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A fantastic opening to a series. The book has a lot of interesting twists, and plot points that make you want to know about the world at large. Has a great ending that can lead to further stories.
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As a final chapter goes, it sets the tone for the ending well. Having Keith bring Damien out of Coma was a good use of Psychic powers. Stepping out into the abyss at the end leaves one to wonder what the future holds. Good work.
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The chapter was interesting, but like others have said the toilet scene seemed out of place. Aside from that, I did enjoy it.
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I like Keith. He seems like a very good character. I also notice you like the Arthurian Legends a lot. This being a second project you used them.
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Yet another interesting chapter.
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Fantastic chapter. Love the religious twist.
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Awesome action, and a very dramatic fight scene. Loved it.
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Great first chapter. Damien and Marc both seem really cool. The way aggressive Veronica was off-putting. On-ward!
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Ok. Both of these are on the practice list.
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I definitely will be looking it up, when it comes out.
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Both poems are great. I liked the visuals you presented in both. As for the blog itself, @AC Benus is a marvelous poet and author. GA should be proud to have him here. I haven't seen the new checklist, but I did try the Tanka prompt before, and well it was a dumpster fire.
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*Patiently awaiting an update to this epic Danish Story*
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I found this on Imagur as part of a meme dump. Posted as a Status Update, but posting here as well just in case:
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This was a fantastic story. As someone that struggles with Bipolar, Depression, and Anxiety, I must say the Author hit this one out of the park. The characters are entertaining and are very realistic. While, football (real football, not soccer) is not really my sport, I found the sports atmosphere well researched and portrayed. The main character and a supporting character were both ones I could relate too.
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