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Ok I seem to be the only feeling this way but for me Klaus is still a despicable manipulator bastard. "Kevin Spacey and friends' " style. A chastity belt, really? Of course Jake is not a slave or a whore, it is his "choice", between to obey to the humiliating point of loosing control of his body or he can go back to his brother after Klaus f*cked his world on the first place and get rejection and probably a beating. My only comment to Jake would be that he is dealing with it um a childish way by denying it, which gives power to Klaus. He should use some of Klaus direct rudeness against him, like "yeah, I would f*ck you, but you are still a disgusting human being".
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Everyone disliked Hans, but up to now, he was the only one been real. Yes maybe direct, rude and jealous, but even is "boy toy" comment to Jake should have shed light to who Klaus is, if Jake wasn't so stuck on looks. I despise people like Klaus, he is a domineering bully, who seems to enjoy playing and breaking people, maybe even with a bit of violence considering Hans bruises comment. Hope Jake can control his mind and doesn't get hurt.
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Great story, congratulations
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And I’ll never have that recipe again
Sweetlion commented on Sam Wyer's story chapter in And I’ll never have that recipe again
I really dislike Jake right now... How could he, with is history, not understand how lies would destroy Kayden? I other stories I could see cheating been forgiven, but not Kayden, he is mentally fragile as it is. He is so broken, Jake deetroyed him. They would always have the distance problem to add to trust. I know some are trying to say that this was Kayden view, and it might not be as it seems, but we have the guilty look in Jake's face plus starting to cry instead of explaining right way to know that he betrayed Kayden. So sad, I really like them. -
Yay for bacon! And good people/alien. Bad things to Kemit... Hope his bacon was soft and soggy he seems to dislike anything spiritual... Just bigotry, bad past experience, ir a problem with Lakshou specifically?
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Cool! Small steps but forward. And ir end up being caused but both of them. Cody asking for time together just the two and then Trick admitting that it will be a date
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I know he is definitely Brazilian, they use both "Spanish" Thiago and "Portuguese" (current european) Tiago But if you end up choosing Portuguese, I can try and help you with "brazilian portuguese"
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Can't do anything with German, but let me know if you need help with Portuguese.
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It is true, Robbie is not very brave, at least so far, he is a master "delayer", lol. However I would think that he was learning some things, with the whole Fran/Alex trip, accident and fight with Don. I hope he grows a bit, otherwise I am afraid he can't keep Nathan, who in some aspects is more mature than him.
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Marcus learned what to do when you find a holy man... Kneel..
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Love Nathan, he is so cute. Just hope Robbie doesn't drag the talk they need to have, it took so long for them to arrive where they are now, that I would really hate to see it destroyed.
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it is over... Joking, I loved this story So interesting and special characters, Daniel struggle to was enlightening, make us think how people with mental or development disabilities are not kids, and how hard it is for them to find a place in society as adults. Thank you Just one curiosity, how old were they now, when the baby was born?
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Chapter 11 Final Chapter- Anchored
Sweetlion commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 11 Final Chapter- Anchored
I might have commented this chapter already, but I feel like I owe so many comments. I got a comment notifiication today about this story and end up binge reading this story for the second time. I know you feel that you evolved as a writer since this, and I am sure you are better, but, and I say this in a good way, I don't know if I can see the difference, because this was already a delight to read. Really like how their weak and strong points complement each other. Love Jared compassion and Craig analytic mind. They way they learn how to talk you each other is amazing, and a good insight on how to make a relationship work. Thank you Gary, for continue to give us your beautiful pieces -
And we love you for that. I definitely could not relate to corn (hell, it is everywhere in the US), but wine? Sure
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Interesting mix of politics, society and environment. Owen might not like te be in the spotlight, but he seems passionate about nature conservancy and environment protection
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You are the writer and the story is very cool, so whatever you decide will be good. The thing is, in my view, TJ has a father, the same as Robert. He is just dead. But he was the one that saw him growing, that was there for him when teenager aches started. And according to TJ their parents were great. TJ does need to feel loved and wanted, but I don't know if accepting Robert as father, instead of a much older and wiser brother, is what he needs. But that's just my view Great story @JayT
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Oh oh! I can hear phone calls right away, TJ for Robert, Sean for police, Kevin to his uncle. I hope the guys don't get hurt, they are still 4 against one after all. I can understand TJ, I thought about it on the previous chapter as well. It is true that he has to learn how to control his mouth but acepting Robert as his dad? If I was in is place, that was definitely not happening. I could probably get along well after a while a have a great much older brother, but das no. Specially since he is almost an adult, in some months he can make is on decisions. Robert shouldn't force it, he has to learn to make decisions including TJ as a brother. Better have a woderful relationship as brothers than end up hating you dad.
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Came back to this chapter before reading the next one. Josh is a sweetie, I like the new couple. I agree with the others, was afraid for Sean when they talked about head trauma.
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Thanks. I like when characters are believable and I can relate.
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they are cute together. Hope Trick start feeling more confident of himself, I am afraid that Cody will take things really slowly not to hurt him, so if he wants, he might be the one pushing for it
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Wow what an emotional day. Anna is still such an amazing person, lol. However here behaviour might actually be good for the guys, child abandonment might be a good reason to terminate her parental rights
