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  1. *kicks Drake's ass*
  2. Sweetlion

    Chapter 22

    Just read the tears, the shorts, and now the blood of the Neko. I really like the story, I like how they love and depend on each other, and how Kayden is healing from a very broken boy, to a confident and curious young man. You probably abandoned the idea already, but I will join my voice to those saying that it would be wonderful to have a continuation on their lives. To be honest though, I don't think a plot with romantic problems, like someone trying to marry Damien, would be very good or credible. I think after after failing to trust Kaiden when the Roman problem happened, and again with jealousy, Damien is conscious that another break in trust would probably destroy his kitten and their relationship for good, even if Jaiden adores him. However it would still be interesting to see how they adapt to court life and how the rest of the court interacts with them. After this incident in the mines where Kaiden tried very hard to show that he is independent and capable, and with getting older, my suspicious is that he will not be frightened and submissive to strangers like when he was younger. It would be nice to see him grow from the Duke/King pet lover to his full blown partner and advisor, specially as Harrison would probably stay and not move with them to take care of the family estate. How the nobles, and the other nations (specially the one that wanted their mines) will react to probably the first Noble and Royal neko (wedding, wedding, wedding!!!!) will be quite amusing. Thanks @craftingmom for these stories
  3. Sweetlion

    Chapter 18

    Hot so see them together again. Carter is invthe right direction, but he can't just say to Jackson to stop thinking and live the moment, it is normal that Jackson has worries after what happened between them, he wants to be recognized and appreciated. Just hope they don't enter in that "Jock" contest to see who is "manlier and more jock" to be the "top", them should just give themselves to each other. Specifically Carter, after the shaken start he caused, he should give that amazing ass (I remember Jackson mentally commenting in the initial chapters) to Jackson.
  4. So am I right or not? Is it my city? I didn't say it so no to spoil it PS: I edited my comment to add more cues
  5. Sweetlion

    Chapter 19

    I am sad for Jake... He was hard on Klaus, who could have tried to understand Jake pain better, but he did kept his promise, Diaz is alive and not in prison. Was Klaus expecting this, is this his easy way to back off? Or is Jake still projecting his lack of self confidence in other people, and expects everyone to betray him and be an asshole in the end?
  6. This was a very cute story... The shoes were funny. I am sad that I only join GA a couple of years ago, I am discovering some great things from Classic Authors, but I know some reduced their work due to being published elsewhere. Anyway, going to check your other short stories here
  7. I know they are all horny men, but they move fast, lol. I still feel bad about Andy, and specially Hunter, poor guy losing his lover so young. Hope Jaime parents still help him, and that he is not alone in the world.
  8. I know it had to be like this, so Vic would go back single, and I liked Hayden when he appeared, but I think I like Andy even more. It was sad that they didn't try to stay together, nowadays technology makes it easier to stay in contact, and that Andy didn't thought about changing med schools to Massachusetts, like Ian he would be a couple of hours away from Barnstacle.
  9. Yeah, I sympathize with Jeff loss, and I even agree that maybe he needs to be stricter with his kids if they don't help, but he is behaving poorly. Btw, is that my city? We do have a "T"... and road with 93... not route though... ah, and an Harbour... and Irish descend people...
  10. Sweetlion

    Family Man

    I know right, I will so need a rehab clinic when this story is done.
  11. Sweetlion

    Family Man

    Good to see that Teddy is on the mending. Again, we see how Oliver is maturing, even when fighting an idiot. He gave the bigot a very adult and witty dress down, some months ago he would probably just swear, but this way he showed who was in the wrong without any opportunity to being called rude or brat. Ryder really needs to find an accountant, or an assistant, he is very rich but admits his estate his a mess. Or Teddy can do it for him, even as a high schooler he was good in sorting things out, that way they don't need an assistant always around then. Just a very personal opinion, because I know people have very different ways to educate children. I agree that knowing he is a millionaire and having access to it could be damaging for a teen. However I believe that until the opposite is proven, learning how to deal with money and some financial responsibility his part of a teenager's growth. So I think they should be open with Oli, even if not telling him exact values, explain to him that what he is doing will make him considerably rich, but that as parents they will deal with it because they don't believe he should have access to it all. However, from his money I would think that he should have a pretty good allowance, he will not have a complete normal teen life, and should have the money to pay an amazing dinner or give a present to his boyfriend when they are together (their time will also be erratic with concerts and studio time), but not the money to buy an house.
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    First Impressions

