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Damn it... someone is cutting onions... Excellent work as always, tim. I love how you started and ended with the diary entry.
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TC2 - Chapter 4: Rob’s First Thursday in Tampa
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 4: Rob’s First Thursday in Tampa
Almost ready for the editors. There are some parts, I'm trying to make plausible. -
Excellent as always my friend.
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Yes, Food Bytes, Again -- molly's Update
Brayon commented on mollyhousemouse's blog entry in Mollyhousemouse's Stash
I was planning on trying the Overnight Oats, after reading tim's blog, and we just haven't been to the store yet to get the ingredients. But, it's on the list for when we go.- 26 comments
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I loved these characters, and I'm glad to see that you decided to expand their world. The writing flowed well, the dialogue was good. Excellent all around.
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Thanks, Agent D (International Spy). I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and thank you for reading and for the feedback.
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Thanks for reading, Deville. I'll revisit them later on sometime.
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Excellent poems, tim. April 29th's was a nice reflection. Very thoughtful after the event of last week. April 30's, however, I see it differently from the other commenters. It reminds me of relationships. Notably, an old relationship, that may have resparked, and you're giving it another go... until to you find the spectors from the past still there, and call it off again. Hoping for a new relationship with someone more trustworthy.
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No offense taken, but it took me a moment to get what you said. LOL Reading comments when you first wake up. Thank you for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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Thanks for reading, and for the feedback, Dolores. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Thanks, Caz! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Thanks, miss molly. I will defiantly revisit this genre in the future.
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When Pigs Fly, A Lich Dies
Brayon commented on comicfan's story chapter in When Pigs Fly, A Lich Dies
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Thanks, Renee. I really appreciate the feedback, and I'm glad you liked it. It was fun to write. I think I may need to do another steampunk piece in the future.
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Thanks, Puppilull. I'm just getting into that genre and had just read Dreamspinner Press' Steampunk anthology when I got the idiom. I had to go that route. LOL. Yes, it was very fortunate for Lord Tillerson to get into the position he did with the King. When the opportunity arises, sometimes, you have to go for it.
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You should have seen me...
Brayon commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in You should have seen me...
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Excellent story!
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Great Story, Agent D! I loved it.
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Thanks for reading, Comicfan. The other story was part of the Forbidden Love Newsletter game that Cia did for Valentine's Day. I had a lot of people ask for a follow up on it, but that story ended with no way to continue. So, I felt this was a good way to link the two, but at the same time, the first one isn't really needed.
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Thanks for reading and for the feedback, jp. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Thanks, Mac! Steampunk was the first thing that popped into my head, and it felt right. I appreciate the feedback.
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Thanks, Reader1810. People wanted more of Edwin and Owen, but their story was done. This way, they can inspire others.
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Thank you, tim. It was very fun to write. I think I'll need to revisit Even and Andrew sometime in the future.
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Excellent story Mac. I've had this procedure done a couple of times, and it does sound like a large crack going off when it does. Great use of the idiom!
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