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Awesome conclusion to the Angel and Imp storyline. Absolute adorable.
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YES!!!! Angel and Imp. Loved the ending to this chapter, and cant wait to read the next one.
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Thank you! I was trying to be playful with this short, and I am glad it came across like that. -
My favorite memory was in the 6th grade. I was bullied and teased relentlessly and was jumped by six kids coming out of the lunch room. I snapped and fought back. After I was taken to the Principle's Office, I wait for her to come down. When she got there, she told off the staff that wanted to suspend me. "He's been bullied, beat on, teased, and has reported it, and you all of you have done nothing. I'm glad he stood up for himself, and if he's going to be punished, then give it to me. I'll do it for him." I'll never forget that.
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“Who gave you the right to read my journal?” Gavin asked in a stern voice. “You did, last night,” was the reply from Kyle. “I was drunk! You’re using it against me,” Gavin said while narrowing his eyes, and approached Kyle. Kyle looks over the edge of the journal book, and smiles some, “Sit down. Besides, you read mine last night. Also, I wouldn’t call this a journal. It seems more like a book of shadows. I knew you dabbled in Witchcraft, but I didn’t think you were this serious abou
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I went and looked at her Album, and I agree with the second Russ and En pic. Jacob 2 is awesome!
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This was a great story. I love the pairing between the characters, it fits them perfectly. Also, I totally see Impie and Angie breaking all the damn rules and becoming a couple.
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Granted, but it's in a language you don't speak, and no subtitles. I wish I could loose some weight.
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Family loyalty is everything
Brayon commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Family loyalty is everything
What a Royal Ass! I can believe Henry would do that to his Sons and Daughter but would have hoped he wouldn't have made a public spectacle of it. So glad for Kristen, and now just gotta wait for the next installment. -
As someone that has experienced the pain of rejection from Family, I can say Evan is spot on. Loved this chapter, and I'm "man enough" to admit, there were a few tears.
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Tor better not break Kristian's heart. And vice versa. I can see a good pairing there like the twins and their future husbands. Though, it seems all three of the siblings may need counseling. When Russ was noticing Chris' way of taking over, so to speak, and how everyone else was deferring to him, it seems to me that all of them may have "daddy issues."
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Granted: But your fridge dies, and all the food is spoiled now. Granted: You're now bone white, and allergic to the sun. I wish I knew what to fix for lunch.
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Thank you as well, for reading. I appreciate the feedback, and it helps me too. Also, in my Blog, there is a Character Profile of Aeris. Check it out!
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Act 2 – Prelude to War Part 2
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in Act 2 – Prelude to War Part 2
Thank you! Working on Story chapter 10 currently, and will get it to a Beta/Editor asap. -
I want a Tor! Another great chapter. I've been enjoying this story a lot, and it's really making me miss a couple of old friends. Russ reminds me of one of them.
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Very lovely chapter. Russ finally got what he wanted. I'm happy their love is growing.
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Love the chapter. Again seeing the twins interact was great. Having Chris and Jacob becoming fast friends is also awesome. I love the idea of them getting a house together.
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Confidential conversations II
Brayon commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Confidential conversations II
The Twinbond, Twin Time, and the Twin Talks, and really making me wish I had a twin. This chapter was pure gold. I also love that both Twins are fairly the same, even with the sensitive button. -
I'm still getting a gay vibe from the Twin Uncles we're yet to meet. I feel the talk between Evan and Russ was awesome. I love how they interact with each other. It's defiantly character building.
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Confidential Conversations I
Brayon commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Confidential Conversations I
Wow... I love how the twins act together. Excellent chapter. Now, I'm addicted to this story. LOL -
Planned and unplanned meetings
Brayon commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Planned and unplanned meetings
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Yet another excellent chapter. I love that Jacob's parents are behind him, and Russell. And that they wanted the World tour, so Russell wouldn't have issues with Danish Immigration. I practically squealed (LOL) reading about the other set of Twins. As Scientists are discovering now, that being Gay is genetic, it's making me feel that the two "confirmed bachelors" are gay themselves. (Granted that might be my Southern side projecting there. As Confirmed Bachelor is another way ti say, "He's gay, not it the closet, but not advertising it as well.")
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Thanks! My search-fu wasn't working that well when I started this thread. Loving all the suggestions.
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There is a lot of growth for Russell in this Chapter. Plus the Gays everywhere. LOL. Flowed well, and was very good. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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I know I just started reading, and there are several more chapters ahead of me. But my speculation is Russell's dad in a Major (with a capital M) Closetcase! The early signs point towards him being so. Also, I agree with what Jacob is saying about getting married so soon. Though, I completely understand why they are doing it. Interesting to note, I know someone that met their partner, and in five months were married. They are still together twenty years later.
