Ivor Slipper
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What a pleasant Sunday surprise to find the start of a new story in the Ravello series. A very intriguing opening part and surely having created the refugee characters, they must be destined to feature further in the story? Poor Dani. Just when he starts to think his relationship with Giacomo might develop further, along comes a girl to toss the proverbial spanner in the works.
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The tension is building!
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Another superb story of exploration and discovery. Not only of the land and its wild inhabitants, but also for the main characters.
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"And tell them I’ve been dreaming about a thirty year old murder? That’d go down well." That's where the body is supposed to be! 🙂 Another chapter in which the puzzles just got bigger!
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One of these days Maurice is going to let the cat out of the bag! At least we know it's not down the well...
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The plot soup is thickening nicely. And now with bones to add to the stock. 🦴🦴🙂
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Just one chapter? There appear to be a lot of loose ends still to tie up...
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An excellent mystery with an intriguing cast of characters. Like @drsawzall I'm hoping to see further stories from you at this site.
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I think Dan should name his phone a Nookia! 🙂 Like @drpaladin I can't wait for the seance.
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I think Sgt. Hicks needs to apply the Sherlock Holmes principle to the case, especially as it sort of took place in Baker Street. 🙂
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Poor Dylan! First his father and now his mother who apparently couldn't cope with the situation. The contrast of life in the Hick's home as opposed to his own must have come as a big, but pleasant, surprise. From now on though he'll have to use self raising flour!!
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'Only the Keys have keys' 😀 That neat one liner stood out for me in a well written chapter, as what is at stake increases.
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Was it Devil's cake or Angel cake that was stuffed in Keys' mouth?🙂 The finger of suspicion is certainly pointing in one direction right now.
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I'm sure the Chateau du Gateau would have been high on the list of establishments patronised by Marie Antoinette. 🎂🙂 Joking aside, this looks like it could lead to an interesting story.
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The spookiness increases!
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Summer in Ravello is definitely something to look forward to.
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Empathy, empathy, they've all got it.... Oh no, sorry, wrong story.😀
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Appears there is nothing negative about this relationship.🙂
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Part 2 The Freeze Up of Silence
Ivor Slipper commented on Georgie DHainaut's story chapter in Part 2 The Freeze Up of Silence
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Part 4 The Warm Winds from the South
Ivor Slipper commented on Georgie DHainaut's story chapter in Part 4 The Warm Winds from the South
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Turned out to be quite a (K)night!
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Part 3 In the dead of Winter
Ivor Slipper commented on Georgie DHainaut's story chapter in Part 3 In the dead of Winter
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Methinks you've been kissing the Blarney Stone! Mind you, if that story is the result, feel free to do it again...and again.🍀🍀
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Dunno about romance being just around the corner, unless he's going to fall for the handyman!! Instead we had a very spooky chapter. 👻
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Dan may turn out to be interested, but he isn't desperate...
