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  1. Great, such sweet story and loving characters. Yeah, it ended well and you could stop it right here, but I can't stop wishing you would tell us more about their lives. You did it again, loved it Gary.
  2. Sweetlion

    Chapter 1

    Wonderful that Kevin find Aaron again, they deserve to be happy. Interesting that Mark droped college in the 2 year, that was probably soon after Kevin left him. Maybe he liked Keviin in his twisted way, but couldn't do the right choice. Sad, but you have to live with your own choices.
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    The Story

    You show us perfectly the fear and anxiety of being gay when homophobia, specially in business, was stronger and HIV was devastating. How dementia afects the pacient and those around them. A very beautiful and sad story.
  4. Sweetlion

    Message Bringer

    Interesting story, dark and twisted, but very well written. Congratulations, and welcome to GA, hope to read more from you.
  5. Yeah, I as wrong about Sue, she is as bad as Don, almost worse since she is so fake. I wished Robbie stoped losing his opportunities to fight back, he should have told the family that he was with his boyfriend.
  6. Agree, he has to tell Nathan, the sooner the better, but I think he also needs to talk to Alex now, if he was changing maybe he will apologize to Nathan.
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    Chapter 11

    I didn't think bad of him, I just thought it was still open to interpretation, you didn't give away much. But I admit that the timeline was not obvious to me at some point, I don't know why but last chapter I had a feeling more days had passed between the talk/Kiss, and their date. If it was less than 24 hours, than Liam dad is completely right, there was no time. After all it is hard to talk and let you ex friend-with-benefits know that it will stop if you have your tongue down throat of your new boyfriend
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    Chapter 11

    Nice, I was hoping it was only and over reaction. Still think he should have told Tony that Mandy came by, and that he was unsure. Honesty first, and maybe Toby  would also spend the night showing him that he wants to date
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    Arrival

    Nice start.
  10. Sweetlion

    Chapter 9

    Yes, the details count and I did remember, if it was for Diaz, Jake would still be wearing the same clothes he had when he was "sold/given". And you see, I refrain from doing a nasty comment about Klaus this chapter
  11. Great ending
  12. Sweetlion

    Chapter 6*

    Oh Landon! He is more true with feelings now, but still can't control his explosions and rage. Not Nice outing Chandler, although it was probably good in the end. I am starting to like Hank. Still despising Helen, might be wonderful with the others, but on regard to Landon, she is aloof and seems to think that saying "he is my son" makes her a mother.
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    Chapter 5*

    Landon has some unsolved problems, and Chandler is still in a bad place, although they don't really trust each other, maybe interacting will be good for both. I still dislike Helen, her abandonment of her son was probably the cause for Landon troublesome behaviours (including sex with friend's mother, mommy issues). Hope Chandler stops insisting for a second chance, maybe they can reach a pacificação coexistence, but on Landon's place I don't think I would accept her as a mother.
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    Chapter 9

    Interesting chapter, curious about the dinner with older brother? Will Jake return to being shy and coy, the perfect younger brother? Or will he be defiant and confident, knowing that we can't count or depend on his brother (which give him away and didn't even come with his stuff, as promised)?
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    Chapter 45

    Probably not screw, but maybe be mischievous as they were at 14
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    Chapter 45

    Oh no, a lost relative? Nice to see them back, hope Lee and the new kids make friends with Katie, she might have been a bit annoying, but maybe she was nervous, it was their 1st day in high school after all, and noone deserve to be without friends
  17. Muitos Parabéns meu querido, beijo gigante
  18. Sweetlion

    Leagues Of Night

    Is their link so complete now that through Shay Mira learned how to fully function as a human? Cool So Earth still exists after all. Congratulations, great story, now on my way to book 2
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    Bitter Fortune

    Hi, I am binge reading your works since I found them when you start posting your most recent story. This is an amazing story so far, and it was a sad chapter to read. She was the only woman in their group, nice and and full of knowledge, She will be dearly missed. I wonder why, after 200 year, Lilly and Dimi didn't continue their families. By the way, I know it is probably and old file before all the site updates, but the map of aurum is not working. I could see the provinces map though.
  20. You know I answer to provocations (just kidding) There is a reason I highlighted the younger ones It is natural that with college, the older ones get separated and only each other on holidays. I like the story, wonderful work Carlos
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    Confidence

    Oh oh! Beginner in skates... Tim was cute though. Cool chapter
  22. Great chapter as usual! Since we start we the discussion on the story theme, I actually like the politically activity of the characters, fiction can also raise awareness to the world around us. Even if one doesn't have exactly the same position as the characters, I can understand CJ point of view, even if as an European living in the US I wouldn't smoke pot, defend gun ownership, and would support a better organized and social central government (you know, with a proper national healthcare system for instance). But it it still interesting hearing about their different views about society. If I had to make a critic, I agree that lately some personal interactions are reduced, and I don't mean just sexual activity (which is great when does have a propose, both the extremes of sexually repetitive or almost aseptic story are boring, in my opinion). I think particularly CJ and Owen relationship, as although CJ don't have to be super lovey dovey, sometimes I feel that a bit of romance would be nice, as Owen looks almost like an ornament or sidekick. it would also be interesting to know about the "growing up" of the younger ones still around in DC, specially Paddy, a young gay man that also has a strong faith. But I imagine that after the election you will have more time for that Hug
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    Chapter 22

    True, I feel that Bailey should have said the same thing to his mother. "Separate beds, okay?"
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    Chapter 10

    Thanks for another chapter. Oh Mandy is back... Maybe they are just friends, hope Tony didn't "forget" to tell her the benefits are off.
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    Chapter 7

    You are the writer so you get decide, but he is not super alone if the captain is a door from him, and he knows where the temple is... He is not used to as many people after all, hey might need time and space alone.
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