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Brayon

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  1. Brayon

    Wrong Footed

    Excellent story, tim. Loved how you used your idiom.
  2. A war rages in the Barony of Branister. After the Barony was invaded by Archduke Listerian, he installed a puppet King upon the Branister throne. Noble houses have risen up in a rebellion, and this is just one of many tales of the war.
  3. Thanks, Dughlas. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
  4. Quite true. More will be revealed soon about the maternal grandparents, and hopefully, it will shine a light on things. Thanks for reading, and for the feedback.
  5. Thank you for reading, Fae Briona. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
  6. Brayon

    Fourth Week

    Yet again, I am at a loss, to describe how I feel about your words. Fantastic work tim.
  7. Thank you for reading, and for the feedback, Bndmetl. I'm glad you loving the story. Chapter five is coming along, and it's been emotional for me to write. I think you all will love it.
  8. The muesli, but your response answered my question. Thanks, tim.
  9. It sounds like overnight oats, that a friend of mine has been pushing me to try. So, are they creamy, milky, or more like a cold oatmeal in the morning?
  10. Thanks, jp. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Adam is doing the best that he can, and I hope I am portraying it successfully.
  11. Thank you so much for reading this story, Kitt, and for the feedback. I really appreciate it.
  12. They are independent. Have been for the time I've been here at least. Page views for the Main Story page are higher from someone reading the description, and saying "Nah, not for me," and leaving.
  13. Both are on the list for possible inclusion at some point.
  14. Ah, cool. They became the Carolina Hurricanes. Here's a tidbit. The Whalers former owners tried to get a team to St. Pete, before Phil and Tony got it for Tampa.
  15. Thank you for reading, and for the feedback, FanLit. That is Adam's fear. That the old dismissed case will be used out of context, and Rob will be taken away. It's another wedge between Adam and Tibot. Yeah, one of my closest friends was in foster care for over a year, and he had some bad experiences there. He told me he thought about taking his own life, about a week after he went in. So, a wee bit of real-life perspective.
  16. Brayon

    Where I'm at

    Prayers and positive thoughts to you, and your family. I hope all goes well for your Mother and Brother.
  17. Thanks for reading, Tonyr. Chapter 5 is in the works now.
  18. Thanks for reading, Bft. There's something going on with the Grandparents. So, it's very possible they already have one.
  19. Thanks for reading, mfa607! I'm a Tampa Native, so there's going to be a lot in this story. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
  20. Thanks for reading, Mitchelll! I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
  21. Thank you, Daddydavek. Yeah, playoff Hockey is affecting me a just a little. LOL. It's not really a hockey story, but hockey was a good vehicle for some Father/Son bonding.
  22. Thanks for reading Zeke for the comment, and feedback!
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