Ivor Slipper
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Damien with a sword!!!
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Gus has grown balls! James' are also now growing due to bruising.
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Don't you mean he's got his fookin hands full?
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The seed has been sown.
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'Unhappy' was not really the right word. I guess the idea of them riding off into the sunset to live the rest of their lives cured of their problems was a nice one to have, but simply highly unlikely to happen in reality. This ending fitted the whole story much better. Living with the problems, but finding a way to overcome them together and with the love of family and friends. It was good though to see that Charlie had also emerged from his private world.
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I wasn't expecting an epilogue, so was delighted to see this appear. Am not sure I'm quite so happy having read it. But on reflection to end this way is probably more realistic than to end on a happy note. So, congratulations to you for being brave enough to do that.
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Fragment Eleven: Layers
Ivor Slipper commented on ColumbusGuy's story chapter in Fragment Eleven: Layers
Nothing is ever simple. -
If you're a Windows use - watch out!
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As you've surmised CG, there is something fishy here!
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Thank you! Coincidences are strange things for sure. Now, the question is - do I wait for another set of prompt words?
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I hoped that the ending would give scope for thought.
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When @Sam Wyer said 'there are plenty of possibilities' I don't think he was referring to names.
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Possibilities are good. Now it's a question of what I can do with them...
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Glad you're intrigued, Sam. I don't think it I destined to be a very long story.
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Appreciate the comment dughlas - thanks.
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tsk, tsk or perhaps, tusk, tusk
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Ah, but is it Tyler? And while you're pondering that I'm sure you can also imagine a small stuffed toy. Here you go: https://www.amazon.co.uk/s?k=stuffed+elephant+key+ring&ref=nb_sb_noss
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Thanks Chris. Seems I need to get writing...
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Thanks Tonyr. A slap on the back and a kick on the shin??
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I have now added Chapter 2 to 'No Anchovies' incorporating Prompt 777. https://gayauthors.org/story/ivor-slipper/no-anchovies/2
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The Sting I started to walk away when he spoke again. “It won't be the first time, dad ...” ---------- Although I'd spoken to the kid as I passed him, I had no intention of starting a conversation with him. I'd assumed from the way he was dressed and just standing there at that time of the evening, he was looking to be picked up. I was definitely not into kids even though I was gay. Besides, he could even be a police plant – I'd heard they did such thing
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Good point! I guess you've managed to worm your way into my affection.
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Always wondered who the rotten apple was at GA
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I guess this was a Right Triangle, or am I being obtuse in saying that?
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I enjoyed your interesting use of the prompts.