    This chapter was great, but puzzling... It is true that the lightning strike type of attraction between Torsten and Sebby is strange, but until now he have no reason to suspect him, and after your defense of him in previous comments, I think he probably wouldn't risk entering in contact with the Water clan and if he was not to help them. Wish leaves us to the hypothesis of the attraction being a type of primal force, like the "mate bound" in some werecreatures stories. It can also be due to Sebby's nature itself, maybe entering in contact with a beautiful zephyr results in a sudden "new breath" in your life (corny idea, I know ). Developing magical new tools is very cool though, can't way to see what is next in store. Interesting the meeting between Triskeleth and Torsten. A human Seer? If dragons are the Spirits followers and servers, that would be something new. But wouldn't a human, even with foresight, be always in disadvantage against dragons? Unless when the power off the Spirit of Water Seer falls on him, he becames a dragon... That would be a true anomaly, becaming a dragon instead of being born one. (I love hypothesising, even if I am completely wrong ) Good job @Stellar
  13. Nathaniel... Or Maria?
  14. AHAHAHAHAH! Love Oliver in this chapter! He is behaving like a 14 year old teen with big heart. He learned, that's was the important thing, he learned to see what really matters. He had the older brothers (Teddy and Ryder) example. It doesn't matter how good you are, how much you love what you do, how great your achievements are, without people you love and that love you to share with. He is worried, and putted his brother first. Super hug to Oliver, and our dear writer @Aceinthehole
  15. Sweetlion

    Chapter 23

    I would say a demon in stasis is a better magic power cell than a dead one, the greedy bastard.
  16. Sweetlion

    Chapter 23

    And forgot to ask, where is Veil? We know she existed sometime, since she is/was Grim's sister... Neredos is a prick... If Ibrix wasn't so powerful, I would be wishing that Max release it again to rescue Grim... Hope he learns all the magic it that of book, not just the tattoo magic, someone, someday, needs to defeat Neredos
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    Chapter 23

    Wow, how can Neredos not see what's around him, that Tasha was disguised as Veil and is fighting Prism? Or has he betrayed everyone also?
  18. No, but as I was saying the other day to another author, of course you writers can change the plot whenever you want, but when attentive readers guess so parts it is actually not bad, it means you constructed a believable reality and characters. Anyway, even in that case we might know what will happen, but not how, and the journey is half of the pleasure
  19. I have said it before, developing a relationship with a teenager is very different than a young kid. What happened to both of them is not nice at all, but it is nice that they are opening to each other. They both seem great guys, Robert's mother might have done some wrong things, but she did raise him right. Actually, since he was an only child, he is probably her sole heir... So instead of fighting, just to spite the grand parents, Adam should go to a judge and conditionally agree to pay all child support to her estate, a make a trust fund for Robert. The grand parents would turn blue when they didn't see any money and had a lot of trouble fighting it since Adam was actually doing what they requested in court
  20. One question: from the main story I thought the different lycans had different origins, and that Colton had became a coyote because Ashton was also a coyote. But from this short it seems that he was a wolf. Was that a mistake?
  21. Thank you JP
  22. Hi, is this story separate from your previous one, or a continuation, with the same characters?
  23. So sad, that's why the job is so hard... Teddy, you will see more, unfortunately. Ryder and Oliver, Liz and Hayley, they show you what love and support looks like.
  24. Sweetlion

    Chapter 11

    Good thing they had so sort of better news. The policeman should lose his job but face charges. If the ADA is not motivated yet (sometimes they don't want to mess to much with the police department) she should think about the media news "Young ADA fight corruption in the police department"! Nice that Adam and Troy are having some intimate moments, but Adam should expect Troy to be more needy and sexually aggressive for while, after the shaken moment he had, he might want to be always close the the guy he loves.
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    Chapter 26

    Interesting, so many questions. And Kojen is doing much better dealing with what happened to him. And worried being detective Kohen. He should talk to Lakshou about his suspicions.
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