time with Marc without worry about labels. So curious about the double date, but they should have a date too, just two friends going to eat or something, it is not weird, and the time alone will be good for talking. -
Damn Gary, great chapter but you are killing me with the suspense. I wonder if Jimmy is a guy at all, that would be a deal breaker for a gay man
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Poor Jackson, he was denying everything that was wrong so far. And damn Carter! I guess you have to accept yourself before being able to be with other people. The positive thing was Jackson reaction, he stood up for himself.
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Battle of the Brothers
Sweetlion commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Battle of the Brothers
Great chapter, it interesting to see that Ryder became less depressed or anxious when he stopped thinking about himself and started helping the people around him that he loves. It was even good for him. While Teddy might be a bit hard on Oliver sometimes, I agree that Oliver has to be called out in his BS, 13 year olds do not command their lives and those around them. But in the end he did ok, still opened up to Ryder and included Teddy and Ryder in the people he wants to talk about feelings. While I am normally suspicious of stories where in a family everyone is same-sex attracted, as sometimes it feels forced, I found very endearing the way Oliver is questioning and discovering his bisexuality, and after finding that Marc is also crushing on him, I am hoping he leans to male PS: just found one detail strange, Ryder suggested that Teddy had a girlfriend in school, but wasn't he out very early? I I remember the previous book with 14 was that bad episode where he had Mike and Blake bully the kid he fake dated. -
Nice moments but the talk was not enough. Eric needs to be more open to what he his feeling, to his fears, otherwise he might just ruin what they have.
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Damn, I missed this story so much. I am concerned with Marion plan, hope she hears from Alex female allies, and doesn't go with it.
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Wow I was missing these guys. It is cool to see them interacting again. I am still curious if there was a special reason for Mike's change or if we just grew up. Oli was cute, I his stubborn "I am nothing like Teddy" way.
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Over The Rainbow • Part VI
Sweetlion commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Over The Rainbow • Part VI
Thanks Carlos. And no, of course not, I am against violence... But since I am on team Owen since CJ was 16... Do you have health insurance? -
That's exactly what I thought. Although after Nathan's reaction to Alex he probably has some secret too. Robbie loves Nathan but his connection to Tom is still there. A mix of older brother, best friend, first crush. Good thing that with his motherly behaviour Tom will keep things straight (pun intended)
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Loved this chapter, they are opening to each other and communicating. Andy is being mindful of what he says and Eric is being more open to talk. He even made a joke about Andy and Adam, it was great. And with help his life can be a bit better, even without spending more money.
