Ivor Slipper
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I suspect this is going to get Yuli's goat.
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Firework are about to explode into the night sky
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Does that extend as far as ghoulash?
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I sense they are about 'to boldly go...'
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What a Difris a day makes in the Cooee perhaps? And as for that alien Viagra!!
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I sense it is all going far too smoothly at present...
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On this occasion am happy to be an 'in patient' as opposed to impatient.
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Evidently not the right ring
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The adventure begins...
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I am puzzled that the story with the 2nd highest number of views at 65000+ is a single chapter story. Even more so when I look at the actual story and it shows a figure of just over 2000. How can such a difference be possible I wonder?
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I goofed It's Skwish not Swish...
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At least it is going to be Swish not Swoosh ;-)
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Why are these words in my head now? "See you later alligator, in a while crocodile." Don't tell me Haley's Comet is going to appear in this story
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Alas, poor Yuli
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That would probably also explain the 'tripping' of an opponent. Definitely a yellow card offence and perhaps worthy of a red one. Of course for that to happen it would have had to be spotted by the referee, but had he done so then the try would also be disallowed. Apart from that, am enjoyable romp.
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With Damien as the joker in the pack I guess
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Damien with a sword!!!
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Gus has grown balls! James' are also now growing due to bruising.
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Don't you mean he's got his fookin hands full?
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The seed has been sown.
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'Unhappy' was not really the right word. I guess the idea of them riding off into the sunset to live the rest of their lives cured of their problems was a nice one to have, but simply highly unlikely to happen in reality. This ending fitted the whole story much better. Living with the problems, but finding a way to overcome them together and with the love of family and friends. It was good though to see that Charlie had also emerged from his private world.
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I wasn't expecting an epilogue, so was delighted to see this appear. Am not sure I'm quite so happy having read it. But on reflection to end this way is probably more realistic than to end on a happy note. So, congratulations to you for being brave enough to do that.
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Fragment Eleven: Layers
Ivor Slipper commented on ColumbusGuy's story chapter in Fragment Eleven: Layers
Nothing is ever simple. -
If you're a Windows use - watch out!
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As you've surmised CG, there is something fishy here!
