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Interesting story, with very mature decisions. Great tale.
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Great story. Hope Blake found what he was looking for one day, without hurting any girl. Jason was a good guy, and maybe they would be wonderful together, but he knew it was not the right time an was honorable about it. Wish him a great future.
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Still curious about Carter and Beth fight, and why I thought it was strange that Jackson appeared. But still they went home and it was awesome. They are getting close and Carter opened up and talked a bit with Jackson. Pretty hot a action, even if one sided.
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Thank you Ace, for this unexpected chapter. It felt short (didn't count the words, but I don't think it actually is) because it was more straightforward. I am less angry with Ryder, he finally had an adult behavior and told Teddy about Nate and the drug. And in the end I hope it was good for him, cause he end up seeing Teddy as an adult, committed to try again, an showing him how important communication his. And Nate... See you later bitch
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I felt sad for Eric, and the way he is suffering. Ryan took care of him, even during his drunken problem (I worry he uses drinking to drown sadness). Ryan was great, just wish he could say the " I love you" when Eric is awake.
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Yes, it was a sweet ending. Congratulations You should write Michael story, I bet it is full of funny moments
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Yeah, Nate is the villain in this story, I'm curious with what will happen to him when people find out. Wish him a box full of bad things. But damn Ryder! Are you even trying? So your depression makes you not talk and interact for hours, and now you decide to make talk with a bastard and accepted a drugs from him? That doesn't feel like trying to me. Teddy does deserve much better than you, but it is you his heart wants. Not even 18, you have the mind of a 13 year old. It was time you start acting on your promises. Anyway, another glimpse on how Oliver and Teddy had a very different childhood. Still, Oliver continues to behave like a spoiled hurtful baby, he is purposely mean about his brother all the time, glad Teddy doesn't hear it.
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I go for Fasha to be the underking lover. Maxthane seem to have some better ideals, but I don't know if they would fit the Shade. He would probably give a good King if they win over the immortal one. Where will Styx go? One doesn't have a magic tattoo done to a child just to abandon them, there is more to Styx story, he might be someone important. Who is Grim? If he was alive when Prism was around, he lived as much as the immortal king... Who is he looking for? Styx?
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Andy is a good man, even if the first meeting went wrong. He can now see why it went badly, and what he should do better. Adam is an amazing partner, we completes Andy, and help him grow with what happened. Great chapter.
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True, specially in this case XD although I understand why doctors avoid it, the danger of too "personal" exist not only for the patient but for the doctor as well. I am not a doctor but I imagine that if you get too attached, with the amount of mental diseases and untreatable/incurable problems they see on the daily basis, it might be emotionally destructive, we would probably run out of doctors, and they would fill the psychic ward themselves.
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Loved it, the family discussion was really needed, and while Ryder is responsible for his own actions, it was very nice to see Teddy's mom recognize that he IS sick and was in great suffer, and that he deserves help. Still think that they could have talked and explained things better to Oliver, I agree with mom that that was not the moment, but Teddy should have gone talk to Oliver after. Great chapter!
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Now I have to provoke you... Weren't that real problems, for their age and emotional development? The meaning that at the time they gave to going to one of Teddy's games, or to one of Ryder's concert (even before Messiah) was real, it affected them, so the problems around that were also really important for them, at the time.
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A Very Special Boy (Part One)
Sweetlion commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in A Very Special Boy (Part One)
Yey they are living together! And getting married! And Jacob is already thinking about kids. These guys are amazing -
Over The Rainbow • Part II
Sweetlion commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Over The Rainbow • Part II
Ritchie is a good kid, even if a bit wild at times. Happy that they are n Australia again and that Ritchie could see new things, it is good for kids to travel and contact different cultures. Owen's parents had a great idea, some business knowledge would hurt, if law doesn't work out he can always manage a business; if he became an environment lawyer, so business knowledge might help fighting/working with big corporations. -
Veggies Are Good For You!
Sweetlion commented on ColumbusGuy's story chapter in Veggies Are Good For You!
They are so sweet together, learning and exploring, loved by each other. C words...Carrots... Candles...C*** Uncle Mikkel could have send "goodies" of different sizes, I am sure he could find a small one, like a carrot, to start with -
Oh, I liked Kuto, he was fair. Is he really dead? Can't the healer gladiator help him? Thinking about it, can't the healer cure the breathing poison?
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Kohen is confused, he doesn't relate the Captain's worry with personal attachment. They need to interact socially outside "official business"... Like a game or movie night
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that is a great hypothesis.
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No Teddy, it is not a bad thing as long as you keep your eyes wide open. The problems didn't magically heal themselves. As I expected Ryder will need to be with people. I am dying to know how the talk with the parents go. I don't see Harry agreeing very easily, almost expect Teddy and Ryder to move in with Blake and Liz.
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Interesting, Klaus is also starting to feel things he doesn't want to feel.
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Chapter 92 Showing Some Skin
Sweetlion commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 92 Showing Some Skin
Nice chapter, but does Robbie has to be that mouthy all the time? It almost look like he want to get hit by Alex, lol. Ok he and Nathan need to seriously talk, they both know Alex better than what the other expected. -
Yeah, I got Araziah could teleport to any place he had seen before. Now I am curious what's Theo special skill. I understand not all skills will be as powerful.
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Wow, absolutely love this chapter. They both developed and grew. Teddy became more in touch with what happened to him all these years and with his feelings; and Ryder might just find new strength after their talk. Yes making your life and recovery depend on other person is dangerous, he needs to want to fight for himself, but maybe the knowledge that being sick hurts Teddy will helping him find the strength, even without a relationship (so far). Anyway, will Ryder be ok to stay on his own in 2 weeks? I know that Oliver doesn't want it, but I feel that Teddy might end up moving anyway... Although Oliver might not mind if it is to help his hero.
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That was a great Christmas gift
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Dinner at Grandmother's House
Sweetlion commented on Brayon's story chapter in Dinner at Grandmother's House
Sweet ending
