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TC2 - Chapter 4: Rob’s First Thursday in Tampa
Sweetlion commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 4: Rob’s First Thursday in Tampa
Great development, I think Adam is approaching is relationship with Rob as a young adult correctly. Rob did a great choice, public school is probably more diverse and open that the option of religious school. They will have to kick the Turner grandpa ass, but they should have the law on their side, specially the will, it's hard to fight it. The custody part might need their testimony (Rob was rejected and left in foster care), and also Tibot's. -
Either Veil change greatly since the Demon era, or she didn't change at all... Wasn't someone from this world that opened the portal that summoned the demons? And for Max or Grim to defeat her... How do Fedains kill each other? Of course there are weapons, but with there skills, does it depends on who has bigger life-energy pool?
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Thank God Casey survived... I am terrible, I don't remember Seb's story... I wonder if the important thing in the safe box wasn't the shoes, not the jewelry... Why were they there? Are they a clue to Loren's murder? Casey had that detective streak in him. And it is interesting that Waylon was so deep in the closet that he ruined a previous relationship, but his partner (the most important colleague since he has his back) knows he is gay. Will he ruin again what he might have with Bruno?
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Nice chapter... It is tiring keeping lies, but good to see Jackson meeting Carter's friends.
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This was a great, and very powerful story. Thank you
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Oh, I like the avatar... Korra a bit less, by Aang was awesome
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Hi, is this story abandoned/on hold? I have checking some of your stories, and wonder if I should start this one.
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You #@#*#$¢¥|{^¶$ That's not a cliff, that the edge of that abysm But it was greatly informative, something major had to happen to corrupt Veil against Neredos and her own brother. Does it has anything to do with how and why the hero Fedain, Oracle of Everbright City, has a son with the Shade Under King?
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No problem, I just really like lite and myths, so was paying attention to the different types of lycans. I have more questions about their origins, but I might ask in the main story.
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Wow, hope there is a sequel to starcutter, it was very cool. I am curious to see what Gabriel does with his ship. Choosing Ryle for supply master was funny, but in reality we should be commanding the jet pilots. Will Captain let Ryle keep the Canari Song (that was the name of the special jet, right?). Don't remember if the new ship has a name, but hope they have cool adventures in it, maybe Gabriel will do as his father an upgrade it with tech until it's one of the best in the Galaxy.
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Cool, new book. Glad the previous fights were solved, and that they are moving with the wedding plans. I just got confused, didn't they buy a house to live, why do they want to live in Rod's old apartment? Maybe I forgot details, do they need to do renovations first?
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Great, the three of them are together at last. What happened to Dogo, is he with some gladiators that haven't arrive to the Shade yet? Or something bad happened. As suspected Madame Godani is related to Styx, hope she will be a loyal mother-in-law (or the most loyal a Shade can be), as I suspected the King and the "Princes" will have to leave the Shade if they decide to go on a mission, I don't think they will want to be separated.
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This is a great story, I read it twice already.
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I had to read the previous chapter as well, didn't remembered the story details. I am curious about Bruno past with Sammy, I guess the guy was bad news, and the past is coming back to hunt him... Is he the killer? I am worried about Sammy getting to Corey, after the friendly PDAs.
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Nice chapter... I have dual feelings about the scars... For on hand I hope Declan realized what they are sooner and help Bailey with it, before he starts having doubts and pain again. On the other hand I agree that it can't be before Bailey truly believes that Declan cares about him and is ready to open up to him. The chapter had a short feeling though, maybe because it had been a while. Hope you get more inspiration
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Nice to see this story back... I sometimes don't like Travis aggressiveness, but even in his rude ways he was letting Ben know in the last chapter that he needs him near, and in this chapter he did learn that people around him can take care of him too. Mother, specially, was a surprise, always seems so soft, but had a clear head when needed... I wonder if she actually knows what Curtis has been putting Travis through (and if his wife knows, btw), she might still surprise us.
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Damn, a cliffhanger... Yeah, a GSA is a great idea.
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Hi, welcome to GA. You will find an awesome community, and amazing stories. There are cool foruns and chat places. I don't know if I can help, but even if not more, I can always hear you if you drop a msg. Best
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After what he has been through, Kohen is very good at compartmentalizing, he was very business-like with the Captain. So Trepharo are the ultimate spy and assassin, with its super disguising skill. Hope they can capture it before any other "accident" happens.
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Cool chapter, even if they all move pretty fast. Noah is a great brother, he understands when Nick needs help dealing with the pressure of changes.
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Damn, wrong Di Coteau girl to have problems Hope they can still win and that there is a way to save Talia... Jezebel on the other hand... something bad couldn't happens to a nicer person... Nice to see most of the allies together, they just need Ysabel Clarion's army now... however, if what they want is to conquer a majority of Nabius territories to control its policy, why did they target Davora's territory, which is surrounded by their enemies, instead of going to Lafeye or Orr's? Like this they have enemies on their backs, and Lafeye's would be particularly useful as it borders Alex's territories.
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Chapter 8 Battle Fatigue
Sweetlion commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 8 Battle Fatigue
I know he can, but it doesn't have to. And I was nice, it was normal shoes, not steel ones What's annoying in Drake is that he is full of preconceived ideas, and not only about sexually... Is thought on the dancing is at the same level as bigots thinking all gays are hair stylists or something... Really, the guy just likes to dance... I love to dance, and have done some pretty close dances with female friends, if it's with my sister it can almost be obscene in fact, gays guys are seen as non threatening dance partners sometimes, so you girl friends just have fun without worries. -
Wow, Prism did died, gaving Styx an impossible task... Will he free the demon again, to go for Grim? Or will the trio look for Ghayle to teach them? Maxthane, if he survived the Shade caos, might be able to kill the Vhor as well, but Prism didn't know that. If the trio is to succeed, they will need to leave the Shade, they need knowledge... So with the King absent, they need help to manage everything. But Kings can have governments, so I think it is time for the Shade to gain a Duchess as well (Madame Godani).
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Chapter 8 Battle Fatigue
Sweetlion commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 8 Battle Fatigue
I think Jimmy is losing some of his strength and might stop fighting soon... Hope Drake wakes up before that, they do care for each other, and Drake should give them both a real chance at happiness.
