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Sweetlion

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  1. Welcome, hope you enjoy the stories and the people, GA is awesome.
  2. Sweetlion

    Chapter 41

    uncle Joe is so funny. Very interesting chapter, it is nice to see to guys together, learning about each other.
  3. Damn, I was expecting the guilty subjects, but not the pure evil. Hope Peter survive his injuries.
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    Chapter 21

    Wow, that was a brilliant idea to kill someone. But why do they want to kill that guy specifically? What was he involved with?
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    Chapter 12

    Good, very nice view of what happened 800 years ago, so humans have very powerful magic if needed. But at what cost, doesn't seem that they are cooperating with other races now. Pity that Prism story didn't had the time to include Fasha, if they have an old story, it means that Fasha existed 800 years ago. He is a non-magic bound to a demon? So many interesting questions
  6. not Peter... Frances
  7. *Please don't kill Peter, please don't kill Peter*
  8. Loved the whole scene, just want more Really they work perfectly was partners, caring for each other instinctively. I'm even more curious now to what happened those couple of weeks when they dated.
  9. Yeah, good think maybe Max parents know. Peter is missing Jon and is decided to move on with his life. Hope he follows what he likes, if it's leaving the gallery so be it, but if he wants to be able art dealer, he should keep having only what he feels right.
  10. Very interesting chapter. Jon doesn't know what he wants Peter to feel.
  11. Is Jon confusion with life also sexual? Eve if it isn't, they just being friends will be good for both. It is true that neither Peter or Jon signed a contract with the gallery, they must fix it, or will end up working for free. I like how from a personal perspective of you characters, you introduce interesting social themes, from religion to environment and urbanism.
  12. I understand he want to spare the in-laws, but he should have told the police... Or at least Max parents, I imagine they might be able to control their children, even if by threatening going to the police themselves.
  13. While condemning his violent outburst, I feel for Peter, the destruction of his life are hitting him hard. He could have handled it better, like explaining what is and how you get AIDS, but Jon is already 24/5, he could have learned a bit more after he left his parents. However I am sorry for Jon, his body must hurt pretty bad, after 2 day of physical abuse. Hating Frances more and more. Congrats PS: forgot to say that for a moment I was worried with Peter and his choice of clothes and Frances comment. Yes it is a simple detail, but If I understood Max was the rebel and carefree, and Peter the more balanced one. Hope that by missing him, Peter doesn't start behaving like Max, wanting to be him, and in danger of losing himself.
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    Chapter 5 Jon

    Damn, I really wish Peter finds something about Frances and makes her lose everything. Serves her right, hateful bitch, for ruining everyone's life. So Jon will be around 24 now right? Peter, at 28, is not that older
  15. Damn, Max siblings did it, didn't they? They trashed and destroyed Peter's home... The Alconas are true friends, giving Peter the support he needs.
  16. Wow, Peter is very adaptable. They are crazy, but deliciously so. Intelligence and funny, so rare.
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    Chapter 35

    The funnier part for me was the fake phone call to the police, sums up all that happened. It is good to seem them growing a bit, on average a chapter a day, it passed more than one year since the story started, they might learn something from their mistakes. Nice way to relax a guy Brandon
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    Chapter 9

    It is show time Erik! You have to really decide what matters in your life.
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    Chapter 14

    The Is are great friends! Of course We like Carter and Jackson together, but as things are at this moment, Jackson is opening himself for major pain.
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    Chapter 11

    Wow, Kiera was gang raped by his own comrades, and noone did anything about it? I know Salidar is not an angel with his plan, but in every chapter I am starting to prefer the chaos and demon havoc to the current state of the government. I am normally very sensible to individual people dieing, but when it is faceless institutions not so much. And right know I am feeling like obliteration would be an appropriate fate to Everbright City government. Bunch of assholes.
  21. Nice chapter, I know it might take a while, chapterwise, but I'm super curious about the wedding
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    Flame And Frost

    Humm... Is Azariah the last of the Six House? Is egg being hidden away in a cave, with no dragons around...
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    Flame And Frost

    Wow poor Theo, I was expecting something strong and bad, but not his death right now. I am super curious about Torsten, does he just have to do something for this prophecy/Azariah's destiny, or does he have an unknown special power. The conclave seems arrogant and fanatic enough that I am not sure a dragonling, even if a powerful one, can bend them to his will, specially since in a previous chapter Azariah didn't seem to interested in the whole "Bring back the Crazy Spirit of Fire" thing. But what he did was monstrous, and I don't think Torste will willingly forgive him. Interesting question about the Fire Dragon houses... Is Six extinct, or are they the only Fire Dragons working against the Conclave?
  24. We will agree to disagree. My view, if you love someone and we're already in a relationship (at least living together), you don't try to talk nicely after you marry someone else, if you can't get the other part to listen carefully, you get them in a room and you shout that you are marrying due to blackmail, you say everything if you need too. If that doesn't get their attention to listen the explanations carefully, then it's their fault. Looking forward to this new story
  25. Why is Peter doing this? Who cares if Frances go poor, he is hurting himself.
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